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WCL: Discord in Darkness Illustrated by Dualmask WCL: Discord in Darkness Illustrated by Dualmask
So I did this thing…trying to work out how to tell WCL’s story sometime within my lifetime with visual support. A comic book isn’t really feasible for a story that’s spanning over 100 prose chapters and counting, not by myself, not with everything else I have going on, so this is something I tried. I need to pick a few better images (not feeling that Faust-leaping-with-scythe image at all but I slapped it there for filler’s sake) but I’m liking the overall format.

Some may have read this before (it's been slightly edited since I published the prose book on Amazon), but now I'm trying something else. Maybe with some tweaks it can be the perfect format for a series of small storybooks.

WEAPON Combat League © :icondualmask:
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Opening paragraph does a good job of letting the reader know what's up. You know the world, players, scenario. Drawings really enhance the story, and don't count as "filler". Story is smooth as well as the pacing; doesn't feel rushed. IF you decide to add more pictures, I'm sure it will enhance the story, but just don't add in filler drawings. Please let them have a good impact on the story like the current artwork does.

Overall, the story has a very good beginning, middle, and end, but you know there's more to come. Can't wait to read more stories like this from you.
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DreMalone Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Reminds me of "Death Strikes at Midnight and Three" by O'Neil and Rogers. Love comic prose stories!
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! I didn't know where to look for stories similar to this but I felt there must be a middle ground for writers who want to support a story with images without going all the way into comics. Now I have something to look toward for inspiration.
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DreMalone Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Do a search for comic prose on DA and you'll see how much is on here. Queenie-Chan is one of my faces on here.
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Randommode Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Nice recap the logo was great too 
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Dualmask Featured By Owner May 20, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for checking it out!
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adekii Featured By Owner May 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The light novel format seems to work quite well! I can't believe I didn't notice "Faust Raven"s name until now.  It will be interesting to see where the story goes from here, if you continue with this format!
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Dualmask Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! I enjoyed putting it together and I'm sure I will continue at some point.
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