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Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Don't use that beam without a suit- OH MY GOD - her clothes fly off! Wheeee LOL kidding kidding. XD 

It was really well done. I would say tho, and I guess this is okay it's not in comic form, but do try to cut back on the wording on certain parts even in a script, you may feel like you are "dumbing it down" but honestly a lot of things are implied then to over explain it. 
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Besides, there is a reason he's rambling...
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Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Oh he's trying to buy time? 
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
;) It is a robbery...
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah right now I'm just copying and pasting directly from the novel, but I do need to go back and edit it so that it's tighter. It doesn't help that I'm working from an older copy of the book, one that precedes a lot of editing I've already done. But I just want to get the images down for now--the text can easily be changed since I'm making sure to keep the PSDs safe this time.
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Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
I understand man 
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