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Jet Dancer: Dance 1 by Dualmask Jet Dancer: Dance 1 by Dualmask
Here is the first cover to my first Jet Dancer comic book, currently available on

Amazon Kindle

and

Gumroad

for those who don't want to deal with Kindle.

Also now available on

IndyPlanet www.indyplanet.us/comics/11204…

in print and digital formats!
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:iconarjayeff:
As usual, I love your color work. The lighting seems to be smooth and consistent. The perspective really makes sense to me, given the character and her abilities. Additionally, I like the title/logo. It has an 80's Futuristic feel, if that makes any sense.

The only constructive piece of criticism I can offer is something I have been guilty of myself, time and time again. I think adding a background would have added more of a sense of realism to this piece. When I look at this artwork I think "Wow, she looks cool. I wonder where she is leaping from or where she is leaping to." With this being a cover of a book, I don't think adding a few details to the landscape (even faintly) wouldn't take away from the skillful artwork you have as your main focus.

Keep in mind, I am not an expert. I just know what I like.
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animatedtdot Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
dope
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! Hope you pick up the book. :)
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:iconchizel-man:
Chizel-Man Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All man...This is amazing news Jonathan man! I know I'm like a century to late on the congrats but this is great news to me. That cover really pops too. I'll have to get this on ComiXology for sure.

How did it feel when you first held the printed book in your hands man? I need that feeling:nod:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I must admit, having my own printed comic in my hand feels great. It's also something to learn from. I have all sorts of ideas for future works. I hope you get it and tell me exactly what you think...don't hold back. As my first self-published comic, I really want to know what folks think of it. :)
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BadEnoughDude Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Finally on Comixology!  :iconawwyissplz:

*buys a copy!*
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yay!:w00t:
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:iconwhazizname:
Whazizname Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014   General Artist
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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hulkdaddyg Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Professional General Artist
Gonna get this in about a week!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Can't wait to hear what you think of it! :D
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KennyGordon Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   General Artist
Gonna have to pick this up on pay day.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I'm eager to know what you think of it! :)
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:iconadamalonzo22:
adamalonzo22 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats man that's awesome! I hope you go the distance with your comic!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! It's hard resisting all the other things I want to do, but I'm trying hard to stay the course!
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:iconadamalonzo22:
adamalonzo22 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hear ya man!
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finalknight0x3 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
U just keep getting better
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
She looks great man you did it! Excellent cover! 
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! It was kind of thrown together but I thought a shot from the interior would make the whole thing more cohesive. :)
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
XD I still liked it 
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:iconwhazizname:
Whazizname Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014   General Artist
Cool!!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconadekii:
adekii Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very eye-catching cover!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I was worried about it at first. Making functional covers is hard!
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AMTRAK Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Great cover.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconamtrak:
AMTRAK Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
You're welcome.
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