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Another one of those images that I just had to get out of my system. Popped in my head the other day and I couldn't rest until I got it out.

It's Fallen Wing (a.k.a. Farah Wallace), Jet Dancer's arch nemesis, and it doesn't look like the fight went very well for Jet...

I wanted the flames to look intense so I tried a few new things, but I'm not sure how effective it all is. Crits welcome.

Hope you dig!

Fallen Wing :icondualmask:
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Great work man!
My critique: the flames are white hot but they lose something because there is very little light from the flames on Fallen Wing. She's in the middle of the flames but she's not lit up.

also, i have to use 100 words so here are a bunch over random words that will make absolutely no sense but i have to use them so here goes... digital pack snake yellow goals trolley box trash rain wife mouse air hammer stock cold way fresh tank green sample neat in out up down over left right office wrinkle and today.
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LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Great work SIR! Yet I feel bad 4 her!
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Jaquier Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey! I didn't notice this until now. Awesome O_O :clap: :+fav:
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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wbd Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the work on the fire here- the brightness works well. By that I mean the central bright white feels real to me, and leads to the color cast on her looking correct. I like your use of a strong firelight beneath her to set the mood for the image, and her expression and pose suit it well.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! This is another one that just kind of occurred to me as I was going about my day, and I just had to get it out. I'm really happy with it. It was great practice on my lighting, which I want to improve at.
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Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Wow dude!!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:bow:
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ricardoredway Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
awesome
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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:iconnate-the-grease-monk:
cool work mate, i like it
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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BloodyMess-VaoT Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Poor Jet, I hope she has a spare foot :<
The flames look cool.
Are the two sisters or something like that?
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Heh heh...or something like that. ;) Glad you like it!
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RedWingsDragon Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Awesome work here
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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RODCOM1000 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
I dig it! The lighting and the colors sell the fire effect.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Rod!
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ShadowLeviathanZero Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Man that's some awesome work you have here as always!! You have given me an idea for a character I have been working on. As always sir you have done another amazing piece of work!! :wow:
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! I'm interested in seeing what this inspires you to create.
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ShadowLeviathanZero Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Just a female character I have been writing about since my days in college. I actually created her in DCU Online but when I saw Fallen Wing I saw the another way to draw her now. Her name is Magma Snapdragon. She's half fire elemental/pyrokinetic, half dragon. She has about three forms: Human, dragon hybrid, and magma elemental dragon. Her first form is not a problem since she is just a human and the dragon hybrid is pretty much where Fallen Wing comes into play because of the way you did her wings but Magma's wing will have magma look to them which is kinda tricky for me in a way. When I saw the way you did your flames I had ideas rush to my head about combining that into her third form which is the magma elemental dragon. I will post the story up on DA one day because I did about three different versions of her story. She has a pretty intense story that mainly focused on her hatred for her father, Magmus, but this is different in each version of her story I wrote. In one version, he falls in love with Magma's mother and then leaves her because he did not want a daughter only a son. In another version, he is not around during Magma's upbringing because of a war that was going on for almost 15 years and Magma's mother dies from a mysterious illness that had no cure. She hated the fact he could protect everyone else but he was never around to protect the woman he loved...her mother. In the third version, she has a brother named Ifryt who got all the attention from her father. Yeah, she is something else but I want to finally draw Magma Snapdragon. I am kinda done with writing about her now but I think I will pick a story and draw the characters for it and do something with it. Well, that was a mouthful huh? Well, once again sir you have inspired me to do so much. Once I get to a scanner I will put up the traditional version of Magma and then I will either color her in illustrator or photoshop. See ya later.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
That's quite a mouthful indeed! Again, I'm glad my simple work can be a source of inspiration for you. Keep creating!
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janvill Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
cool. fantastic work.:)
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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thebeastart Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
nice work
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it!
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EchoWing Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Egads. She's got an impressive design.
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I'm getting closer to putting her to good use.
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ebony-chan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Awesome!:-)
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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ebony-chan Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Anytime my friend. :-)
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J-Styles75 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
awesome work :)
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot!
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J-Styles75 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
you're welcome :)
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adekii Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn! She looks badass! And "hella" dangerous! I love the way you did the flame effects in this piece!
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! That's what I was going for. Fallen Wing is one crazy lady. :D
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Dramira-Official Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
She's awesome! Love the lighting by fire. I really like this. Very intense and effective if you ask me.
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Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I worked pretty hard on it. :)
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