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ArikarinLair Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great entry!
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FossAngelPhoenix Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Why am I thinking dirty things when I see this? ewe
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Dthorin Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As you should :D ;)
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FossAngelPhoenix Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Good cx
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TCPolecat7 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Points for a cute pic and a cute theme but...  yeah, you know it's coming, a critique.

1) You're starting to make the heads and upper body larger than anything from the waist down. If it's intentional, no worries, but if not, you'll need to focus on the fact that the lower body is actually much longer than you're rendering it. Little stuff like that creeps in as you draw, especially if you focus most of your attention in other areas. This does make the hips look short and the legs stunted...
2) The girl lying down (Kaat I believe the write up says it is) has her neck broken in that pose. You couldn't acheive a 90 degree angle like that. 45 and a little more is a strain, but 90 would break the neck.
3) Minor issue, but how would the ribbons be possibly secured to see the girl's individual butt cheeks there?
4) The "package" on the ground might run afoul of the more sensitive types here on DA. They pull any pic with a rendered "sex toy" on it. I've had it happen to me, so fair warning.

Anyway, fun pic! Don't take my nitpicking as a sign I didn't like it. This is a good picture, ya!

- Polecat
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Dthorin Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe i always appreciate your critique ^^ they do help.

im glad you enjoy the picture despite the few things wrong with it ^^
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