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The Shadow Shard Page 48 by dSana The Shadow Shard Page 48 by dSana


Finally, Page 48!

Those of you who've read The Journal may see that I am not following the storyline closely: what Twilight is reading to Flurry is a short, simplified version of the Heart chapter fit for the youngest audience; the continuation that Spike "sees" is something different altogether - more will follow on the next page. If you haven't read this book, don't worry, only my comic version is important.

(Also, I would like to remind you that Celestia (and Luna by proxy) are Flurry's grandaunts, because Celestia has adopted Cadance as her niece in one of the chapter books.)


PS: It has come to my attention that last panel wasn't clear - talking to Princesses is not Spike, but another dragon, owner of the Heart. I have changed his eye colour & colour-coded his dialogue. Hope that helps.


My Patrons could read this page two days ago. Big thanks Heart  for your generous support, folks!

:icondeathstroke616: :iconkallenin:  :iconpony-berserker:  :iconyodajax10: :iconwobwobwobniar: :iconblongq921:  Tytell   Gancis   Heart 

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:iconscholar57:
Scholar57 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
This isn't something I haven't seen or heard of before.  Sometimes stories are altered to give a more "preferred" ending or outcome.  Either because it's too scary, too serious, or casts someone in a bad light, a story can be changed.  A comforting lie to cover up a unwanted truth.

I bet Sombra is probably laughing.  He didn't have to change anything; he just had to let the truth be heard.
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TheAngelux22 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2018  Student General Artist
Oh... Ohhhhhh!
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puglous Featured By Owner Edited Aug 3, 2018
Just a little thing to note going forwards...this is not a criticism, but most people don't realize this: when people hear "thy" and "thou" they think it sounds very regal and formal.  But in reality, it was actually the opposite: it was informal version "you" and "your."  

So you would say "Your shoes are untied, sir."

But "Thy shoes art untied, buddy."

Paradoxical, isn't it?  People today tend to use it wrong, and flip it around.  For example, in Star Wars Darth Vader asks the Emperor "What is thy bidding?"  Which would be like saying "What can I do for you, buddy?"  That would probably get him killed.

Not sure this distinction matters, or whether you were unaware of it.  Formal or informal could work in this dialogue.  Actually, I think informal makes this scene more powerful, because it implies they have less respect for the dragon.  But regardless, it's an interesting thing to note.
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marinus18 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 4, 2018
It came across to make as just old fashioned. It does actually communicate a certain level of distance.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Well, that's certainly interesting! I didn't know. However more then regal, I wanted to show it's old, as in 1000 years ago - this is why dragon also uses it.
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marinus18 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 4, 2018
Well actually things like thy are indeed less polite but they are not informal. Instead they are more commanding and would be something a parent says to a child. It's sort of weird therefore for Spike to use it that way. For Luna it makes sense for her to use that tone towards the ponies of equestria as they are below her. However she wouldn't use it towards her sister who is an equal.
It's sort of similar how a mother's title changes from "mommy" to "mom" to "mother" as a child grows older.

Also using Thy towards someone above you like for example a child using it towards a parent is considered very rude. Kind of like that the child is challenging the parent's authority and suggesting the parent is beneath them.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
It's not Spike who uses it; it's the other dragon. And it's to empathise it happened in the past; not to confirm the status of the characters.
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puglous Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
I figured.  Just thought you might want to know going forwards.

I've always found this fact so amusing, because we think people from the past sound so primmed up and formal, but if they heard us talk they would think exactly the same thing.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, it is interesting so thanks for sharing! I know this is all "fake" old English anyway. The real thing is pretty much unintelligible!
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:iconmarinus18:
marinus18 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
Well it's a gradual thing. It's just a matter of how far back in time you want to go.
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Shredder1004 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018
Ooooooh boy, Spike and Twilight are gonna both hit bottom before they begin climbing back up aren’t they?
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Yeeep.
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018
So that's Spike's big sister? 
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Brother!
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
Then why would HE say HE'S trying to hatch the egg? I thought that was a female dragon's job(maybe I'm just being chauvinist...).
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
He's not trying to hatch it with his flame, but desperately looking for a way to hatch it any way possible. There will be a follow up on this.
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
Of course. :)
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:iconthewayfaringwanderer:
Emoticon - Rainbow Dash Nail Bite <- Pretty much sums up my thoughts ;P.  The page is just dripping with tension and unease!  Looking forward to the next one.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
:D :D well, it's up! Hope you enjoy it as well. I seriously can't wait to draw the conclusion of this small arc.
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:iconpuglous:
puglous Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018
Man, these comics really bring out Celestia's twisted side.  Maybe twisted in the wrong word, but you know what I mean.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Heheh. I know what you mean ^^
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Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018
Oh! This is getting VERY Good now! I can't wait to see more!
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Aw, thank you :> New page is up!
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Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
YAY! X3
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:iconeliander:
eliander Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018
Okay this story has gone from a little creepy to fairly disturbing.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Ouch. I hope it's not too disturbing, tho.
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:iconeliander:
eliander Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2018
I can't say whether or not I accept the whole royal hostage thing. But it seems as though not only take back something that was never the ponies to begin with I'm still not certain I'm not going to question how the heart came into Pony Hooves to begin with at this time but to not only Force the one who's took it from them to give it back and to take the last unborn child of the dragon from whom the heart came as a hostage that is fairly Calais to begin with. I'm guessing that she and Luna attempted to hatch the egg several times winding failure his why she made it test for extremely gifted unicorns that she saw and her school to teach them to accept failure. And on the off-chance that one of them manage to hatch the Wayward egg and her custody she could use the hatchling once they reach adulthood is a bargaining chip to prove the royal sisters Goodwill to the dragon whom they had to beat to retrieve the stolen hurt in the first place. Honestly so much more like a black mask / Lex Luthor since I doubt if half the people reading this with know who black mask is depiction of Celestia then else. And that's before we get into Sombra knowing about this from the get-go I his shadow the narration to spike
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dSana Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Fair enough! 

At the end of the day, they had to make sure Crystal Empire won't perish and Crystal ponies won't die; but asking the Royal Sisters about their version of this story would be a good thing to do.

As for the inspiration, I was looking at Ned Stark and Theon Greyjoy. The latter was taken away as a child to ensure House Greyjoy will not rebel again, but  Stark family treated him fairly and gave him education, family to grow up with and proper status.

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eliander Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2018
I must say I find myself wanting to know what's going on from the royal sisters point of view now. Also I find myself wondering if Celestia contacted the dragon after Spike was hatched. I'm sure she has a way to
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
I hope I will be able to show this part of the story.
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RupertBlueFox Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whew! This keeps getting more interesting! X3

And pray tell, that egg could be Spike's relative of sorts. But I could be wrong.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
I'm glad it's still interesting! More fun coming soon...
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:iconpuglous:
puglous Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018
Spike's "relative"...are you serious, dude?
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:iconspamer921:
spamer921 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018
dude light purple egg with darker purple spots; we saw that egg back in season one on cronicles of friendship and then again in season 5 the cutie re-mark
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:iconrupertbluefox:
RupertBlueFox Featured By Owner Edited Jul 26, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh. Sorry... *facepalm*
Guess I wasn't paying attention. It's been a while since watching S1. Mind can go bad at times.
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dSana Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
^^
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
*nods*
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EfernoTheDragon Featured By Owner Edited Jul 24, 2018  Student General Artist
Wow. If what that dragon say is true, then I'm starting to have mixed feelings towards the ponies and their actions towards dragons.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Some situationsare just very complicated.
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:iconspamer921:
spamer921 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2018
Holy guacamole this went into even darker implications i could think about it!!!!!!!!!!

and i love it
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :>
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Junnosuke-kazuki Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2018
uh...oh......bad.....reallly baddd....
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Yesss.

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fotland42 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2018
That doesn't mean that the ponies of the Crystal Empire aren't in danger without it. You can't just steal it, even if it is your mother's heart. If you want to do it right, so ponies don't just come after you to get it back, you have to do it civilized. And with the way the Crystal Empire depends on the Heart, you have to negotiate.
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:icondsana:
dSana Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
As usual, there are two sides to every story and no easy solutions.
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:iconmugenseiryuu:
MugenSeiRyuu Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2018
Alternative is taking it back by force and burninating everyone while doing so.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2018
Pastel ponies have an annoying habit of banding together to take down large threats. I cannot in good conscience advise this dragon to open that can of worms.
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GoldandSliverDragon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2018
So the crystal heart is Spike's dragon mother heart? And here comes Spikezilla
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