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Critiques and suggestions pls by DriRose Critiques and suggestions pls by DriRose
this is page two. everything needs to go, but i just wanted any suggestion
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ittybittysheip Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
okay so there's this lady and siela is like omg! run run run, slip! and doom. i like where this is going- but i would cut the panels down, so they are more descriptive

panel one : lady glaring at siela
panel two : siela looking back at lady still glaring
panel three: siela running towards ice (but you can see all of siela, not just her feet)
panel four: siela on the ground.

eh. i'm probably the last to critique panels, i'm awful at drawing them. TTwTT
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DriRose Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
THANK YOU. If you don't mind, I can show you the first page and you can tell me what you think there too x.x
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ittybittysheip Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
i would love to see it. <3
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