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for frozengem's contest!!!! :D
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Honestly this looks really good, the line art is amazing! Its very nice and smooth, the highlights on the ring, neck, and horns look great, but there are a few things that can use some work.

The style of the eye clashes with the overall design. If you drew an eye the fitted the style it would make this a better piece overall. The shading looks good but I can tell you didn't spend much time blending the colors in. The blur tool if used correctly would be excellent for this.

Now this might be me being "Picky" but the teeth look strange and not very consistent, I would recommend studying teeth, fangs, mouths. (Here are some examples: www.deviantart.com/tiffashy/ar… www.deviantart.com/chickenbusi… www.deviantart.com/mollish/art… )


You have a lot of skills right now, so keep drawing! You will get even better as time goes on. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

-Hank