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HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P42-43

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H.P. Lovecraft's The Tomb (for beginning readers).

Pages 42-43

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DantesParadisioHobbyist Artist
Dammit Hitler. Always ruining peoples fun.
kongregator-01's avatar
"had took hold" is improper grammar – "had taken hold" is proper, but breaks verse.

Suggestions:
"just what MAN-ner of MAD-ness took HOLD ov-er ME"

Your spy's right had has 6 fingers.
junskee's avatar
not sure if you can still read this but the spy's alleged "6th" finger is the side of the palm. not a finger. and why the hell correct each page? can't enjoy it as it is? grammar nazi? peace! :D
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Omny87Hobbyist Digital Artist
Shouldn't have hired Hitler to do your spying, buddy.
Goodlyman100's avatar
i cant unsee it