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HPL's The Tomb (for beginning readers) - P16-17

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H.P. Lovecraft's The Tomb (for beginning readers).

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Wow. That's a genuinely spooky picture.
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Enjoying this so much :clap:
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This is working itself up to be something I'd be dying to have a hard copy of.
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Pan-Pan PAAAAAAAANNNNNNNN
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"…the SAME prob-lems I'D had be-FORE."
"same" is usually not stressed, and "problems" is usually "PROB-lems". The verse feels off.

Suggestion:
"and FOUND the same PROB-lems
as I'D had be-FORE"
('as' or 'that' work)
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DrFaustusAU Traditional Artist
Whoops! Older version of text was pasted in error. I missed the wood in favour of the trees. Thanks for pointing it out!
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