literature

Unrequited love

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Feverish glares
warm sugar smile
crooked
but gentle

Soft hands
feathery touch
wrinkled
but barely

Stormy oceans
thudding thunder
silent
but displaced

secret dates
muffled giggles
whispering
but serene

Sunny presence
rainbow tears
flowing
consolation

growing love
discovered source
cultivated
but with care

carmine-dead rose
blushy cheek
savory perfume
but not
for me.

Stolen heart
broken part
handful songs
still belongs
yet not to me.
Just something I wrote:
I'd like to enter :iconteenage-writers: ' twisted Valentine's contest with it :D

Wish mee luuuck and tell me what you think!!!
:love:
Update: I won the third place!! I'm so honored!
And also, I changed a few things in it, suggestions made by :icontreo-legigeo: which were so helpful, so than you again for your patience and your time and your nice comments!!!

ps: do not copy without notifying me, thanks a lot!!!

pps: i do not own the preview image, it belongs to this site: [link]
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fruitbatslyra's avatar
I really like how you wrote this, it had an almost rhythmic feel to it. You also described romance quite well, and I like all the different words used to describe it. :)