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Prelude 401 by Dreamkeepers Prelude 401 by Dreamkeepers
Vi discovers that in some stories, henchmen don't topple the way they're supposed to.
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:icondetrick456:
Wow. that was really brave and really stupid. I hope she didn't break her hand.

Pike is obviously mentally unstable, and he won't forget that.

I'm curious to know what kind of deal Vi and Anise made, and how it will affect Robert. Also, will Anise possibly hold a grudge against Vi?

I have a feeling they'll run into Pike's "people" sooner or later. Hopefully not, if they are the Neon Knives.

As always, the design and coloring of the characters are phenomenal.

Background effects and colors are superb.

Pike's grin freaks me out a little.

Great page overall, I'm ready for more.
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Fuego-fantasmal Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018
Thanks to the Spaghetti Flying Monster that there was no SJW moment. Thank you thank you thank you.:happybounce: 
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ezioauditore97 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018  Student General Artist
SJWs are annoying more than anything lol. Still though, "Losing is a learning experience... and I have just learned, I don't like to lose."-Vi
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Fuego-fantasmal Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018
Thanks for answering me. By the way, I want to say that I am of all those nonsense of the SJW. Regarding Vi, I do not care that she does not like to lose, if she can face defeat like a good character, like for example the character Gon Freecs from manga / anime HunterxHunter or other animated series (anime or not), I'll be happy.

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ezioauditore97 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018  Student General Artist
Gon's a really cool kid and a good sport who's no slouch in a fight! Hunter X Hunter is a wonderful anime. :)  Part of it's just that it's not only about her, Bobby's been beaten six ways down Sunday and the kids are destined to have more Grunn in the future so the implications of her defeat has larger ramifications than one disturbing smile and an unpleasant memory. Everybody's been having a bad day in this arc....
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Fuego-fantasmal Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2018
I do not doubt it. I hope the story does not end just being fine. Thanks for answering me. Greetings.
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ezioauditore97 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2018  Student General Artist
You're welcome! At least Mace, Bobby,and Vi all wind up away from that rather awful orphanage at some point,even if Mace had to endure Paige's death as well before that happened.
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ezioauditore97 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018  Student General Artist
No wonder she wants to kill everything in the GNS,that must have been beyond humiliating for her! I suppose neither VIolence being inflicted  (aside from more or less getting her fluffy booty handed to her for once) nor lesbian sex was on the tables for us readers,that's a slight bummer....
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Viriathus for the first time, I feel more respect on you on this day, than envy and anger, consider this a compliment, also good luck next on him.
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Lord-Kiyo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018
Went as I would expect it to.  He is a bouncer after all, and she just a kid.  And was that not the same hand she messed up from bunching the table?
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 26, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
use an object made of metal and iron the next time, even if he is a bouncer he will suffer the infury if you attack on his head.
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Tyroth-Dartvyn Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Quite surprisingly, she used her right hand on the table.
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:iconlord-kiyo:
Lord-Kiyo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018
So she messed up both hands.
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:iconezioauditore97:
ezioauditore97 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018  Student General Artist
Considering how street smart she is I'm surprised she didn't use one of her perfectly fine legs to bust his crotch although if he shrugged off a face blow who knows how he'd react.
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DEMarq Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
  Heard headed but not as dumb.
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Unkownbrony52 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
Ok that guy is one of those people to be terrified of.
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
terrified of, I prefer make it more personal for the next time if theres an another meeting.
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Unkownbrony52 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018
Either way it will be interesting.
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
yes...
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Unkownbrony52 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018
Now to play the waiting game.....
youtu.be/O0wOD9TWynM
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LambdaRebel69 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
If you think about it, punching people in the face in real life is probably like punching a brick. So of course Vi would hurt her hand!
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hDARCK14 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
raise your hand if you think Vi's going to discover her power and that guy is going to be ground zero
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LambdaRebel69 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
*swarm of hands going up*
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Rejuv1n8edChr0nic9l Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I sort of find this bouncer to be funny! Hope he appears in the main story stuff.
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Phoenix295 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
He no-selled Vi? Wh-what is he!?!
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DeathofInk Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
This guy is freaking me out.
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leinglo Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I get the feeling that Vi's leaving with a bigger grudge against Pike than Anise. Fitting, I suppose. This guy's got "villain of Prelude" written all over him. In neon blue and pink.

Also, what was the result of Vi's negotiations with Anise?
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NuvaPrime Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Student General Artist
My, he's fabulous
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Jinksa Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why does a psycho have morals? Shouldn't he be delivering the beatdown of the century for that?
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KarlosJackMcRain Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
This guy is tough for sure, but not immune. I feel like he's going to get it REALLY hard. So hard that he will probably look for all of his teeth for decades. Just speculating, this is Dave's comic after all, he knows how this is going to end.
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ZackWriter23 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
unless you have a gun.
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ZephyrLyall Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018
I guess it's just not Vi's day for punches.  Or anybody's day for anything, really.
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YaminoKitsune Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn, given how the head when backward, you can tell it was quite a punch! Hope it all goes well tho :| I HATE not happy endings!
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chadtheferret Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
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