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Maybe we should get some in-depth bios on all these characters, because how far into the prelude and already we finally learn of Vi's age. I still her to be prettier in that outfit even though it's supposed to be kinky in a way. Maybe because of the fur? I really like what's going on in the story, so keep it up! I would suggest adding some more of that lighthearted humor that makes me cringe in fangirl glee (which is good, so sorry about using the word 'cringe'). Looking closely, I can see what looks like faint pencil tracings over Vi's character. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but if it is the pencil sketchs, you might want to delete that layer once everything else has been drawn out and colored. One last thing: could you make part of a chapter in the main story consist of this same humor for comic relief?

What do you mean the bat-girl in the Neon Knives faction has wings too small for flight, they're perfect for flight compared to this girl's. What's the green bat lady's name again, in case I forgot?
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First off, Vi throwing soap in Anise's face was hilarious.

You can feel the tension building up between them. I can only imagine how this is going to play out.

This may land Bobby in even more trouble.

After all, Anise owes Pike's employers money and it's believed he's part of the Neon Knives.

I'm also interested in knowing what Vi wants Anise to find out.

The effects of the lights are pretty good. The coloring is superb.

I like the design of the buildings, kind of gives me a medieval vibe.

It's a pretty good page. I ready for the next one.
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AtoMikyykiMotA Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2018
ooo nice
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UmiEbon Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2018  Hobbyist
Anise calling Vi a "problem" is rich, coming from a bitch that's shaking down an orphaned teenager who was just trying to help her.
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Translayer Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018
YYEEEEE!!! A WET SHIRT CONEST!!!
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Unkownbrony52 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018
The ulterior motive reveals itself.
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spyrofuckingcynder Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018
^^  
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Wow, nice, If I was there and she mop my tail, I should did that before, and give her a best ultimatum and warne her about "Naresh".
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BluBoltra Featured By Owner Edited Feb 17, 2018
Really well drawn. Great job!
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Lord-Kiyo Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018
And we know what underground people do with... problems.
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
kills them.
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DeathofInk Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018
"You just have to find out a little something for me."

Hmmm, is this about the mystery surrounding the Orphanage she and Bobby became aware about I wonder?
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KarlosJackMcRain Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, she's trying her best. Let's hope things don't get messed up later.
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Combak Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018
... Huh, I don't remember seeing the last comic posted. Weird.
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KoKeiden Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What? No! Crack her skull, give her a wedgie, how she gonna do Bobby dirty like that?
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
I'm with you.
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leinglo Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wait, so Vi isn't actually there to get Bobby off the hook? What's she playing at...
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davidshadow275 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
I guess she wants to keep Bobby his job back or give his opportunity.
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Jinksa Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And guess who is going to barge in a second....Here is a tip. It will be flamboyant....
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Nod-Shadow-Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
...as a high orangutan, no less. :roll:
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ZackWriter23 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2018
well, that's what she gets for using her tail as a mop.
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