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Dreamkeepers Saga page 428 by Dreamkeepers Dreamkeepers Saga page 428 by Dreamkeepers
A series of vignette moments.  This page helped bookend the pacing, and provided character reunions without forcing the reader through 15 pages of dialogue.

Archive and more pages here:  www.dreamkeeperscomic.com/GNSa…

Maybe someday we'll do a caption contest with word balloons on this page, could be fun.    
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DEMarq Featured By Owner 6 days ago
    That mark on her chest is gonna do something.
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Rejuv1n8edChr0nic9l Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I just want to call the guy with the green hat "Andrew Spinx."
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Shad0wFL4ME Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Im picturing an immanent 'Species' scene with Tinsel
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Shad0wFL4ME Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Basic instinct* why cant i edit on mobile?
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Tonio0064 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant
We should have a caption contest on this page. It would be great!
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sc42 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018
I get that you did it like this for brevity's sake, but I actually find this slightly annoying. You see this pattern a lot in fiction: characters get split up and they independently encounter various significant events, and they would actually benefit greatly from being able to communicate with each other while it's all happening, but due to circumstances they can't. So then when they finally reunite, they of course want to tell each other all about what happened, and I very much want to see how the other characters react to this, but then the author decides to skip it all because they feel it is redundant! I get that writing out all the dialog is not particularly interesting, but doing it like this leaves so many questions unanswered. Like, in this situation Mace would have definitely asked Bobby and Vi how the hell they ended up in the Troika. Mace would also recognize Kalei and figure out that Grunn is involved in this somehow, so he would definitely ask about that too. Maybe Igrath would explain the real purpose of Grunn's orphanage ("safehouse"). I suspect he also knows more about Mace's past since presumably they decided to put him in their "safehouse" for a reason. So many possibilities!
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Draange Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018
Took me moment to realize what was off with Tinsel. They shaved her head. Smart. 

Plus i am imagining Mace and Whip sitting up on the bed with Bobby and Vi very subtlety geting some big sibling time. 
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Draange Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Or cannot control it remotely.
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EarlMcClaw Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Shaving Tinsel is smart so long as she can't auto-grow her hair.
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zarpaulus Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Her power has a rather obvious weakness.
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akira-flame Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Just realized where bast at?
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Unkownbrony52 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018
Downtime and answers, that is what they all need.
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