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Comm 21- Midnight Duel by Dreamkeepers Comm 21- Midnight Duel by Dreamkeepers
Another commission in our long-neglected posting qeue.  
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:icondekabristmouse:
This work looking good from the point of view of of the technique and hight-looking comic strip. You working hard with color and tone. But! From the point of view of sense of the represented action of this picture not looking it is quite reasonable. Wery epic. Too close to the foul. The movements of the main character and his opponent attacing from the fountain the too difficult. Therefore look improbably. Left arm of the Hero is so short in a forearm. It was necessary to put forward an elbow a little. There can't be too strong reduction despite a difficult foreshortening of a picture. Enemy on the fontane is... falls? What does it do? Attacking back? He was pushed? Very not thought over character. I would move away him absolutely. I have idea: Give enemy a chair in his hands. It will raise a chair. Also give your hero a long cane. The hero can stick with this cane to the enemy into a stomach. If takes it for a knob and will clamp it an armpit. The moon too should be moved to the left part of the sky if you redraw the enemy on the fountain.
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scottieboy2020 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can just *hear* the fast-paced Latin music that could be played here.
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:icontakathesquirrel:
TakaTheSquirrel Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome!
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:icondreamkeepers:
Dreamkeepers Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016
Thank you@!
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:iconcharliey41725:
charliey41725 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist
Awesome
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:iconmethusulacomics:
MethusulaComics Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
awesome work!
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:iconlord-kiyo:
Lord-Kiyo Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
But I thought I saw this long ago.
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:icondreamkeepers:
Dreamkeepers Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
It's possible that the owner of the commission posted it some time ago.
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MrBryan6440 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
Me too :/
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:iconrebellinglemming:
RebellingLemming Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great timing!
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:icondemarq:
DEMarq Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
  Swashbuckling!
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:icondraange:
Draange Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016
Magnificent!
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ArtyomNikoliKondrat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
is this a repost?
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Dreamkeepers Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016
I think the owner had it up before us, so sort of.
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