First of all i really really love this piece, its very original and combined with your style its just amazing, anyways i need to get rid of stars here and there because im unsure about the upper bone, is it the beginning of flesh? or is it still a bine? than it might need to be thinner....? its just my point of view to maybe clear that out more. as well the hair might need a little more practise... It makes the head look a little too heavy on the right.
The shirt could need a bit more crinkle, even though i understand ur "simple" artstyle it more looks like paper than a shirt. What i really love are the flowers and the ribs as well the way u broke them is just great.the right arm is just lovely with the flower around it... the color scheme is amazing and perfectly chosen! the bird as well looks more like paper, could need a bit more depth unless it was what u was going for.