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Night Plague Ch. 2: Blood Bonds
On her trip to Boarda-pesth, Judy had been so preoccupied with worry over Nick that nearly all worries had crowded out of her mind. Now that he was well – or as well as might be asked – she was in an agony of worry and guilt over the Westenruts.
"What could have happened to make her sick again?" she asked, wringing her paws as she gazed out the window. The train was moving at a fine speed, but to her anxious eyes the landscape seemed to crawl past like a sloth in bleak December.
Nick made a show of thinking. "Hmm. Sickly deer in a cold, damp climate, long history of bad health… wow. We might have to call Sherlock Howles for this."
There was a loud slap as Judy's right paw connected with his arm.
"Ow," he protested. He'd forgotten how tough Judy could be when she got riled. Rubbing the sore spot, he lowered his ears. "Well, I guess I earned that."
She scowled at him bitterly before returning her gaze to the landscape.
"Carrots, I'm sorry," he offered meekly. "I didn't
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Night Plague Chapter 1: Shattered Dreams
Just a quick explanation of a few particulars. This story was originally posted as a part of the "What If?" project by Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps. I have chosen to trim out the parts pertaining to said story line and the P.I.X.A.R. machine because, for personal reasons, I felt more comfortable making this strictly a fantasy A.U. The rest of the story will remain pretty much as posted on Cimar's page, except that I will be expanding here and there on the material, explaining such historical details at the end of each chapter as I can without spoilers, and fixing a few oversights which the "test drive" in Cimar's project brought to my attention.
A little background information may be useful here. In this version, Zootopia is analogous to London in the 1800s. If you have read WANMWAD's Sherlock Holmes/Zootopia mashups, you'll have a rough idea of what I'm after. Hopefully, however, my own descriptions will suffice.
Also, having been written as part of the What If pr
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You’re such a bad boy, not trusting little old Cubis. Haven’t I been everything an evil underworld creature should be?”
Cubis, Angel Wars
After touching base with a few other residents of Sahara Square, they decided to drive over to Tundratown and see Mr. Big. The transition from blazing hot desert sand to freezing cold snow stunned Judy a little even though she expected it, but Nick pretty much took it in stride. After all, he used to make that switch with Finnick every day of the week.
Stopping at a red light, Judy took a moment to admire the goings-on in a small park just off the road. Out on a frozen pond, two young bucks – a deer and a rabbit, respectively – were trying to master ice skates with comical degrees of non-success. Not that far from them, a snowball fight between a snow leopard and a bison brought a smile to her face at the sign of recovery after the Night Howler scare. A ways off to the left, a pup who loo
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This chapter proofread by AngloFalcon. Thanks a million!
"Suspicion often creates what it suspects."
C.S. Lewis, The Screwtape Letters
Judy faxed the highlights of Ramses’ file to the city court, hoping to get a warrant on Olivia's factories and farms.
"Ah, the glamorous life of a cop," Nick quipped when she returned to the meeting room. He was leaning back in his chair with his arms folded behind his head and his ears at a lazy half-cocked sort of angle. "Traffic stops, paperwork..."
Judy huffed, dropping her ears back. "Nick, let's take this seriously, okay? Remember, this case could make or break your chances with the ZPD – and you already have a history that's got you at odds with Bogo."
"Funny you should mention that," he replied, tilting forward until his weight rested on his arms, which he crossed casually on the table. "You missed something; something big."
"What?” Judy looked around, pricking her ears up alertly as she tried to figur
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No Stone Unturned 00: Sing Me to Sleep
"People pass me in the street, they see me, but they try to ignore me. They'd prefer I wasn't part of their city."
Bird Lady, Home Alone 2: Lost in New York
It had taken some doing to find a flat-topped building in Tundra Town. With the endless presence of snow, ensured by the climate wall for the sake of its denizens, most structures were topped with sharp peaks or domes like inverted onions to save the cost of perpetual snow removal. Yet conveniently for the mammal making his way up the bleak and dun-gray stairwell inside of it, this building was flat-roofed. It was almost as if whatever god or gods there might be had, after heaping stone after stone upon his back, seen fit to grant him this kindness – or else, having driven him to his fate, had chosen now to expedite it. He might have gone to some other part of the city, but this one had… conveniences.
Reaching the door to the roof, he slipped a key from hi
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Twelve Tribes of Zootopia
            It seems like there’s been a lot of speculation about the history of the world of Zootopia; how mammals developed tribes and nations, whether at certain times some mammals were enslaved and used as livestock, beasts of burden, etcetera, and how civilization advanced to where we see it in the movie.
            Having had an interest for some time in ancient civilizations, I thought it would be good to do an article about how the one I’ve studied most – ancient Israel – would have originated.  While there’s a lot of dispute over the history of the land and people of Israel, I’ll be focusing on the people group there about which I know the most: the Hebrews, or the Semitic group best-known for Judaism (particularly since, as it turns out, Ginnifer Goodwyn is Jewish).  It bears saying up front that I’ll be drawing a lot on ancient
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 Shall we their fond pageant see?
Lord, what fools these mortals be!
Robin, A Midsummer Night's Dream by William Shakespeare
Judy was only too glad to get back above ground, and she took a deep breath when she was at last back in the daylight. The clear sky and bright sun made a welcome change from the conditions down below. Even the air around her felt lighter and cleaner, and she rolled down the window to enjoy it. As unpleasant as the interview had been, the results weren’t so bad. Promise of the farm’s records: check, she thought to herself, patting the carrot pen in her pocket. Info on a major suspect: check. Annnd…
She checked the clock. Even better; I'll make it to pick up Nick with time to spare. That alone was enough to put a smile on her face. She and Nick were due to meet with Chief Bogo about getting him started on the road to being a cop.
Who knows? she thought to herself as she merged onto a highway, heading
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Once upon a midnight dreary
While I pondered weak and weary
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore;
As I nodded, nearly napping
Suddenly there came a tapping
As of someone gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door
"Tis some visitor," I muttered, "Rapping at my chamber door.
"Only this, and nothing more."
The Raven, by Edgar Allan Poe

Judy drove through the streets of the Nocturnal District, well below the surface of Zootopia's bustling metropolis. The underground district – more like so many catacombs, as it seemed to her – was lit by artificial lights as well as patches of glowing moss and fungus which leant eerie luminescence to the stone walls. She drove through great natural caverns of pale, flowing limestone, often connected by starker artificial passages of dim sandstone or even dark granite. These had more artificial lighting, and lacked the beauty – such as it was – of the larger caves. The very walls seemed to swallow up the lig
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On her trip to Boarda-pesth, Judy had been so preoccupied with worry over Nick that nearly all worries had crowded out of her mind. Now that he was well – or as well as might be asked – she was in an agony of worry and guilt over the Westenruts.
"What could have happened to make her sick again?" she asked, wringing her paws as she gazed out the window. The train was moving at a fine speed, but to her anxious eyes the landscape seemed to crawl past like a sloth in bleak December.
Nick made a show of thinking. "Hmm. Sickly deer in a cold, damp climate, long history of bad health… wow. We might have to call Sherlock Howles for this."
There was a loud slap as Judy's right paw connected with his arm.
"Ow," he protested. He'd forgotten how tough Judy could be when she got riled. Rubbing the sore spot, he lowered his ears. "Well, I guess I earned that."
She scowled at him bitterly before returning her gaze to the landscape.
"Carrots, I'm sorry," he offered meekly. "I didn't mean… I shouldn't have said that."
Despite her drooping ears, Judy resolutely kept herself from crying. She wouldn't spring a tear; she wouldn't.
Nick laid a paw on her head. "It's not your fault," he added gently. "Lucy was fine when you left, and by the sound of it she's in good hands. You couldn't have done more anyway – and who else would have come to help me out?"
She pushed his paw away, but he could detect her gaze slowly drifting in his direction. She was opening up; slowly, but progress was progress.
"Listen, I know you well enough to know you didn't leave any loose ends untied. Whatever's going on with Lucy, it's not your fault."
A small measure of comfort drifted into her expression, but then she turned away again. "It's not just about leaving her and Mother behind," she said softly. "Nick, I have this feeling that something bad is going to happen. I don't know what, but something's just not right – like when I got the news about you."
Nick flinched at that. "Was she having nightmares too?"
She shook her head. "No. Well, nothing unusual like you." Thinking it over further, she added, "Of course you never had a problem with nightmares either before this trip."
"Hmm," mused the fox. "So you've got a bad feeling about what's going to happen, you don't know what it is, and it's like what you felt before you came to get me?"
She nodded.
"Well, then I'd say you've got nothing to worry about," he answered quickly. In answer to her confused expression, he added, "Here's the thing. You heard I was sick, you came running with a bad feeling in your gut, and now I'm the picture of health. Now Lucy's sick, and you're running to her with a bad feeling in your gut..."
To her surprise, Judy actually laughed a little at that. "How do you do that?" she asked.
He gazed at her blankly. "Do what?"
Take anything bad and turn it into a… a selling point."
Nick couldn't resist a smirk. "Well, I happened to learn that from being around a certain Miss Cottontail."
"That's Hopps," she argued, pointing a mock-stern finger at his face. Though she had been raised as a Westenrut, she had taken her adoptive mother's advice not to let go of her Christened name. "You know I don't like the name Cottontail."
The fox's smile remained unabated. It was clear enough that his plan was working, so he added, "Besides, you'll be there soon enough, and I've never known a disease that would stick around when you came along."
She huffed at the excessive flattery and bumped him with her shoulders, but it was some comfort. She was no college-trained physician, but she had some knowledge of medicine and had helped care for Lucy – and later Mrs. Westenrut too – many times. As long as she could convince the doctors to let her help, she could do some good, and she could usually convince mammals to at least give her a chance. Someone had once joked that where the good Lord carried a sword in His mouth, she carried a pair of light and quick daggers; a silver one for persuasion and charm, and a steel one for when someone just needed a good cutting down. Already her mind was thinking of points on which to lever her way past even the most stubborn caregiver, as she'd done on a few occasions past.
She was interrupted in this when Nick reached into his bag and pulled out a small package tied up with cord. "By the way, there's something I've been meaning to give you. I kept forgetting about it until now."
Judy took the bundle and started to open it, but he stopped her.
"This is, uh… well, it's my journal from the trip; the trip I don't remember."
She was confused. "Then why don't you read it?" she asked.
He looked pretty serious. "I tried, and you know I'm no chicken, but it, uh…" His ears drifted back. "It shook me up. Truth is I'd like to get rid of it, but I can't bring myself to destroy it or throw it away."
Judy stared at him, then at the wrapped package. An uneasy prickling began to go up her spine, as if it were a box full of deadly spiders or centipedes rather than a book. She pushed it away. This book might have some clue to what had so upset Nick.
"No no no, don't open it," he cut her off as she started again to unwrap the bundle.
She stared at him in confusion. "Nick, what's going on here?"
He sighed. "I don't want to keep the book. I'd rather just forget the whole trip once and for all, but… I don't know. Every time I try to throw it away, something stops me. So I thought if I gave it to… oh, listen to me." His voice sank into self-reproach and he took the bundle back in haste. "I'll throw it right out the window and-"
"No," Judy cut him off, jumping for his paw. She brought it back down with her, package and all. "Nick, we don't know that you're all past it yet. What if you have a relapse or something? This could be our only clue of how to help you."
"I'm sure getting rid of it would help me," he argued, but irresolutely.
Thinking still further, Judy decided to meet him halfway. "Then how about this: I'll hold onto it to get your mind off it, but I promise not to open it unless it's absolutely necessary for your own good. Sound fair?"
He considered the idea and nodded. "Not getting any better offers," he allowed, releasing it to her care.
She at once busied herself tucking it into some of her luggage.
"And Carrots? Thanks. I owe you one."
"One more," she corrected.
He laughed a little at that. "Listen," he suggested, "why don't you go to your car and get some rest? You've fussed and paced so much that I'm getting tired just watching it."
Judy rubbed one eye and nodded. "Maybe I will," she relented. "See you later… and thank you. I needed that."
Nick smiled as long as she was in sight, but as she disappeared into the next car his smile faded. He strongly suspected that Judy was acting more hopeful than she felt for his sake. She was optimistic and he supposed even a little naive at times (but then he had more years and trials under his belt), but she wasn't a fool. She knew when a situation was grim, and this one most assuredly was.
He thought back over the letter, and a rather curious omission. From what he knew of Mrs. Westenrut, she would probably have said what the illness was if she knew. Yet she had included no such detail. That probably meant that Doctor Seward, of whom Nick knew enough to take him for an honest and decent mammal, was withholding that knowledge for the sake of the old widow's heart. That would mean that the disease was a bad one with little if any hope.
I just hope his friend can do something he can't, he thought.
The remainder of the trip passed well enough, and as soon as could be managed Judy was on her way up the cobblestone path to her home of some twenty-odd years. It was a large and stately house, enough to belie the small family living therein. The Westenruts had once been a very large and prosperous family, but somewhere back the estate and line had fallen from the hooves of a hardy and strong brother to a much runtier one when the former died in a war. None of the heirs after that had been particularly healthy or long-lived, and with the health of its lord, the fortune had also seemed to diminish. They were still well-to-do, but hardly as wealthy or many as their ancestors. Now, atop that sad history, there was the paradoxical matter of Lucy's predicament: soon to be wed herself, but ill enough that she might not see her own nuptials. It reminded Judy of a line from a play she and Nicholas had gone to see once: "Fair is foul and foul is fair."
With such an unaccustomed burden on her mind, it was little wonder that the doe was a bit distracted as she let herself and Nicholas in. She was thus unprepared when a strange voice suddenly uttered, "Oh! I didn't realize we were expecting a guest."
Jumping slightly, Judy turned to see a quite unfamiliar wolf, gray with curious black marks on his tufted cheeks. His rather wrinkled face and thin limbs betrayed a venerable age, but by the brightness of his eyes and the erectness of his posture he seemed quite healthy for all that.
The stranger blinked apologetically, rising to give a cordial bow. "Ah, madam, forgive me for startling you." He had a crisp and pronounced accent, and spoke in a very formal tone. "You are friends of the family, I assume."
She shook her head. "Family, actually. I'm Judy Hopps, and this is-"
At the mention of her name, the wolf's eyes lit up and he knelt to clasp her paw eagerly. "Ah! Then you are the Judy dear Miss Lucy speaks of so much. You are good to come."
Lucy's name made Judy's heart lurch upward just a little. "Yes, that's me – and this is my friend Nicholas Wilde."
"Charmed," Nick said, dipping his head in a polite nod.
"A pleasure," answered the doctor, shaking his paw.
Judy wasted little time in getting to the business at paw. "Is Lucy alright?"
The wolf frowned anxiously. "As well as medicine can make her, I assure you. She hasn't left the house these past two weeks… but I forget my manners. I am Professor Van Savage, a friend of Doctor Seward, whom you may know."
Judy nodded uncertainly. "Lucy mentioned Doctor Seward in her letters, but she didn't mention your name."
"I suppose she wouldn't. I am recently arrived myself. Doctor Seward was a student of mine, and asked me to come aid as I can in poor Lucy's treatment."
Judy's heart sank as this explanation recalled to her mind her worries from the train. "Is she that ill?"
Van Savage folded his paws. "I don't wish to alarm you, Miss Judy. She has improved, but it has been very difficult going. Her illness is…" Here an odd look crossed his face.
"What is it?" demanded Judy in earnest. "If she's mentioned me, then you know you can tell me anything – and Nick's as trustworthy as I am."
"Oh, I didn't mean that," he confessed, raising his paws apologetically. "It is no worry of discretion, or of your ability to handle the facts of the case. It is only that her illness is most… well, singular, if I may say so. I have been called one of the foremost physicians of this time, and though I think that is undue praise I must say that I think her disease is… to be honest, unidentified; unknown to science."
That didn't sound good. "How bad is it?" asked Nick.
"Well, as I said before she has improved these last few days, but her condition must be watched closely if she is to be made well." Seeing the growing anxiety on Judy's face, he softened. "However, I do not think she is contagious. Perhaps you should come and see her yourself before I explain further. Friend Nicholas, do excuse us, please."
There wasn't a thing Judy wanted more in the world, so at a word she was led up to Lucy's room.
"You're going in too?" she asked uneasily when the doctor put his paw on the handle to Lucy's bedroom door.
"It is necessary," said he. "I was only taking a short break when you and Friend Nicholas arrived, but she must be looked in on regularly and watched with great care."
Seeing that this troubled Judy – as indeed he should have worried if it didn't – he smiled the best that he could. It was a very solemn smile. "I do hope your visit will do her some good, seeing that you are sisters. I am told you are a capable helper to physicians, and perhaps with you here we can tend her with better propriety. I must warn you, however, that her state of health may frighten you. You must not act alarmed or greatly upset. Such a thing can only do her harm, I think."
Judy nodded, taking a deep breath. "Stay calm. Got it."
He smiled and turned the handle. Opening the door only a little, he called in, "Miss Lucy, a friend has come to visit."
"Send her in," came a voice from inside.
Judy flinched at the voice. Lucy sounded worse than she'd ever heard her or anyone else. Her voice was like the voice of an old woman.
Van Savage pushed the door ajar and bowed in sign for her to enter, which she did.
It was well that he had warned her not to act too alarmed, for Lucy was indeed in a frightful state. Her slender neck and well-formed face now seemed pale and withered like a dried plant as she sat up in bed. The strong, peculiar odor which filled the room did little to help. Yet the smile was the same as ever.
"Judy!" she exclaimed, and then trembled a little as if the effort of simply lifting her voice in joy had exhausted her. She quickly lay back down and huddled under the blankets. "Please come in. I'm so glad you made it back."
Judy came in slowly and solemnly. "Are you alright?" she asked.
"She is as well cared for as Doctor Seward and I can contrive," promised Van Savage.
Lucy sighed. "Come sit on the bed, please," she urged. "I've missed you. Is Nicholas well?"
Judy hardly had a mind to talk about anything so casual. Yet she knew that it would be best to do so for Lucy's sake. So she hopped up onto the bed and sat, as she and the larger doe had done many times when they were younger.
"Nick's doing about as well as can be expected," she replied. "It's so strange. He went on that business trip, and now he hardly remembers any of it."
Unnoticed by the two females, Van Savage's ears pricked up and his eyebrows lifted with interest.
"Hardly anything?" asked Lucy curiously. "How strange. Did something happen to him?"
"Something must have," Judy admitted, "but he doesn't know what. He won't even look back at his journal about it, and he made me promise not to look into it unless I had to." She had a feeling that this would not do any good for Lucy, so she went on, "You already know he turned up in an abbey on Boarda-pesth, though, which is why I left."
Lucy's eyes widened with interest. "So you still don't know what happened?" she asked.
Judy shook her head. "No. At least he's back here now, and safe. He's downstairs, actually."
"Oh, good," said Lucy happily.
Just then a knock came at the chamber door. "Miss Westenrut," came the voice of one of the maids. "Arthur's come to visit."
"Arthur!" cried Lucy, sitting up. Before Judy or Van Savage could do anything, she was pretty nearly out of bed. "I'd better get dressed. Doctor, would you-?"
Before their horrified eyes she grew whiter still; white as salt to her very lips. She swayed like a tree in the wind and started to fall.
"Lucy!" cried Judy, rushing forward.
With startling speed and adroitness for his age, Van Savage stepped up and caught Lucy against his chest, throwing his arms around her lest she crumple to the floor. "Here, here, lie down," he urged, leaning her back towards the mattress. Judy was close behind, hopping up to assist him. Between the two of them they managed to get her back into her place on the bed, but she was terribly limp and trembled worse than Judy had ever seen.
"What's happening?" demanded Judy. She had never seen such a rapid change. In mere seconds Lucy had gone from looking and acting very nearly her old self to seeming scarcely healthier than a corpse.
"Shh, shh," hissed Van Savage. "She needs rest and medicine. I shall give her both now." Moving to a bag tucked against the wall, he drew out a bottle and poured a small glass of some liquid from it. This he gave to Lucy, who drank it off like the most placid of children. By the time he and Judy had put all in order, their patient was sound asleep.
"There now. We have done what can be done for the present. That sleeping draught will calm her down and restore a little of her strength, and she needs all she can spare at present." Then, answering Judy's unspoken question, he added, "She will wake in a few hours and want company, but until then we can speak."
Judy's nose fairly buzzed with anxiety. "What kind of disease does she have?" she pressed. "I know you think it's unidentified, but can you at least give some… I don't know, close guess?"
Van Savage sighed. "I don't think it's unidentified; I am certain it's in no medical record," he said wearily. "She's been going through a staggering amount of blood, but she has no uncontrolled bleeding or any symptom of other illness which might cause it. Most unsettling."
"Blood?" asked Judy, flinching from surprise and worry.
He nodded gravely. "I don't want to frighten you, Miss Judy. It's not a thing for a-"
Before he could say any word relating to her sex, her paw was on his arm with a clamp like iron pincers. "Tell me," she insisted. Then, softening her grip and her demeanor a fraction, she added, "Please."
He sighed. "Alright. When I first came to see her, I saw at once that she was very weak and pale. I did what I could to safeguard her condition; gave her all the fluids she would take and so forth. Yet she continued to worsen. She was getting much low on blood, so I arranged a transfusion from her fiance. Since then she has had four transfusions from four different donors counting the first. After Arthur came Doctor Seward, myself, and even a stout young buck named Quincy."
Judy was stunned. "Quincy?" she asked. Quincy was rather an old friend of the family, and had been an army scout in Amareca. He was hardy, but how he could spare enough blood for a deer was unimaginable.
"There was no one else at paw. We cannot bring just anyone in to give her blood, lest it frighten Mrs. … ah, you have caught my meaning."
That was certainly true. Old Mrs. Westenrut didn't want Lucy to know it, but she had received her death notice. Her heart was failing, and it was ten to one she would not last three months. A sudden fright or any other added strain would kill her in an instant. In retrospect, Judy felt sorry that she had been angry with the professor a moment ago. If he had gone to such lengths, he deserved her respect – and her help.
"Take mine," she offered, rolling up a sleeve. She'd never given a transfusion before, but she knew how the process was done.
"Not for my life," he answered. "She needs more than you can give; I'm not even certain Quincy's blood did any good."
Disappointed, Judy restored her sleeve to its former place. Still, she was not one to sit by and leave a problem untouched, especially one this serious. "So we need some way to bring in someone who can give her a transfusion without upsetting Mother," she mused. A moment later, she snapped her fingers. "I've got an idea. If Mother's expecting someone for some other reason, we just need her out of the room, right?"
He nodded. "Yes."
She leaned in and whispered her plan, lest any of the maids should overhear and unwittingly let slip the scheme. Van Savage's face lightened a great deal as he listened.
"Ah, you are as clever as she said," he commended. "Yes, I think your plan will do excellently. Shall I leave the arrangements to you, then?"
Judy nodded. "Count on me. Just have your part ready, and I'll take care of the rest." Then she paused, remembering something which had eluded her immediate attention while she was tending to Lucy. "By the way, why the garlic blossoms?"
A mysterious look crossed the professor's face. "God has given us every green herb for its use," he replied evasively, "and there are some that have very many. I theorized early that the garlic would aid her recovery, and it seems to help. I cannot tell all now, but I must tell you as I have told all others: do not move the garlic; not on your life."
True to her promise, in not more than a week Judy had executed her plan. At half past two, a large gray horse came to the house wearing a long white coat and a black scarf looped loosely about his neck and hanging down to his knees. He carried a large book, and a small bird perched on one of his shoulders. Mrs. Westenrut greeted him joyfully at the door, though he had to stoop to make it through the opening.
Within the house, all was in the most perfect order. White linen draped all furnishings, and vases of flowers lined the way like attendants for the priest and other selected persons to be present at the blessed occasion.
The sitting room had been made available for the occasion, with all being re-arranged to as closely resemble a small chapel as possible. Gifts for the bride were prominently displayed; fine silver or china, various things needful for making a home, and boxes or jars of hoof ointment and perfume. Each gift was marked with the name of whoever had given it, and Judy had tastefully arranged them to show those brought by the guests who were there to their best advantage.
Of the present guests there were not many. Although the house could have held more than a dozen mammals in comfort, the physicians had pressed that the ceremony be of simple nature and a larger party be held later to amend for it. Accordingly, the guests comprised of Judy heading up the house maids turned bridesmaids, Nick and the doctors as ushers, and Quincy as the best man. One of the maids, conveniently, needed no place in the seats as she was to sit at the piano in place of an organist. At the front, a seat had been placed for the bride where she was to be joined to her husband. It was, on the whole, the least orthodox wedding arrangement the Westenrut family had ever had or would have, but everyone was in cheerful spirits.
Of course, much attention was given to Arthur, who was immaculately dressed. The red deer wore an immaculate black suit, the cloth of which was tailored and brushed to its absolute best. Everyone seemed lining up for a chance to shake his hoof and congratulate him on his good fortune, wish him the best with his bride, and offer words of encouragement and advice.
Judy came into the room and glanced across at Nick. Like the other gentlemen, he wore a small cluster of the white wild roses on his shoulder, tied with white ribbon and trimmed with silver leaves and lace. The bridesmaids also wore favors, made by Lucy and each one augmented with some little trinket, as all the maids had grown up in the house and been childhood playmates of their future mistress. Judy's favor bore a pair of links from a silver chain; an old memento from when she was adopted. Lucy had found the bit of chain from a broken necklace, and insisted that they keep it as a symbol that, though broken from all else, they would always be sisters.
Nick caught sight of her and clapped his paws together for attention. "Ladies, gentlemammals, I think it's time. Everyone to your places!"
Mammals rushed to their seats. Lord Goredalming rushed to the designated spot in the room, right by a window where the sunlight shone in.
As the piano began to play, Doctor Seward brought Lucy in leaning on his shoulder. It was a bittersweet sight, for all could see that she would surely topple to the floor if not for his support. For those who knew that he had himself asked her to marry him, it bore moreover an air of rather sad irony. Yet for all that, Lucy looked quite nearly as beautiful as she ever had in her life. She wore a ruffled silk dress bedecked with lace, with a wreathe of tiny white rose blossoms on her head like a diadem over the gauzy veil. Even in her weak and sickly state, the dress brought out her sweetness and echoed her snowy soul. Moreover, Judy and the maids had been busy about her with all the best cosmetics they could find, putting a veneer of color back on her pallid face.
The priest, who had not yet seen Lucy, glanced as discreetly as might be done toward Van Savage and Lord Goredalming. The groom seemed to swallow a little, pained as he was to exert his bride so just to get some life's blood back in her veins; truly, cruelty in the name of kindness if ever there was such a thing. Van Savage gave a tiny but decisive nod and looked meaningfully at the stallion, flicking his eyes toward Mrs. Westenrut to remind him of the need for secrecy. The priest, recalling the gravity of things, resumed his passively happy demeanor.
Mrs. Westenrut, as planned, knew nothing of the planned transfusion. Judy had arranged everything by persuading her – ostensibly at the professor's suggestion – that it would be good for Lucy if Arthur might come and see her at any time he chose and stay as long as he liked, and with minimal exertions on her part. Of course, there was only one way to do so without raising a scandal, and that was naturally that they be quietly, privately joined as man and wife. She had added, of course, that Lucy would only know of the part of this which was for her health. She would in no wise be told just yet that her mother might not live to see a later ceremony. Mrs. Westenrut had wholeheartedly embraced the plan, not suspecting that she herself was meeting with a bit of kindly disinformation. Van Savage had confessed that he "liked it not," but as they were facing "strange opposition," he would do whatever he had to for his patients.
The mother of the bride merely wiped her eyes, and whispered to Judy how glad she was to see that blessed day.
Doctor Seward brought Lucy to the improvised altar and helped her into the chair. Arthur clasped her hoof as the priest read the wedding liturgy, and readily produced a slim, unadorned gold band to fit around Lucy's wrist.
"Arthur," hissed Van Savage as the buck went to fit it in place.
Arthur started, dropping the band to the floor. Then with a chuckle, he picked it up and gently bent the soft metal around his bride's wrist.
"Let all gathered here witness that this male and female have been joined in the sight of God in holy matrimony," announced the priest. "You may seal the covenant with a kiss."
Since the bride would not be leaving the house, the guests showered her and her husband with rice as they symbolically went up to Lucy's room without looking to the right or the left. Lucy leaned heavily on Arthur, but she was in good spirits as they laid her down on her bed still in her wedding gown. Van Savage waited until the last to throw his rice, and oddly seemed to cast it more towards the window than the bridal bed.
"I think you're supposed to throw it on them," whispered Nick.
The professor cast him a very confident look. "It will serve the purpose," he said frankly. Then, with a nod to Doctor Seward, he bustled back downstairs.
"Where is he going?" asked Lucy, a little anxiously. Though one might have thought her attention would be wholly on her husband, she had come to expect much of the professor's presence and care, and would at times become agitated if he were gone.
"It isn't anything," promised Doctor Seward. "He has some small business to attend to. Come, let me get you a drink to help you rest. You mustn't exert yourself too much."
Lucy drank the preparation he gave her as placidly as the mildest nursing babe, and in a short while she slipped into peaceful rest clasping her lover's paw with both her hooves.
Professor Van Savage returned with the priest in tow. "I have seen to Mrs. Westenrut," he announced, "and the maids have been instructed that if she wake, they are to keep her occupied. We will not be disturbed for at least an hour, I think. Ah, you are preparing the instruments."
The horse rubbed his nose as the doctors did their work. "It's rather stuffy in here," he remarked nasally. "Mightn't a window be opened?"
Seward looked at Van Savage, who nodded. "Yes, a little fresh air will do no harm at this time, I think. Miss Judy, would you be so kind?"
"Harm?" asked the priest, thoroughly puzzled. "Who ever heard of fresh air doing harm at any time, I should like to know?"
Doctor Seward shook his head. "My old mentor is as good as any man alive for illnesses, but his methods on this one puzzle even me. You ought to have seen him a couple of weeks ago, tying these blossoms together in garlands and rubbing them all over the blinds and round the bed. As I recall, I said he looked for all the world as though he were working a charm to keep out an evil spirit."
"A charm?" asked the priest, clearly piqued.
Van Savage shot his friend a look before answering. "I swear on my life, I am no magician. There is a method and a science in all I do, but I cannot speak now."
Judy and Nick looked at one another, clearly baffled. Nick's gaze broke off to scan the flowers and the pungently scented curtains.
Why does this seem so familiar? he wasn't just the flowers either; there was something familiar about Lucy too. It was like remembering, but without the memory.
The physicians worked swiftly and efficiently to exact the operation, but the transfer of blood seemed agonizingly long and painfully slow. Strange, too, for though the stallion grew visibly weaker as the minutes passed, Lucy only recovered a portion of her former color and fullness. It chilled Judy down to the marrow to look on it and think of the implications, and she even reluctantly admitted to herself that it would have been madness for her to try the same. Nick, though better at hiding his thoughts and feelings, seemed to grow calmer somehow.
Doctor Seward was not blind to their reactions. "Does the operation unsettle you?" he asked gently.
Judy shook her head. "No. I'm just surprised it's taking so much."
"Indeed," Van Savage agreed, watching everything with unwavering attention. "It's the strangest thing my eyes have seen, that what badly weakens so large a creature only partly restores such a smaller one."
The horse grew anxious. "What exactly ails her?" he asked.
Van Savage looked up at him, and for a moment his expression was dark. Then he softened, as though realizing the priest's worries. "It will do you no harm, I think," he said in reassurance. "I gave her blood myself, and I am not ill."
After a few more minutes, the doctors decided that the priest had given all that it was good for him to give. Seward quickly withdrew the needle and applied cloth and pressure to the puncture, whilst Van Savage ministered likewise to Lucy.
"We have done all that may be done," said he with much better humor than when they had begun. "Thank you, good sir, and may God bless you for your gift. Like our Lord, you have given of your life's blood that the dying may live, and that is a greater gift than you can know."
"It is not so great as the salvation of a soul," the priest countered, though he smiled graciously at the professor's praise.
Van Savage looked deeply thoughtful at this. "Perhaps…" was all he uttered, gazing as one looking far, far off.
Judy was so preoccupied in puzzling over the strange look in the wolf's eyes as he spoke that she managed not to see a shiver run through Nick's body.
Night Plague Ch. 2: Blood Bonds
Well, that's a pretty strange way to end a wedding for sure. What exactly is wrong with Lucy, and will Van Savage's unorthodox methods do the trick? Only time will tell.
The line Judy recalls, "Fair is foul and foul is fair," is from the play 'Macbeth' by William Shakespeare. In its original context, it speaks of everything being so turned about and mixed up that even good and evil are muddled.
I ended up doing some interesting research on this chapter, with some help from my girlfriend and from WANMWAD. Though there is a good deal of going into and out of Lucy's room, Judy's surprise at Van Savage going in there is period-accurate. I saw fit to pick WANMAD's brain about the matter, and he was kind enough to respond with the following two notes:
"You're right that in Victorian times it would be considered highly inappropriate for a man to enter a woman's bedchamber, particular if she was in her night dress. Victorians took a dim view of men and women even sharing living spaces, let alone a man entering a woman's bedroom; for members of the middle or upper classes, even engaged couples wouldn't live together until after getting married. In fact, even the poorer members of society (who the more well-to-do decried as immoral) only had about a 5% rate of cohabitation between an unmarried man and woman in London in the late 19th century."
When I raised the question of any appearance of impropriety, he added,
"To a certain extent, yes. The stethoscope was actually invented in 1816 by René Laennec because he was uncomfortable with the idea of putting his ear to a woman's chest to listen to her heartbeat, considering it extremely improper. Doctors of the 19th century commonly considered themselves proper gentlemen; the obstetrician Charles Delucena Meigs was quoted as saying, in the mid 1850s, that "Doctors are gentlemen and a gentleman's hands are clean." He didn't think hand washing was necessary for physicians, you see, and was insulted by the insinuation that doctors with dirty hands might be responsible for their patients getting infections. While by the end of the 19th century hand washing had largely caught on for doctors, the view of a doctor as a gentleman was still pretty common, particularly for older doctors, and anything involving a female patient that might have the slightest hint of impropriety was to be avoided. Public understanding of medicine was generally pretty crude, though, so as long as a doctor didn't look like he was assaulting his patient he'd probably be safe from mob justice."
So, to give the TLDR version: Judy was quite right to surmise that Lucy's condition was serious, as under no other circumstances would any respectable doctor go into her room as Van Savage did.
Wedding procedures were rather flexible in the 19th century, ranging all the way from lavish parties to secret last-minute ceremonies like the one in the Sherlock Holmes mystery A Scandal in Bohemia. There were norms and expectations, however, which I've presented as faithfully as I and the characters could manage. The wedding favors mentioned were small bouquets of white flowers tied with ribbon or lace, and were worn by both men and women. Those worn by men involved in a wedding were typically made by the bridesmaids, and favors for the bridesmaids were made by the bride herself. As noted, this would often include some small memento if the bride and bridesmaid went way back. The priest being a gray horse was based on a belief of the time that having such an animal draw the wedding coach would bring good luck. So would dropping the ring (or bracelet in this case), as it was believed that doing so would shake out any evil spirits hiding in the metal. The throwing of rice was a symbol of fertility descended from an ancient Roman custom of showering the happy couple with nuts (ouch!). Also accurate – and convenient to their ruse – is the fact that usually the bride's parents were the first to leave a wedding party.
On one other note, the idea of the priest being accompanied by a trained bird is a nod to Saint Francis – a man whose legendary way with animals could give Hiawatha a run for his wampum. In addition to being the most fitting saint to associate with anything Zootopia, I realized that Saint Francis' ever-present avian would be helpful to a horse who needed to turn pages. As it happens, doves and pigeons have been taught to do some surprisingly dexterous tasks, so flipping a page on command could probably be done.
And one closing detail: It's been great talking with my readers via private message, but if you guys could all leave some feedback via the commenting system, that would be even better. As I'm looking over what people think and ironing out ways to improve, it helps to be able to see all the input in one place. Also, please check out my other stories, Zootopia especially.
Happy reading, folks!

You’re such a bad boy, not trusting little old Cubis. Haven’t I been everything an evil underworld creature should be?”

Cubis, Angel Wars


After touching base with a few other residents of Sahara Square, they decided to drive over to Tundratown and see Mr. Big. The transition from blazing hot desert sand to freezing cold snow stunned Judy a little even though she expected it, but Nick pretty much took it in stride. After all, he used to make that switch with Finnick every day of the week.

Stopping at a red light, Judy took a moment to admire the goings-on in a small park just off the road. Out on a frozen pond, two young bucks – a deer and a rabbit, respectively – were trying to master ice skates with comical degrees of non-success. Not that far from them, a snowball fight between a snow leopard and a bison brought a smile to her face at the sign of recovery after the Night Howler scare. A ways off to the left, a pup who looked to be part wolf and part dingo lobbed a snowball at a tree, dumping a small avalanche on three pups who must have been his sisters. At least, Judy guessed that from the one set of mismatched parents rushing to the scene of the misdemeanor. On a playground towards the right, a young otter dressed in green and red rode a slide while a lemming in red and blue rode him like a surfboard.

A car horn behind her informed her that the light had changed, but not before she caught one last glimpse of warmth amid the ice and snow. A young beaver, tag-teaming with a tiger, was building what looked to be some kind of snow mammal. Judy couldn’t be sure what species it was supposed to be, but it had two heads – one with three eyes – and a third arm in the middle of its chest. It reminded her of ones she had seen some of her brothers build, come to think of it.

Jordy would probably be taking notes, she thought, smirking at the memory of some of his ‘masterpieces.’ By popular opinion in the Hopps household, Jordy was to be thanked (or blamed) for all the nice trees their neighbors had planted on the property line.

“What is it with guys and weird snow mammals anyway?” she asked out loud.

When Nick made no quick reply, she glanced his way. His mouth was a flat line, devoid of either sorrow, mirth, or even his usual confidence. It bothered her.

"You okay, Nick?" she asked.

He blinked as if he had just woken up. "Huh?"

She focused on the road, but kept glancing at him out the corner of her eye. "You seem different."

Nick shook his head. "Ah, just remembering the old days."

“Heh.” She smirked. "You mean about three to four months ago."

"Well, yeah," he admitted.

She reached over and nudged him reassuringly with a fist. "Relax, Nick. Finnick needs a little time to adjust to this, but I'm sure he'll come around."

Nick wished he was so confident. Judy didn't know Finnick like he did. The little guy was tough as nails and had a mean streak that would put a wolverine to shame if you got him mad enough. Still, Nick's breaking up the act had hit the little guy in the two places it hurt most: his budget, and his sense of loyalty. Life was tough enough for foxes, let alone pint-sized fennecs. Ever since the two of them had joined forces, Finnick had had three ways of responding to... well, to being cornered like he must have felt he was now. Those methods had been to outsmart his adversary, team up with Nick, or – if all else failed – lash out. This time, though, Plan A wasn't an option; Nick had, in all modesty, always been just a few watts brighter and a few shades more creative than Fin. Besides, most of what Finnick had in those departments was less tactical and more practical. Squeezing all that gear into the back of a minivan was no sweat for a brain like his, but talking his way around the law… not so much. That was one option down. Plan B was obviously out, especially if (gulp) Nick was ordered to arrest him one day. Now Plan C... well, Nick knew deep down that Finnick wouldn't have it in him to turn violent against his old partner in crime. He also knew that if he was ever proven wrong about that, it would be no contest. Nick's brain was a formidable weapon, but physically, he was useless in a fight – especially against old friends.

"I hope you're right," he admitted. After a moment's pause, he added, "Look, the police wouldn't tell a cop to arrest a friend, right? That's gotta be... I don't know, conflict of interest or something."

Judy frowned. It was true, the police would try to find someone else – if they knew the foxes were friends. Divulging that information, however, could only hurt Nick's chances at becoming an officer. Besides, they might involve Nick anyway on the basis of his usefulness in setting up a sting. She had read about that in the material at the academy, and until now it had all been just words on a page. Looking at it now, she realized it cut a lot deeper than that – and for the first time, a tiny part of her brain wondered if Nick actually had it in him to make it as a cop.

She was yanked out of her thoughts as the car suddenly began to swerve. Instantly tensing, she fought her instinctive reaction to slam on the brake or fight to correct her course. The best thing, she knew, was to ease off the gas and ride out the swerve. She had learned the method from a show about hurricanes, though experience had also proven its usefulness on snow and ice.

Unfortunately, even the best methods sometimes went awry. The car lurched off the road and plowed nose-first into a snow bank, flinging her and Nick against their seat belts with a yank.

"Oh, sweet cheese and crackers," she muttered under her breath.

Nick, seeing that neither of them were injured, instinctively tried to put a lighter face on things. “Ah. Well, you could've gone into the traffic instead," he observed. He pointed left through the cars now going around them to the oncoming ones across the road.

She sighed and shrugged. "Yeah, I guess that's true." She hit the blinkers, shifted into reverse, and tried to back out slowly as soon as a gap appeared in the flow of vehicles. The tires spun, but got nowhere.

"More gas?" Nick suggested, trying to be helpful.

She shook her head. "Worst thing I could do," she pointed out. "If the tires caught suddenly and shot us back out into the traffic-"

Her words were cut off by the rumble of a bus driving past; one made, as best they could judge, for any size passenger up to polar bears. Nick followed its progress and swallowed. "Yeah, I see what you mean." Okay, so he wasn't a rocket scientist at the wheel. There was a reason Finnick always did the driving when they had been partners in crime. He watched Judy try a few more times to get them out, then shrugged. "Well, lucky you've got me around." He unbuckled his seat belt and opened his door.

"What are you doing?"

"Calling roadside assistance," he replied, clambering up the door to the roof. "I've got friends all over this part of town. Give it five minutes tops before one of them comes by."

Judy frowned. “The last time you introduced me to a friend in Tundra Town, he almost killed us.”

“Tuh. Picky picky.”

It was only two minutes before a car stopped behind them, flicking on its own blinkers. "See?" Nick called, his voice sounding through the roof. He had shut the door so Judy could stay warm. "The old Wilde card works every- aw, no."

"What is it?" asked Judy, instantly alert as she opened her door with one paw and checked her stun gun with the other. She expected a gang of hostile animals to come clamoring out of the car, intent on paying Nick back for some past hustle.

Instead, to her surprise, a posse of sultry-looking vixens, white as the snow around them, emerged. A passing wind carried mingled scents of perfume from them to Judy's nose, along with a touch of fur bleach. At a glance, they were all nearly identical; all of them wore black outfits which, though covering most of their bodies, didn't leave much guesswork on the shapes of those bodies. They all looked to be wearing eyeliner, and when they blinked, most revealed eye shadow as well. One of them removed a pair of mirrored sunglasses – not unlike Nick's, though much sleeker in shape – and blinked lavender-lidded eyes at the fox on the roof.

"Nicholas Wilde," she remarked in a Russian accent as smooth as melted butter, "what are the chances?"

Nick gulped. Not slim enough, apparently. "Hey ladies. Hey... Vanya. Uh, mind lending us a paw?"

Nick briefly introduced the vixens as ‘the Angels,’ and Judy noticed that he introduced her to them as ‘Officer Hopps’ and not something less formal. The crew of females quickly surrounded the car, and with Nick and Judy they were all soon at work trying to get it loose. This wasn't an easy job, but it gave Vanya the chance to sidle up to Nick as they pulled and pushed.

"So, Naughty Boy, what have you been up to?" she asked. Tugging at the open frame of one of the doors, she somehow managed to purr even as she grunted. Judy, who was inside gently trying to coax the reverse gear into action, heard every word and scrunched her face at the phrase, 'Naughty Boy.'

Nick coughed. "Oh, uh, you know. Took some time off from the old hustle, looked into a few new ideas – the usual."

She smirked. "Always something new with you, darling. You know, I've heard a rumor that you are looking into law enforcement."

Judy glanced at Nick as best she could without actually turning her head. He was clearly uneasy. "Well, you know the song: try everything, right?"

This drew a low, almost musical chuckle from the vixen. "Always playing the dangerous games, Naughty Boy. That's what I always liked about you."

At the moment, Judy thought it was Vanya playing the dangerous game. "Hey," she said, trying to sound disinterested, "would you mind not whispering in the back? I'm trying to concentrate."

Mercifully, a passing arctic hare pulled over next with a towing hitch and offered his help. The Angels had to move their car, and Vanya was clearly annoyed to have her time with Nick cut off like that, but in almost no time the car was loose.

"Such a shame to part so quickly, Nick," she called. "Don't forget to call, alright?"

Nick shook his head. "Ancient history, Vanya," he called back, climbing into the car and closing the door.

The vixens left. The hare unhooked his car, tossed a salute to the two sleuths, and then departed as well. Judy glanced across at Nick. "Ex girlfriend?" she ventured.

He nodded. "And before you ask, she was too clingy and I’d rather not talk about it.”

Judy closed her mouth and frowned at him before returning her attention to the road. “I hate it when you read my mind,” she complained.

Nick’s smile returned. “Oh, but that’s bound to come in handy on the job,” he teased.

Meanwhile, in the other vehicle, one of the other Angels glanced at Vanya. "He'll be answering for that later won't he?"

Vanya studied her claws. "Of course he will," she replied, “but only when it suits me. Overt chases are too commonplace.”

Vanya had a way with males rather like a spoiled child's way with toys: she grabbed whoever she wanted, played with him until she got bored, and then broke him or threw him aside, depending on what she felt like doing. Those who refused to cooperate... well, she never did anything to them right away. That would be too obvious. No, she much preferred to bide her time and let them forget her until she came back to remind them. Her methods of doing this were many, but never pleasant for the male who had displeased her.

Nick Wilde had been a particularly challenging one, and the truth was that she had never gotten all she wanted from him – a fact which she would have liked very much to remedy. If he came back, she might even forgive him – or perhaps not. As it was, he wanted to go, so she let him... for the moment.

Just a quick explanation of a few particulars. This story was originally posted as a part of the "What If?" project by Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps. I have chosen to trim out the parts pertaining to said story line and the P.I.X.A.R. machine because, for personal reasons, I felt more comfortable making this strictly a fantasy A.U. The rest of the story will remain pretty much as posted on Cimar's page, except that I will be expanding here and there on the material, explaining such historical details at the end of each chapter as I can without spoilers, and fixing a few oversights which the "test drive" in Cimar's project brought to my attention.

A little background information may be useful here. In this version, Zootopia is analogous to London in the 1800s. If you have read WANMWAD's Sherlock Holmes/Zootopia mashups, you'll have a rough idea of what I'm after. Hopefully, however, my own descriptions will suffice.

Also, having been written as part of the What If project, the original draft was WildeHopps. Many readers commended me for that, but looking back on it I decided it wasn't really my style to plunge into the middle of a relationship without developing it first. So I've dialed it back a bit and made theirs a professional connection with hints of potential similar to that in the movie (but without blackmail). In the time period where this is set women generally had limited options, which obviously would cramp Judy's style quite a bit. One career where women could have a significant impact, however, was writing, as exemplified by Harriet Beecher Stowe's classic Uncle Tom's Cabin and its part in sparking the American Civil War. As typewriting would be the means of choice for a writer at the time, I decided Judy would "officially" be Nick's secretary. Ideally I'd rather have her be a rookie cop like in the movie or a retired soldier as per WANMWAD, but that would change this version too much and I wanted this short version to be at least close to the original.

I'm working on a longer novel-length version of this story with some substantial changes (all for the better, I hope), but between the demands of life and my other stories it's anyone's guess

Carriage wheels rattled like a Gatling gun as the cab horse raced forward, breath heaving in and out on his errand. Inside, Judy clung to the seat with anxious determination. It was barely an exaggeration to say that she was in deadly earnest.

The summons which brought her had been quick and to the point. Nick, who had been gone for months on a business trip in Roamania had showed up at Saint Ninian's, delirious and half-dead with fatigue. No one knew why, and Nick had barely been lucid enough to tell them his name and show his papers. It was nothing short of a miracle that the nuns had been able to get word to her all the way in London, but they had earnestly begged her to come at once. She had begun packing almost before she was done reading the message.

With a jolt and a swerve, the carriage fairly banged to a halt as though the horse had crashed. Judy hung on for her life, then scrambled to stick her head out. The horse, spurred by the money Judy had promised, panted and leaned on one of the pull bars as he drew out his pocket watch.

"Saint Ninian's Convent, miss," he reported, making his way to the door.

Judy didn't wait. Bursting out of the coach, she threw the money to her driver, shouted her hasty thanks, and with lifted skirts bolted into the red stone building. Nuns of many species, all dressed in black robes and white head cloths, turned to look at her in surprise as she plowed in like a blast of wind from a gale.

"Judy Hopps," she introduced herself, spurning all formality as she fumbled in her purse for the letter. "A fox was brought here; Nicholas Wilde? He's my-!"

"Calm down; calm down, child," urged a badger, striding up and clasping her firmly by the upper arms. "Yes, we have a fox here. He mentioned you."

Judy nearly collapsed. "He's here? Where?!"

"I'll take you to him," the nun promised, "but in Heaven's name, calm yourself."

It took several deep breaths for the bunny to settle her nerves. The nun's advice was sound, but it was all a bunny could do to calm down under such duress, and more than most could have managed. Steadying herself, Judy surrendered to a torturously slow pace as Sister Aria – for so the nun introduced herself – led her through the stone halls of the convent with a halting, shuffling gait.

"Tell me what happened," Judy pleaded, hoping for something to take her mind off how long it was taking her to reach Nick. Though she had initially taken to working for him for want of options, they had been together for several years now and developed an uncommon degree of camaraderie. When she'd heard he was in trouble, she'd rushed from Zootopia as fast as she could and was hardly sure if she had slept the whole way.

"You know already what Sister Agatha wrote," Aria began, "so there is little else to explain. He came by rails from Clawsenburg, as you have read, where he ran into the station yelling his head off for a ticket home. When they learned he was English, they ticketed him for the furthest train in your direction. By the time he reached Boarda-pesth, he was nearly half dead with some kind of brain fever, so they sent him here to recover at our sanatorium."

"But why?" wondered Judy. Nick was the last mammal she would have imagined coming down with any kind of mental illness. The telegraph's words – 'nearly dead' and 'nerves broken' – had so contrasted with the calm, confident fox who left England some months before that she hardly believed them.

Sister Aria shook her head. "I don't know. We took him in and gave him the best care we could manage, but it seems it's not his health that's so much damaged as his spirit. Something shook the poor fox to his very core, and not a nun or monk or abbot who's been to see him can understand it. We're hoping that seeing you will help, or at least that you might know him well enough to help us find out what happened."

Judy bit her lip. Nick wasn't the toughest mammal around, but he was strong. If he was even half as badly off as the letter described, she was sure she didn't know what could have done it. Still, if there was a way to pull him through it, she'd do it if she had to sell her soul. "I'll do everything I can," she promised.

Sister Aria came to a stop outside a plain wooden door, turning to Judy. "You have a good heart. I pray it will be enough, or that God will supply whatever it may lack. Now, let's get you in to see him."

She opened the door, and Judy stepped into the room silently. There on the bed, sleeping in a strange position, lay Nick. The bunny's heart felt jabbed at the sight of him there, his limbs twisted around while his chest rose and fell.

"Why are his arms and legs like that?" she asked, crossing towards the bed. She'd only seen him asleep once or twice when she caught him napping at his desk, and this contorted arrangement was nothing like that.

"None of us knows," Aria confessed. "He also has terrible nightmares, but when he wakes up he can never remember them. He only has some sense of impending terror like King Nebuchadnezzar. We can't make sense of those, but the strange contortions… well, I don't want to get you anxious, but it seems like spiritual torment; worst I ever saw."

Judy didn't know how much stock she placed in the nunnery's religious ideas. She thought, at any rate, that the crosses scattered around were a little idolatrous. Still, if the nuns were helping Nick she supposed she should forgive them that and pray that God, if He objected, would overlook too. For her own part, she went up to Nick and stood beside him. As she watched, he rolled to the side away from her and his legs kicked rapidly as if he were running. An inarticulate sound came from his mouth, as if he were trying to form words but kept getting the syllables wrong.

Sensing that he was having a nightmare, she put both her paws on his shoulder and shook him. "Nick! Nick, wake up!"

"Dwah!" he yelped, jolting awake and throwing himself away from her. The caused him to tumble onto the floor, where Sister Aria rushed to his aid.

"Here, here, it's alright," she soothed, catching his flailing paws and pulling him up. "Judith is here to see you."

"Judith?" he asked, fumbling with the name. He clearly wasn't fully awake. Then, as if drawn by some magnetism, he turned and caught sight of her. "Judy!"

He rushed towards her, falling across the bed in the process. She caught him as he wrapped his arms around her, gasping as if he'd been underwater.

Judy wanted to cry, relieved as she was that she'd finally reached him after such sickening dread for his health. "I'm here, Nick," she said.

Sister Aria stood by, paws clasped with relief. "I don't suppose you remember what the nightmare was," she ventured.

He looked at her for a moment. "No," he said, and then returned his attention to his friend. "Judy, what in the world are you doing here?"

She laughed a little in spite of herself. "That's what I wanted to ask you," she pointed out.

The badger cleared her throat. "If you'll pardon my saying so," she ventured pointedly, "I think perhaps Mr. Wilde would like a few minutes to wash himself and dress, and then you two can have something to eat out in the orchard."

It occurred to Judy then that Nick was still in his nightshirt, and while it was hardly improper for her to be there, it was a little out of the ordinary. "Oh, yes," she agreed rather haltingly.

About twenty minutes found them where the badger had suggested. Judy was having a plate of eggplant heavily anointed with thick mushroom gravy, and Nick was snacking on a stew of boiled grubs. Between them sat a plate of biscuits with which to sop.

"So you don't remember what happened?" asked Judy.

He shook his head, passing a paw over his brow. "Like someone wiped it right off the slate, Carrots," he admitted. "At least… well, nothing but snatches after I got to my client, and that's all like something out of a dream."

She bit her lip. "You mean like the dreams you've been having since you got here?"

He nodded. "Exactly. I still can't figure out if I caught some kind of sickness or what." His paw strayed up to his neck, rubbing uneasily. Then he leaned in toward her and whispered, "And to be honest, I don't know if this place is helping much. It feels too… something."

"Something?" asked Judy, scrunching her face and looking around. The orchard was bright and cheery, the air just cool enough to be pleasant, and the nuns going this way and that all smiled to see their patient up and around. "Seems like a pretty nice place to me."

"It's nice, don't get me wrong. I just feel… out of place somehow."

Judy considered that for a while. She and Nick were both members of the Reform Church, and though he wasn't exactly the most devout mammal religion had never made him feel uneasy that she knew of. At the very least, he'd never complained of it, and she would hope that he'd say something to her if that was bothering him. Neither, she suspected, would it bother him being around a bunch of Cat-olic nuns. In his line of business he often had to deal with mammals from all walks of life and even all countries. Neither did the nuns seem to think any less of their visitors for belonging to a different denomination, if they even knew it.

He must have read her, as he often did. "I don't know what it is," he admitted.

"Could it have something to do with your business trip?" she asked.

The answer came with another helpless shrug. "I have no idea. I barely remember the business trip." Then he sighed. "To be honest, I just want to get home and put whatever it was behind me."

This didn't satisfy Judy at all, but if it was what he wanted, she was fine with that. "No problem," she assured him. "I brought enough money to get us both back to Zootopia."

He let out a sound that was half cough, half laugh. "A reynard and a doe traveling together? My my, aren't you the New Woman."

She shook her head. "We can take separate trains, you know," she pointed out. They had, it was true, traveled together once or twice – he on business, she seeking ideas for her novel – but never over such a distance. She was on the whole the more reserved of the two of them, whereas Nick was more of the, 'I know what I've done and no one can change that' point of view.

Nick chuckled a little. "Still stubborn, huh?"

"Nick, the day I stop being stubborn you'll start to find me boring."

"True," he admitted, picking up a biscuit to dip in his broth. "It does have a certain charm to it."

Over the next several days, Judy stayed at the convent, sleeping in one of the extra rooms provided for visitors and newcomers. She was satisfied to see that Nick was tended to at all hours. He had his privacy, but there was always someone awake and in earshot if he should so much as cry out in his sleep.

Sister Aria observed, with evident pleasure, that Judy's presence seemed to be of help to their patient's recovery. Their picnics in the orchard became a regular occurrence as often as the weather would permit it, and during them he began to recall odd snatches. One of these was triggered, he would later say, by the sight of nuns crossing themselves in prayer.

"Early in my trip," he said, "I remember… getting into a carriage with a lot of mammals watching."

"You?" she asked, pausing over some vegetable stew. "In the middle of a staring crowd?" Nick was nothing if no unobtrusive.

He nodded. "Yeah, there was something weird about the whole thing. Everyone kept crossing themselves and then pointing two fingers at me."

That made no sense to Judy, so she asked a nun about it later without mentioning that it had been in Nick's memories.

"Ah, that's a sign," said the nun, shaking her head. "A protection, you might say, against the Evil Eye. Who did you see doing that, and where was it?"

Judy fudged an answer, wondering why someone would do that towards Nick. She knew some mammals claimed that foxes were made by the devil, and she supposed that belief might persist in Roamania since Nick had spoken of the Catpathians being a kind of whirlpool of religions from all across the world. Something in her gut, though, told her there was more going on.

Her unease began to seem better founded as, over the course of a week, other memories came back. Blue flames by a roadside, running up and down halls to escape from something or someplace, and a woman – a deer, he was pretty sure – pressing something into his paws with great earnest. All of these confused him, and the hall one absolutely unnerved him, but the one that seemed to bother him most was something about a tiger.

"He's built like a tiger," he explained one afternoon when they were quite buy themselves, "but he's black all over."

Judy scrunched her face. "That's strange. Tigers don't come in that color. It must have been a jaguar or something."

"I know, but I remember a black tiger… or maybe it was a dream. I don't know." Nick's ears were back, his tail was bunched out, and his eyes had a strangely hollow look to them. "Seems like the last thing I can remember – the only thing I can remember – after these nightmares is that black tiger looking me in the eyes."

Judy didn't know what to make of the whole thing, but the way he told it set her fur on end.

Nick shook his head. "I don't want to talk about this," he said shakily. "I'd rather not even think about it. What's been going on back in Zootopia?"

It was hard to think of anything that would interest him. For Judy, a lot of the time had been spent simply worrying about whether he was alright and why she hadn't heard from him. "Well, there was the shipwreck," she recalled.

"Shipwreck?" Nick's ears pricked up. "That sounds interesting."

She nodded. "It wasn't long before I came out here to get you. This crazy storm just popped up with hardly any warning, and then boom! This ship came out of nowhere and ran itself up on the beach. There was a bear tied to…" Suddenly she stopped, thinking that maybe it wouldn't be best to talk about that part.

Alas, she held her peace in vain. "Bear tied to what?" asked Nick.

Judy bit her lip. "The bear was the captain; the only mammal left aboard. He tied himself to the wheel, and then… he died."

Nick sighed. "Wow, that's… that's awful." He was strangely afraid to ask the next question that came to mind. "Any idea what happened to him?"

With drooping ears, she admitted she wasn't sure. "The newspapers said that the last few days of the logbook talked all about missing sailors and something on board. Apparently the captain was finally the only one left, so he tied himself to the wheel. Guess he thought he had to go down with the ship."

A strange shudder passed through Nick when Judy talked about there being something on the ship. "Did they ever find out what was going on?" he asked.

Judy could do nothing but shrug. "I don't know," she admitted. "I'm guessing it was some kind of disease on board that made everyone crazy. I was pretty busy with Lucy."

"Hmm, that would keep you tied up," he admitted. Orphaned at an early age, Judy had been taken in and raised by a kindly pair of red deer with the name Westenrut. Though she had diligently held onto her original surname through the adoption, she had none the less become very fond of the family that thus chose her. In particular, she had become the bosom companion of their sole progeny, a sweet doe named Lucy. It had been a fortunate friendship for them both, since Lucy had regrettably inherited her father's sickly constitution and needed a companion who could stay by her to pluck up her spirits. Mr. Westenrut had some time back returned to the clay from whence he came, and hardy little Judy had stuck around to keep an eye on Lucy and her aging mother. She even shared a room with Lucy, since neither of them felt like parting company until marriage should draw them away. Indeed, Judy might not have agreed to leave even for Nick's sake if a young doctor – an oryx named Doctor Seward – had not become a close friend of the family and agreed to watch over them.

Of course, Nick's knowledge of this fact raised a significant question. "How is Lucy?" he asked.

Her answer came with a sigh. "She's been…" She hesitated to explain the whole thing. One or two of Lucy's escapades had a terrible prospect of humiliation if they got around, and it wasn't as if the doe could help it. On the other paw, Nick was her best friend (with the possible exception of Lucy), and she knew he would never tell anyone. "She's been sleepwalking."

"Sleepwalking?" asked Nick, blinking a little. "I didn't know she did that."

Judy shrugged. "It comes and goes. She used to do it when she was younger, and for the past couple of months she's been lapsing back into it. One night she went all the way out to the old churchyard, to the seat overlooking the sea cliff."

Nick winced. A young woman in her nightdress that far from home would risk humiliation. "No one saw, did they?" he asked.

She shook her head. "Just her and me, but it got to the point where I had to sleep with the key to the room tied on my wrist. She seems to be doing better, though. She slept just fine for about a week before I got the letter about you. Oh, and she's engaged too."

"Really?" Nick's ears pricked up. The pleasant news piqued his interest. "Who's the lucky guy?"

"Arthur Honewood. Get this: he was the third man to propose to her, all in one day!" Judy's face crinkled with mirth.

He laughed. "I'm not surprised. She's a pretty one."

"Hey!" She scowled playfully, crinkling her nose and putting back her ears.

Nick smiled and slid a paw towards her. "Aw, come on. You know I only go after unattached females."

"You'd better not," she warned with mock severity. Then she remembered something. "Oh, I got a letter from Mother today, actually. I wanted to read it with you around in case it mentioned you."

"Uh-huh. In other words, in case she mentions my rugged good looks?" he asked with smug vanity.

She elbowed him and drew the letter from her purse, proceeding to read aloud.

"Dearest Judy,

"I pray that all is well with you and dear Nicholas. I was glad to learn that you arrived safe and well at the abbey. I hope you two are conducting yourselves so as not to bring shame on the worthy sisters there." At this note, Judy cast a glance at Nick, who only smirked. The fox had been playfully dubbed a bad seed by the old doe, and more than once his uncouth ways had raised warnings of scandal if he should go too far. Come to think of it, so had Judy's now and then.

The next words, however, subdued their exchange. When Judy trailed off and her ears drooped, Nick craned his neck to see the letter. It took him a moment to find what had so unsettled the bunny.

Lucy is elated over her marriage, but I worry for her. She's grown weaker since you left, and that fine gentleman Doctor Seward cannot find what's wrong with her. He has sent word to his old mentor, a professor from Germany, who I am told is a man without equal. I must stay calm about all this, for if anything should become of me who knows what it might do to her? You know that you and she are all I have left now that's worth anything.

Nick leaned his ears back. "What's she mean about something becoming of her?" he asked.

She bit her lip before answering. "Mother didn't want Lucy to know, but… her heart's weak, and she's gotten her last notice. She's got maybe two months to live, and any bad shock will… will kill her instantly."

Nick cringed. "Ouch. No wonder she's keeping it hush-hush." He paused anxiously. "How are you taking it?"

"I've known for a while," Judy admitted, wiping her face. "I guess I always knew she wouldn't live to turn gray, but it's… well, it's hard to believe it's happening."

He laid a paw on hers. "I'm sorry." A long pause preceded his next bit of advice. "Listen, I'll be fine here. You go back home and take care of Lucy and your mother."

She hung suspended between loyalties for a long moment before answering. "No. I'm not leaving you behind like this. You're well enough to travel. I'll get us tickets and we'll be back to Zootopia in a few days."

Nick raised an eyebrow. "You're suggesting we travel together?" he asked doubtfully.

Snorting, Judy slapped him on the arm. "Don't push it, sir. This is bigger than propriety and you know it."

She was right about it being bigger than propriety. Alas, she had no idea just how serious it would be.

I described Judy's arrival in a manner borrowed from WANMWAD's material, though it's pretty intuitive that in older days when horse-drawn carriages were the norm, many equines of the Zooniverse would make their living pulling people around. Essentially the arrangement would be the same, save that the horse and driver would be one and the pulling mechanism would be designed for a biped. The reference to a Gatling gun is also period accurate, as Gatlings were one of the earliest forms of machine gun.

The name of Saint Ninian's Convent is, of course, borrowed from Saint Ninian's Church in the Redwall books. Convents and churches were widely associated with medical care and other charitable endeavors for much of history, ultimately leading to today's Catholic hospitals and the like. Sister Aria is based on Constance from Redwall and named for the voice actress behind Constance Kendall of the Adventures in Odyssey cartoons and radio dramas.

"Brain fever" is an old term for ill-defined mental illness. My classes in psychology never got very far into disease, but I think Nick's symptoms would be diagnosed today as dementia, paranoia, and/or some form of PTSD. The twisted limbs spoken of were historically, and in some circles still are, associated with demonic affliction as Sister Aria implied. The reference to King Nebuchadnezzar (of Babylon) echoes a point in the Hebrew book of Daniel. While the Jews were dominated by the Babylonian empire, the king had a terrible nightmare which he couldn't remember on awakening but was convinced must have some important meaning. He was so desperate to know the meaning that when his wise men and magicians couldn't tell him what he had dreamed he ordered that they all be executed. Fortunately, God showed Daniel what the king had dreamed and what it meant, saving quite a few lives.

I stretched a point with Nick's religious positions, since I suspect Nick would be an agnostic or atheist. The Reform Church I put him in for this story was a denomination which eschewed the elaborate pageantry and iconography of Catholic practices (statues, crucifixes all over the place, rosaries, etcetera), seeing them as idolatrous. This makes more sense if one knows that the bronze snake Moses raised on a pole, to which Jesus even likened Himself at one point, was later worshiped by the people and ultimately destroyed for that reason.

The "Evil Eye" alluded to is rooted in an old superstitious belief that some people have the power to curse someone just by looking at them. I've read in some sources that this belief is tied into such modern expressions as "dirty look" or "if looks could kill," and while I'm not sure of the truth of that I dare say it makes as much sense as anything.

The concern over Lucy's nocturnal escapades is period-accurate. Not only would a late stroll in a nightgown raise chances of a chill, which could be dangerous to someone sickly, but in those days a woman would no sooner go out in her night dress than one today would in her underwear. Even being seen barefoot was something to be avoided for form's sake.

Judy's reservations are another bit of character stretching to fit the time period. While in the movie she does strike me as being a lot more conservative than Nick (as seen in her reaction to Mystic Springs), I suspect that our 21st Century Judy would have few qualms about traveling with Nick unmarried. If she were born and raised in the 19th century she would probably be a bit more reserved.

One thing that came up when people read this on Cimar's project: the black tiger is not a black jaguar or leopard; he is, in fact, a black tiger. Though melanism – the trait which produces so-called black panthers – is not known to occur in tigers, there have been numerous reports of tigers with the black-on-dark-brown fur known in melanistic specimens of other species. Since black tigers fall under the umbrella of cryptozoology – an old fascination of mine – and hang just on the edge of the known, it seemed appropriate to choose one for a figure of such ominous and supernatural aspect as this one.

Night Plague Chapter 1: Shattered Dreams
In Victorian Zootopia, Nicholas Wilde went on what seemed a normal business trip abroad to sell an estate. Months later he appeared half-crazed at an abbey in Boarda-pesth. His friend and confidant Judy Hopps rushed to meet him and try to nurse him back to health, but what she discovered was a breed of evil beyond her darkest nightmares. This is their story. Rating iffy.

This chapter proofread by AngloFalcon. Thanks a million!


"Suspicion often creates what it suspects."

C.S. Lewis, The Screwtape Letters

Judy faxed the highlights of Ramses’ file to the city court, hoping to get a warrant on Olivia's factories and farms.

"Ah, the glamorous life of a cop," Nick quipped when she returned to the meeting room. He was leaning back in his chair with his arms folded behind his head and his ears at a lazy half-cocked sort of angle. "Traffic stops, paperwork..."

Judy huffed, dropping her ears back. "Nick, let's take this seriously, okay? Remember, this case could make or break your chances with the ZPD – and you already have a history that's got you at odds with Bogo."

"Funny you should mention that," he replied, tilting forward until his weight rested on his arms, which he crossed casually on the table. "You missed something; something big."

"What?” Judy looked around, pricking her ears up alertly as she tried to figure out what he meant. “Where?"

He studied his claws. "You're slipping, bunny," he teased, thoroughly enjoying the moment. "Got a guy right in front of you with networking skills that would put the internet to shame, and you need this explained to you?"

Judy's face lit up. "Let's go!" she exclaimed. She reached into her pocket for her cruiser keys, only to find them inexplicably gone.

Nick smirked and held up one paw, swinging the keys on a finger.

"Hey!" Judy snapped.

"Ha ha," he laughed. "Got-"

Suddenly the keys were in Judy's paw, and she had him by the tie. "You blinked. Come on, rookie – and stay out of my pockets."


Their first stop was a shopping plaza in Sahara Square, not far from the Palm Tree Hotel. According to Nick, the area was one of Finnick's favorite hangouts.

Sure enough, they found the van parked between a beverage shop (one of many in the area) and a thrift store. The former looked almost as if it had been carved out of a single piece of stone, with wavy walls in thin lines of strata in varied hues of red, yellow, and brown. Even the sign was carved from a slab of stone, with the letters carved down into a layer lighter in hue than that of the surface. About the only thing about it that looked like it hadn't come out of Baaadrock was a little sign with changeable letters reading, “Special of the Day: Coconut Water.” The thrift store was of more modern build with clean-cut cement walls, a neon sign, and a notice in the window that they were having a special on male clothing. Its effort to look new was somewhat spoiled, as the paint had suffered from wind-blown sand.

Judy glanced at Nick. "You must come here a lot too," she quipped, jerking a thumb at the sign in the thrift store.

The fox folded his arms. "I thought you ladies appreciated a good sale. Come on, let's go see Finnick before-"

A gust of wind peppered them both with sand.

"... the wind picks up?" asked Judy when it had died, leaving both of them looking a good deal more beige.

"Let the record show you slowed us down with the crack about how I dress," Nick pointed out as he strode to the back of the van and knocked. "By the way, duck."

"Why-YEE!?" yelped Judy, heeding Nick's advice just in time. The opening door was followed almost instantly by a swinging baseball bat.

"Easy, Finnick," Nick laughed, standing up straight again and catching the weapon before Finnick could do the back swing. "It's just me and Carrots saying hi."

"Nick? What the heck, fox! Give the password next time. I coulda took you out!"

Nick smirked. "Just giving Carrots her daily reflex check."

"Nick!" Judy cried, smacking him on the arm. "You didn't tell me he'd be so jumpy this time." She'd met Finnick and his bat before when she was trying to find Nick, but the last time he'd asked questions first and swung later – or rather, not at all.

"Oh, he's always a little grumpy this time of day." Nick raised a fist to bump with his old pal. "How you doing, buddy?"

Finnick put aside the bat, and the two foxes bumped knuckles. "So what you doin' here this time?" he wanted to know.

Nick shrugged. "Business," he replied casually. "Mind if we discuss it inside?"

The fennec fox threw a skeptical glance at Judy, then stepped back and waved them in.

Nick climbed in first, then extended Judy a paw which she passed up for dignity’s sake. "Thanks. By the way, proper introductions; Finnick, my little friend here's Judy Hopps, and Carrots, my very little friend here is Finnick."

Finnick glowered at Nick. "You're never gonna let that joke die, are you?” He apparently didn’t think it worth pointing out that he and Judy had already met.

Judy surveyed the van's interior as she chuckled at their banter. The seats had been pulled out, and most of the floor had been covered with shag carpet. The windows were tinted, making the whole interior feel cool and shaded – an effect which, combined with a few posters on the ceiling, conjured images of a night club or a college dorm room. A little electric cooler hummed in one corner, and a flat area with some loops in the wall alongside it, she guessed, showed where the foxes had once hitched the wagons for their popsicle sticks.

It occurred to Judy that she might have to re-think some of her habits. She might be working for the greater good, but could she really consider herself an honest cop if she consulted with known criminals? Then there was that business with Mr. Big; she'd have to figure her way through that too. On the other hand, this might not be the best time for it.

Finnick reached into the cooler. "What flavor pop you want?" he asked.

"Usual," Nick replied.

Judy wasn't even sure what brand of ‘pop’ Finnick meant, but decided to just follow Nick since he at least knew what they were doing. "Whatever he's having."

Finnick pulled out two bottles of blueberry soda and passed them to Nick before he pulled out a cherry one for himself. Popping the cap with his teeth, he extracted it by paw from his mouth and flicked it aside. "So," he asked, "Whatcha want?"

Nick used a small protrusion on the interior of the van to pop both caps, then handed one bottle to Judy. "Following leads on the fuss with ex-mayor Bellwether," he replied. "You know anything?"

"Who doesn't?" asked the miniature fox, still glancing warily at Judy. They hadn't talked much even when she came to ask him where Nick was less than a week before, and he was still cautious around her in light of her chosen occupation. "What kinda leads we talkin' here?"

Nick gestured to Judy, who took that as her cue to start talking. "Well, when Nick and I found the operation, we managed to apprehend Bellwether and two accomplices. At least three are unaccounted for, and we have reason to believe she had other suppliers besides the guy we also nabbed."

"Duke Weaselton," Finnick concluded.

"You know about that?"

Finnick smirked. "Fox-boy here's not the only one who keeps his ear to the ground." Catching the look on Nick's face, he added, "And I don't have to bend down so low to do it."

Nick pretended to be annoyed. "Darn it, you stole my joke."

"It's not stealing if it's worthless," Finnick quipped. "So you came here lookin' for information. Well, I got nothin' – not even for Nick."

Judy had a sneaking suspicion that the fennec wouldn't be so tight-lipped if she weren't around, but decided not to say anything.

"Well, would you mind keeping your ears open? Maybe getting into a few places we can't?" asked Nick.

From the look on Finnick's face, Judy was beginning to wonder if laughing at Nick's predicament when she forced him to help her was the only time the little fox ever smiled.

"I've been pretty busy just trying to keep gas in the van since you split the popsicle business," Finnick replied with a shrug. Then, seeming to lighten just a fraction, he added, "But I guess I could do you a favor for old times' sake."

Nick smiled. "Thanks, buddy – and talking of gas money, there's a reward out for any info leading to these guys' arrest." He handed Finnick a collection of photos of the known suspects, with a bill slipped in for good measure.

Finnick noticed the money, and he did smile a little. "Hey, copper," he asked Judy, "would you mind giving us a minute to ourselves? We've got catching up to do."

Judy got up and showed herself out. Finnick checked the window to see if she might be listening, then looked at Nick.

"So you've really thrown in with the fuzz, huh?"

Nick had been afraid it would come to this. The truth was, he still wasn't entirely sure about the career change – and between Bogo's remarks earlier and what he expected his old friend was about to say, his limited confidence was slipping. "I'm helping her out," he said evasively. "Being an informant has its benefits."

"To the tune of $200 a day?" asked Finnick, raising an eyebrow. "Come on, Nick. Only fools go into that for the cash, and they usually don't last long, if you get my drift."

Thank you for summing that up, thought Nick. He already knew all too well that there were several crime bosses who'd gladly give him the same kind of 'cold shoulder' Mr. Big nearly did. Still, he wasn't about to let his guard down. "Hey, Carrots thinks I can make it."

"You mean she thinks you can change," Finnick argued, "or that she can change you." He spoke with absolute confidence that this was what Judy had planned. There was no question in his mind that the bunny was trying to make some kind of convert out of Nick. "The question is, do you want that?"

Martial artists sometimes practiced the trick of wearing their opponent down with a series of small, well-placed blows to throw off their balance before toppling the foe. Finnick, intentionally or not, was applying much the same approach to their conversation.

Nick, however, was no slouch when it came to verbal MMA either. "Are you worried about me changing," he asked pointedly, "or are you worried about us changing?"

That gave Finnick pause. Of course there was the fact that, if he did become a cop, Nick might be required one day to arrest Finnick. Another aspect of their dilemma, however, went deeper. There was a certain truth among those involved in unscrupulous business, which nearly all of them knew but few ever admitted, even to themselves. No criminal had anything against those who engaged in honest professions – provided that the profession in question didn't get in the way of the crook's line of work. At best, the criminal could laugh at the honest folks behind their backs, fancying himself to be of a higher class who did not let themselves be confined by society's concepts of right and wrong. He might convince himself that if the lowbrows working nine to five had the imagination, the guts, or the intelligence to hack it outside the law, they'd do it in a heartbeat, or tell himself that they simply didn't know what they were missing. At worst, they could be shrugged off. 'Nice that they can live without breaking the rules,' the crook might say, 'but it's not for me.'

Finnick had never been especially good at such defense mechanisms. Mammals like Nick – mammals who had lived in the dark and then embraced the light – made it harder still. They presented an uncomfortable reality: honest living was possible for anyone, if they were willing to do it. When it was someone talented and sly like Nick, the old lie that crooks were in any regard superior to everyday Joe Schmoes fell apart. A crook who went straight was like one of those guys in advertisements who said, 'If I can do it, you can do it,' and they inexorably begged the question: 'So why don't you?'

Deep down, Finnick was not as comfortable with his life as some crooks as many others in society’s underbelly. His conscience was burned somewhat, but not ‘seared with a hot iron’ as his old mother would have said. Maybe that was what stopped him from considering this a personal blow; an attack not just on his career, but on his identity. Still, the pragmatic question remained. "And what if the big cheese tells you to bring me in, huh?" he asked.

Nick shook his head. "I can figure that out when I get to it," he argued. "The police haven't thrown me a mess yet that I couldn't slip out of."

Finnick folded his arms. "Until now, you didn't play their way."

The conversation didn't really go much of anywhere beyond that, and finally Nick just let his shoulders slump. "Look, buddy, this doesn't have to change things between us. Even if we're not in business anymore, we can still be friends, right?" He stuck out his paw to shake.

Finnick hesitated, then shook Nick's paw. "Alright," he conceded. "But you come here with pawcuffs..."

Nick's smile suddenly fell into a dead serious expression. "That's not gonna happen," he promised.

Each of them knew full well that they were making promises they might not be able to keep.


Meanwhile, somewhere in Olivia Poisson's house, a cell phone rang. The owner picked up. "What is it?"

"Judge just got a warrant request on Pwasson's Passions," answered a shaky voice.

"Is that so? Has the judge seen it yet?"

"No. The fax came while she was out of the office."

A grim sigh – possibly weary or possibly content – came through the phone line. "Very good. I'm sure you can file it... appropriately."

"Consider it done." Just before the call ended, there was the sound of a paper shredder.

No Stone Unturned 01: Something Stinks Ch 03
Well now, who do you suppose that was?

My apologies for taking so long to post this on here. A lot of readers on AO3 and really liked the twists in this chapter, especially with Finnick. Hopefully all of you enjoy it too.

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"People pass me in the street, they see me, but they try to ignore me. They'd prefer I wasn't part of their city."

Bird Lady, Home Alone 2: Lost in New York

It had taken some doing to find a flat-topped building in Tundra Town. With the endless presence of snow, ensured by the climate wall for the sake of its denizens, most structures were topped with sharp peaks or domes like inverted onions to save the cost of perpetual snow removal. Yet conveniently for the mammal making his way up the bleak and dun-gray stairwell inside of it, this building was flat-roofed. It was almost as if whatever god or gods there might be had, after heaping stone after stone upon his back, seen fit to grant him this kindness – or else, having driven him to his fate, had chosen now to expedite it. He might have gone to some other part of the city, but this one had… conveniences.

Reaching the door to the roof, he slipped a key from his pocket. If there was one advantage to being a small mammal in a city so full of large ones, it was the ability to go unnoticed. The musk ox assigned to clear the snow from the roof had never realized that one of his keys had disappeared and returned again, leaving a gleaming new copy in the borrower's possession. If it was a sin, the borrower was not concerned in answering for it. The key would be gone soon enough.

It took some doing to reach the lock and push the door ajar. His leg, damaged beyond repair when he was still young and lively, made for slow going, and with the rest of his body weak he had to stop and rest several times from jumping. Moreover, there was a bad wind blowing outside which pushed against the door as though some angel, trying to turn him from his course, meant to thwart the one wish left to him. Yet his old skills had not forsaken him yet, and if he had but one wish he would grapple for it with all his might, be it against flesh or phantom. Driving his toe-claws into the old sheet rock wall, he managed at last to wedge his way into the doorway. With a final effort, he was through and the door shut with a bang behind him.

Now he was out in the wind and the snow, and though he tried to shield his face the flakes stung him like a thousand tiny needles. There was a half-foot of snow on the roof, coming up to his knees and soaking the fur of his feet. It mattered nothing, and he forged his way through it toward a low wall surrounding the rooftop.

Weary from his battle with the door, and with the wind fighting to throw him down as if that bothersome cherub meant to wrestle him flat, he could not jump up onto the wall. Instead he struggled up, standing sideways to the wind as it chilled his face and numbed his paws. His ears were hidden under a ski mask, though it had openings for them. Gazing down at the stretch of city below him, he eyed his mark.

Running past the building on which he stood was one of the district's ice flows; channels of running salt water with pieces of ice floating therein. They served as a kind of moving sidewalk for mammals who favored saved energy over the warmth that came by walking. For him, however, they served another purpose, such that it was for them that he had chosen this district… in which to end his life.

He had calculated it well enough. Math and physics had always come easily to him. The wind would not carry him so far as to miss the water, though it was harder to say whether he would hit floating ice or flowing liquid. It made little difference. At this height the water might as well be the street beyond it. Its' sole advantage was that he might sink in it, and lie there until the trumpet sounded for all he or any other mammal cared.

Sighing out a puff of fog, he thrust a paw into his pocket and drew out a folded stack of papers. In a quiet whisper he uttered what were to be his final wishes.

"I, Shamus Stampett, being of sound mind if not sound body, do hereby present my last will and testament."

Out came a paper from the stack.

"The final notice on my rent, I leave to the winds." The paper was almost snatched from his paw before he could let it go, and shot away into the darkening twilight spinning and twisting like some battered pinwheel.

"My medical results, I also leave to the wind." Another paper joined its adopted brother, carrying with it news that the illness had grown worse.

"My balance with the hospital, also to the winds."

"My identity, to the water."

He watched numbly as a little plastic card, tied to a piece of broken brick, plunged down toward the ice flow. It was too far down to see or hear the splash, but he knew it had reached the water.

He took out the key and threw that as well, but a sudden shift in the wind flung it behind him to vanish untraceable in the snow on the rooftop. He shrugged in indifference. Perhaps the caretaker would find it. It was his by rights anyway, unless one wished to make an argument of his carelessness in letting the original disappear.

At last the figure started to lean forward, waiting for the moment when he would plunge into the abyss. Yet before he overbalanced, a sudden twitch ran through his body like one who has been shocked or who suddenly jolts on the verge of sleep. He wavered and toppled back into the snow on the roof.

"Agh!" he cried as the fall jostled his leg the wrong way. He hissed through his teeth and struggled up, climbing again to the edge. Yet he was not so resolved this time, and a fearful coldness entered into his inner parts as he looked down towards his intended sepulcher.

No, a part of his mind uttered in cold horror. He had a flash of himself lying frozen at the bottom of the waterway, and shuddered at the picture of it; a lifeless thing wearing his face.

Yet, was he not already dead to all purpose? What was life if not more pain, more sorrow, more isolation? Had a wise mammal not once said, "If I die, I am promoted"? Again he leaned forward, and again he drew back, though this time was less a spasm and more of a flinch.

So he tottered for an interminable period, faced with but one choice and yet afraid to seize it. He had nothing to go back to, no one to miss him… and that was even if he could get the door open, which was now impossible. Even if he didn't jump, he would freeze to death in a couple of hours. That might be more peaceful, but… no. To stay up there was to ensure discovery, and with it pity. He would not be pitied; he couldn't bear that emasculating indignity, even in death. If he would die he would have one last rush and then obscurity. The only way off the roof was forward to a swift end, and then to sleep.

A thought struck him, and jumping back onto the rooftop he pulled out his phone; the one thing he hadn't tossed over the edge. This struck him as strange, but now it proved convenient. Music, he thought, unlocking the device with numb, shivering fingers. One last song to ease my nerves for the dive.

He chuckled then. The typical last bit of pleasure, at least in all the old movies, was a cigar. Perhaps he should have brought one; he'd always wondered what the attraction was, and what had he to worry about? He was already doomed. The sentence of death was in his very flesh and bones. Music would do, though. He opened the apps menu and reached for the Music icon.

A sudden shiver made his paws shake, and instead of Music he hit the News app by accident. "Blast it," he hissed under his breath as the window opened. He tried to close it and get to his intended destination as soon as possible, but just as he closed it the page loaded and he got a flash of a face… and a name.

What?! he thought as the app closed. His heart, though already beginning to feel cold and sluggish, gave a painful twist. No! Come back! With all his might, he willed his paws to open the app again and prayed – if such it might be called with so little hope of being heeded – that the selection system would not take him to some other story in the endless shuffling mass of news.

Then there she was… a small figure seated on a stretcher, with the shot so zoomed in that clues to her whereabouts were virtually non-existent. He could not have cared less about that, though. All that mattered was the face… and the headline.

Judy Hopps Back. Rabbit Officer Exposes Plot.

The headline – apart from the atrocious pun – was scarcely informative, but the first three words seized his attention as swiftly and held it as firmly as a starving alligator. For a long moment all he could do was stare at the picture as though he were seeing a ghost. Yes, a ghost, but the ghost of an old and dearly cherished friend.


He had known her once, long ago when they were young. Their friendship had been brief due to the hands of fate and family, but there had been a camaraderie close enough to set a few tongues wagging. It was all empty talk. A rock sitting alone in the woods had, he surmised, more romance than the both of them put together. Yet she had shared his peculiarity, and when he learned that she was in the city – and moreover that she had achieved her dream where his had died beyond any hope – he had watched for her in the headlines every day. He was no stalker; the thought of contacting her barely even tickled at the edges of his mind, busy as he was with his treatments. Yet despite having no idea he was in the city, she had impacted him… for better and for worse. When the headlines exploded with news of her resignation, his heart broke within him and the brief improvement in his health crashed into the dust.

Now, so much later, he fervently read the rest of the article, taking it in like a starving mammal who eats so fast as to taste nothing. Two things did catch his attention: that she had been hospitalized for minor injuries, and that – according to the closing line – it was unclear whether she would resume her career with the police.

Ha! he thought, the reporter's ignorance making him smile for the first time in… how long had it been? More than three months, for certain. Yet now he nearly laughed. If Judy was anything like she had been in her younger days, her future was sure as summer, as his old uncle Ben used to say. Yes, she was the same; at any rate she wore the same old 'I don't know when to quit' smile. She'd be back alright. Within a week most likely, she'd be back on patrol if she had to do it in a wheelchair.

You always were a fighter, Judo Judy, he thought, recalling the old nickname. Some kid whose name he'd long since forgotten had stuck it on her in mockery, but she had worn it with pride – kind of like the song "Yankee Gnu-dle."

Yes, she had always been a fighter… and like a ray of sun slowly breaking through the clouds, it came on him that if she were there at that moment, he knew what she would say. She would tell him to keep fighting, and convince him too. Though he'd always had the advantages of size and strength, any sort of debate had always been over before it began. If there was a mammal who could win an argument with her, he'd want to shake their paw; the paw of the finest wordsmith in the state, if not the galaxy.

She would tell me to fight, he reflected. She'd tell me not to stop; to keep trying no matter what.

He looked up again; not at the street this time, but at the skyline and the sun still visible up here, though in many parts of the city below it was as good as night. The tapestry of reds, oranges, yellows, and purples decorating the skyline stood out brightly over a city whose lights were now beginning to blink on; the same city as so many other nights, and yet now different.

Wrong had been made right. The savage predator attacks were over now, and the villain behind them was now under lock and key. Mammals would go to sleep in peace that night who had, for so long it seemed like forever, lived every moment in fear that they or someone they knew would turn in an instant into a crazed killer. For the vast population of Zootopia, life could begin anew.

And somewhere out there – maybe in a hospital bed or a private one or even on a couch – lay one mammal who just might remember her old friend. One mammal whom, he was sure, he could tell anything in the world without fear of dismissal or doubt or the dozen other things that had held him silent for so very long.

The wind still blew, though, and the snow still jabbed. He sighed and turned to the door, still shut against him. It was just as cold, impassive, and impenetrable as before. Yet now that hope had come back to his heart, it brought with it its brother, inspiration.

An hour later, the door jostled as a large, heavy animal shoved at the other side. Through several grunts and a nasal bellow or two, a hairy head and shoulders came into view. The musk ox was so intent on his work that he never noticed the hollowed-out cave in the mound of snow by the door… or the tiny form slipping through the gap he had made in the door. Nor did either of them quite detect – though the latter had perhaps a small inkling of it – how the subsiding wind sounded strangely musical in that little form's wake.

Shivering and slapping his paws together to get the blood flowing, the small mammal was already thinking over his options. He'd find a place to spend the night, and then… oh, there was no knowing what he'd do next. He would think of something, though. He would find a way, and now he had at least one goal in life; one thing on his To Do list to keep him going.

I've got to see Judy again, he thought. Somehow, I have to find her… and tell her what she just did.

No Stone Unturned 00: Sing Me to Sleep

Every year, countless people all over the world end their own lives for one reason or another. Some do so because they feel they will never measure up, some because they want to escape regrets for the things they've done, some because they feel life has no meaning, and some because, like this unfortunate mammal, they just want to die on their own terms. The causes and means are many, but the reality is always terrible – and made worse because in most cases, the key common thread is a sense that no one is listening.

I don't really know why it first came upon me to write this story, but it happens that this is Suicide Awareness Month and the weight of it came so heavily on me that I had to put aside even working on my books to put this piece together. As I told a friend early in the process, I truly felt that God was compelling me to write it. I still feel that way. It seemed appropriate to do it this way and have Judy's actions in the movie unwittingly stop a suicide because something of the kind happened in real life. Some of you may know the band Third Day. I don't know if their song, I Need a Miracle had any role in inspiring this story or not, but it has much the same plot and was based on a story a fan told them about one of their other songs actually saving his life. The truth is that, like Judy and Third Day, sometimes we really don't know the impact of our actions. To condense Judy's words, though, "But we have to try. So I implore you, try."

The first part of this story was written to Edgar Allan Poe's The Raven. The latter, starting about where the character smiles, was written to In Like a Lion (Always Winter) by Relient K, and toYou Know Better Than Ifrom the movie Joseph, Prince of Dreams. If any of those needs explanation, I suggest listening to them. I just don't have the words.

All I can say in closing is please, try. If you're thinking of suicide or know someone who is or even just have a concern about the issue, please. Don't. Give. Up.

Special thanks to Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps for proofreading.



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Well, I've been gone from DA for a long time, so here's a quick update.  I'll no longer be submitting Farmville art; as much fun as it was, it's too time-consuming.  I may try to brush up on my art skills over the winter, but my main focus is on writing.

I currently have one completed fantasy novel, and more in progress.  No word yet on publication, though I'm working on it.  I was going to post samples of my books in progress on here, but after considerable thought I decided this site wouldn't offer enough protection of my material.  However, I will be posting fan fiction on here, at least in teaser form.

A quick list of some of my ideas:

New and improved versions of the Toby Series (some of you may know it from Balto Source)
A few anthro-verse stories about the Balto cast, rated T just to be safe
An X-Men story called "The Genosha Project" about a non-mutant journalist spending a year among mutants
A Bambi fanfic, yet to be detailed
Land Before Time stories, yet to be detailed

I'm also considering my own version of a rebooted Road Rovers series, which I know would be a thorny idea for many fans of the old show.

All thoughts or questions are welcome; let me know what interests you!
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