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My Little Hedgehog: Freedom is Magic Chapter 6
Chapter 6
Eggman roared with rage “WHAT DO YOU MEAN THEY TOOK THE PRISONERS!? WHERE WERE THE ROBOTS!?” he screamed,
“Sir, the robot ponies were occupied by Super Sonic, who was making passes at the bridge” said Snively “in addition to that, we sustained minor damage to the midsection, and we've lost 75% of our firepower and 50% of our fighter force. We do however, have more than our complement of infantry including the… uhh… 'P-units'. ”
Eggman steepled his fingers and leaned back into his chair. “as the fleet made their reconnaissance runs?” he growled.
“Yes sir.”
“And what did they find?”
Snively shifted to a more relaxed stance, this was the good news “nothing more advanced than crossbows and catapults…”
“Excellent! Any magic to speak of?”
Snively hesitated “… Yes… sort of… the land seems to be saturated with chaos energy”
Robotnik groaned &
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My Little Hedgehog: Freedom is Magic Chapter 5
Chapter 5
Dr. Eggman and Snively walked down a corridor on board the Egg Carrier, robots and Dark Egg legionnaires bustling about like ants around them. The two Overlanders reached a secured door and Eggman punched in the pass code. The door slid open, and entered the darkened chamber where prison cells lined the walls and were filled with recent prisoners from Hoofington.
Eggman chortled heartily as he swaggered up to the observation deck. “Well! What have we here, some pretty little magic ponies?” He threw back his head and roared with cackling mirth “this will be easier than I thought!” He slammed his fist on a release button, and one of the cells opened.
Two Egg Pawns dragged out a screaming and protesting unicorn wearing a fine suit from its debts and threw him bodily before the observation platform.
“Unhoof me you vile monkeys! Get me out of these chains immediately! When my auntie hears about this you'll all be in for it!” wailed Prince Bluebl
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My Little Hedgehog: Freedom is Magic Chapter 4
Chapter 4
News had traveled as fast as the messenger pegasi could fly. Medics and ambulance carriages lined the platform as the train chugged to a stop. Sonic and Rainbow Dash rushed in out of the steam a second later. The Canterlot citizens stared open mouthed at Sonic, and momentarily forgot their concern as he grinned and waved with Rainbow Dash
Tails Came out of the door of the train and flew over to Sonic, eliciting more awed remarks from the crowd. Then the victims of the attack were brought out. Scores of wounded and hundreds of survivors poured form the crowded train. Relatives rushed to greet one another, those new to Canterlot stayed with friends or kin being carted off to the hospital, and those left went into the city to find lodging or transport elsewhere. All were followed by herds of reporters.
But none approached Sonic, Tails, or Rainbow Dash, instead, royal guards crashed down out of the sky like meteors on all sides.
“Get flying…” grunted one “
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My Little Hedgehog: Freedom is Magic Part 2 (4-6)
   Chapter 4
   News had traveled as fast as the messenger pegasi could fly. Medics and ambulance carriages lined the platform as the train chugged to a stop. Sonic and
   Rainbow Dash rushed in out of the steam a second later. The Canterlot citizens stared open mouthed at Sonic, and momentarily forgot their concern as he
   grinned and waved with Rainbow Dash
   Tails Came out of the door of the train and flew over to Sonic, eliciting more awed remarks from the crowd. Then the victims of the attack were brought
   out. Scores of wounded and hundreds of survivors poured form the crowded train. Relatives rushed to greet one another, those new to Canterlot stayed with
   friends or kin being carted off to the hospital, and those left went into the city to find lodging or transport elsewhere. All were followed by herds of
   reporters.
   But none approached Sonic, Tails, or Rainbow Dash, instead, ro
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PinkForsythia Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the watch c:!
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Dragodonv2 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2018
No problem, you deserve it!  Don't stop improving!
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OutlawMoruko Featured By Owner Edited May 2, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for following my page :D
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Dragodonv2 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
You deserve it!  Keep it up!
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OutlawMoruko Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Well that's very generous of you, thank you :)
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Adipose-Rex Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the clock
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Dragodonv2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2018
No problem, Camelidae are forthcoming
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DylanCArt Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2017  Student General Artist
Hello I DylanCart I make crossover story's do you want to read my story's do you want to read my story's ?
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Dragodonv2 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017
I've looked at a couple, and you have a ways to go.  I would start by spelling the plural of story "Stories".

Otherwise, you have a creative soul, and I don't desire to dampen it.  But you will need to work on your writing prowess.

Your main problem is that of all writers who start out without much feedback on their work, you are not writing a story, but a series of events.

Take a look at this short video about the creative process of south park writers Trey Parker and Matt Stone:

www.aerogrammestudio.com/2014/…

Whether you like south park or not, the advice in this video is a part of what you could do to improve your writing.

There are many other things too, but that will come with time and practice.

Have a nice day!

-Dragodonv2
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LNMman Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...And thanks for the llama.
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