Page 15. I tried not using screentones at all.
This isn't the same friend from the first scene, is it? I'm a little confused. I know irl a girl like her is going to have a big social circle, but for simplicity's sake it might be better in the future to only stick to one design for a side friend if they're not playing a particularly big role in the story.
text shouldn't take much space on panels, which is why it's better to use smaller size for text. Just a little advice. n.n
Yes. Great advice for print media, I know. I worked at several small publications over the years. But, this is also going up on Instagram and Twitter and there the text has to be legible even without zoom or people will just pass it over. Thank you though.