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What If Celestia... 10




What if Twilight never made friends? What if the Elements of Harmony would have been destroyed forever?
What if Celestia had been forced to handle all the problems herself? How would the story go then?

A comic series from doubleWbrothers :icondoublewbrothers: (and on the first 5 pages also Mr-Spider-The-Bug :iconmr-spider-the-bug:) where we will get all the answers to the question: "What if Celestia..."

Story and sketch by us, the doubleWbrothers

Lineart by Pony-Berserker :iconpony-berserker:

Coloring and backgrounds by xXAngeLuciferXx :iconxxangeluciferxx:

Proofread and co-written by DracoBlair :icondracoblair:
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Monkeyrofl901's avatar

Those concentric circles and Roman Numerals terrify me, and I don't know why.

Toonman1508's avatar

I'm imagining if someone makes an OC based on Celestia's Chaos Form.

oh, Discord saying "friendship is a hoax" reminds me of a comic book where Sinestro said "love is just a chemical reaction in the brain. love is a lie."

BUT he was lying, he had been in love himself, long ago...

BUT...she was killed by one of his enemies!

and THAT was when he started turning evil!

RaptecClawtooth's avatar

-I don't need friends!

-Yeah tell that to Fluttershy

Nice one, looking forward to more!

What do the red circles mean though? They scare me a little bit.

Sora2455's avatar

Yeah, the one thing Celestia consistently sucked at, even before Twilight's protagonist status put her under the Worf effect, is redeeming people.

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SPB2015's avatar

Discord's about to die, I can feel it! But he'll have succeeded in causing Celestia to snap.

neogoki's avatar

are those.. circle of Hell or something?

Red Rings of Death?

I'm confused and scared.

SekmetTriplenine's avatar

If this form called "divine comedy", it's exactly circles of Hell.

neogoki's avatar

yupp, that book.

so comes now the ascent?

BJDazzle's avatar

Those circles are escalating really quickly now...

tigreanpony's avatar

That was good, looking forward to the next page.

Ironbuster's avatar

oh poor Celi... looks painful

jamestkelley's avatar

*first panel*

You take the moon and you take the sun... and you make a hammock.

Drakenhof's avatar

Sun, moon and earth faces scares me

aqdrobert's avatar


Jean Luc finds this story engaging.

anideterm3's avatar

could that countup be like that mob psycho 100 where the protag's powers can get more powerful and potentially out of control the more time passes or enraged he gets i think i recall correctly? except maybe it is simplified to 10 or something? something relating to friendship?

Vashthepsicho's avatar

what's with the ominous counting in roman numerals?

jimmyhook19202122's avatar

In all seriousness, who here is getting really tired of Twilight making all of this up and making Princess Celestia look bad?


Phoenix-Mask's avatar
She isn't making anything up
jimmyhook19202122's avatar

Yes she is though.

Did you not even read the title of the comic though? :/

Phoenix-Mask's avatar

Says the one you doesn't even read the comic because it explains clearly that it's a spell to show an alternate past

jimmyhook19202122's avatar

Well Twilight is clearly making Tia look bad so NYAH.

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