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Serves You Right (Page 9 of 9) by doubleleaf Serves You Right (Page 9 of 9) by doubleleaf
I finished it ;o; I thought I won't be able to.

Thank you sooo much again to :iconpeachy-feet: for the story, and :iconsaphrawn: for the translations, you are such a wonderful people.

The original story can be read here! [link]
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NotYourParadigm Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I absolutely loved this comic and story. I hope it's ok, but I was inspired to write a bit of a sequel to what happens next!…

Thanks again for this and all your other works and comics you've made, you are an absolute blessing to the community! <3 
MonsterMercer Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017
Excuse me, could I make a fandub of this comic?
HZ-Blaze Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016  Student
Nice art style. 
My feeling right now is quite complex. I...don't know I should be serious about this comic or not, but my personality makes me think very deeply on almost everything and I can't help it. 
I want to talk about Altair. Yes, you, and the author of the story are right. He was pathetic! When I read comments about Altair, people often say the words like "arrogance","cold-blooded" and "emotionless". Altair's greatest flaw, which seems to be agreed by most of the players, is arrogance. But I don't think so. Arrogance is not part of Altair's true personality.
I think his greatest flaw that led him to make those mistakes was blindness. Because of the blindness, he didn't see the consequence that breaking the creeds would lead to; didn't care about others' feeling and couldn't see who he really is, his true self. Therefore blindness was what made him "arrogance","cold-blooded" and "emotionless". Those are not really who he is!
What makes me believe it is that an arrogant person couldn't seek out the truth and be brave to do the right things. An emotionless person won't try their best to improve his organizaion......
Blindness was more like an obstacle rather than a flaw for Altair, which covered his true self. I played Assassin's Creed 2 and read all the document Altair had wrote. I found out that he has a rich inner world, and he does care about the Assassin organization and the creed. 
That is the reason why I like him. 
True, he is imperfect and he did commit severe mistakes. His blindness made him pathetic. But at the end, Altair overcame his obstacle and achieved his final redemption-the forgiveness of Malik. He changed, becoming a better person.
I saw myself on Altair. Although he was arrogant, I was self-abased, we both suffered in blindness and coundn't see who we really are. Then we made different mistakes under different circumstances. But it was Altair gave me courage to see and to accept who I am. He showed me the courage to defense the standpoint, so I had courage to say no to the things I didn't want to accept. "Nothing is true. Everything is permitted" is not about freedom, but about choice. We all have choice to be a better self, rather than let our obstacles take away our freedom. 
Anyway, I still believe his true self.
midnightangel1234 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2016  Student General Artist
Somehow I feel Malik really would do this.....
Flammensturm2 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2016  Student Writer
I really love this. Your style is truly amazing, still I have a question. What about the people who don't know German? They don't know what the Templar is saying. They can only guess from the content
waarealldifferent Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Honestly, I agree in a way, but in a dire situation regarding Altair's life, he would have half of a heart to let him in. 
Only if he says the magic word
Flammensturm2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Student Writer
What do you mean?
I have the feeling that we aren't exactly talking about the same thing 😀
waarealldifferent Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I meant like, Malik wouldn't stand there and let Altair get hurt, you know? He wouldn't deny him a but of help, even though Altair normally doesn't need help because he's a badass. Wait... What exactly are YOU Talking about? : )
Flammensturm2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Student Writer
I was talking about the fact that some people don't know German, so they don't understand what the Templar has been saying :D
I don't think we were talking about the same thing LOL
waarealldifferent Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I know German just not enough. Oops! Sorry about that!
Flammensturm2 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Student Writer
No problem. German is my mother-tongue, so I have no problems understanding it ;)
Besides, I always appreciate it if people use German in their stories :heart:
waarealldifferent Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Oh! That's awesome! I take the class in school, but I'm glad people do use other languages as well. That's really cool though! 😄😊
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Falcolf Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Professional General Artist
Gaaah, love this so much! Awesome work! :D
fluff-lynn Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Shyerue Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Malik is sooo awesome °3°
tsumefan2 Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
malik and altair still don''t get along
starlightyuki Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha the last one reminds me of me and my friend after I slid down a wall while doing parkor, hahah

Friend: you should be grateful I have bandages in my locker or you would be walking around with blood all over.
Me;* forehead bleeding* Just shut up and get the bandaged!
Luna-Fantasma Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow did this really happen to you? you got wounded till your forehead bleed doing parkour? ^^; that's an activity I'd always wanted to practice after playing Assassin's Creed :D
This comic was awesome :lol:
starlightyuki Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well what happens was I was climbing up a wall at school with my friends and my hand slipped and I smacked my forehead on the edge.
Luna-Fantasma Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ouch that must have hurt a lot XD!!!
starlightyuki Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It did! But what made it worst was I was part of the color guard and we were doing this before a football game so the first half of the game we were figure trying to hide the huge ban aid I had on my forehead before half time! XD
polithia101 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Photographer
is malik really that douchy or did altair really betray the creed? (Please spoil the first game for me i dont ave the money to get it)
GaleonaPyro Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sadly, Altair was douche-worthy in the first game.
He was born in a family of assassins, raised to be an assassin since birth, and was a remarkable learner who always had the approval of Al Mualim (The head of the Assassin Order in Syria). With that, he was a very arrogant assassin, even though he already gained the rank of Master Assassin long before the first game started.

When the first game started, because of his arrogance, he broke all three rules of the creed. Al Mualim stripped him of his rank to have him return to the lowest of ranks - novice.
Throughout the journey of the game, he had to learn how to hunt, assassinate and research on targets the novice way. The hard way.
And through that journey, he learned humility and a thirst to always seek for knowledge rather than being complacent and arrogant all the time.
polithia101 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Photographer
thank you :3
insanity-renaissance Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Not to mention when he breaks all the the tenents of the creed, he ends up getting Malik's brother killed and Malik loses his arm. So Malik has plenty of reasons to hate him.
x0Shadow-Panther0x Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
attractive malik is attractive
even when hes a douche
ImaFluffyyUnicorn Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student General Artist
I really love the story, Great job!!! ;)
HowlingBlossom Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Any chance you will be making more Malik/Altair comics? I love your art and I know you would do some great work.
ShadowFelix Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
I can really feel the love.
LZonnaArt Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yes <3
SHSLTimelord Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: Oh god I can't handle it those two are just to cute as friends I can't handle this, it's so cruel I want them to hug and eat cookies together ughhh ;A; 
OliwekPL Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
Oh my gawd, Malik, you bastard! D: He was right, though, and Altaiir wasn't really nice to him. 
I'm just glad they ended up respecting each other in the end of the book~ And game~ 

So awesome comic, by the way, I love your skills, and the story (I know it's not yours, I still love it), and everything~ ;-;
Awesomness. <3
Rose813 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
I love this story. great pictures.
FullMetal-Panic Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist
Later- ... Stupid sadist Malik. *fangirls over everyone*
Pollle Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
This is simply the best AC-Dojin... You caught the characters so well! Anytime I watch your art, I want to play the first part of the series again *starts the PS3*
AssaixFedajini Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Fantastic! Great work :clap:
yunatsukihana Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
I like you style =)
freakinwalkinparadox Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student General Artist
LaniWonderzWhy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Malik's expression in the first panel is just beautiful.
Hiten-No-Rurouni Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Excellent! I love reading your stuff!
SweetNSpice112 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that was awesome
Rookie141 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
malik's expression is so genius i laughed a lot xD very well drawn!! love the style! and the german scentenses were perfect ;)
IwaNin22 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
I love Malik's expressions~!! >3<
xVentressx Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
So eeevilll~X)))
LadySkyBlue Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool :) <3
suooki Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh this made me smile
Loopy-Pepper Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NOW KISS! :icontuzkisnogplz:
Breaksky Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!! we want more stories of both!! <3
RAMENmanga-ka Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional
How do you do the poses? I find that especially hard T^T
cruzkit Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
As an artist on a scale of 1 to 10 you are clearly an 11!
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