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Happy New Year
The hand on the large clock turned to 11:50. She stood alone on the veranda, idly sipping her champagne. Platinum blonde, slender build, she was wearing a stunning white dress that sparkled and shone under the moonlit stars. She walked slowly to the railing, surveying the darkened valley below. The sounds of the party behind her were muted, even with the wide open doors, as she sipped from her glass. The champagne bubbles sent a chill down her arms and legs, causing her to shiver as she turned back toward the reveling crowd.The hand on the clock crept to 11:55. She took a step toward the lighted portal, stifling a small burp. All this champagne, she mused, was catching up with her. She placed the near empty glass on the rail, raising her hand to discretely obscure her mouth as she felt the bubbles tickle her nose.The clock turned to 11:57. She paused after only a few steps. She felt the need to burp again but try as she may, the gas seemed to lodge in her
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Keg of Pride
[Female and Male Inflation; No Popping]
It was a calm day as Laura prepped her tavern, the “Champion’s Den,” for another day of business. It was a name she could proudly say she earned. As the village heavyweight drinker, many tried to beat her but could never keep up. It was clear as day that the revenue would flow as long as those stubborn few were among the regulars. The morning mist had rolled down from the mountain tops and into her bar alongside strangers entering far earlier than most. Despite this, this Laura gave the cloaked duo her friendliest greeting, “Welcome to the Champion’s Den! I can promise you fine ale and that you can’t outdrink me!”
Inquisitively the taller stranger asked, “Is that so, barkeep? I propose to you a challenge to cement your title if you’re so willing.” With a smirk, Laura couldn’t help but chuckle, “I accept, but would you kindly introduce yourselves. I need to know who to charge for all the ale that’d be required.”
The duo lowered their robes to
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A Pleasurable Inflation
It all worked very easily. Lilian dragged her fingertips across the rubber buttons on the remote. It all worked smoothly, the system having been perfected and re-perfected over decades and much like how one eventually figured out the immaculate way to fix the cogs of a clock, someone had figured out how to perfect this.Lilian positioned herself onto the sofa, her body easing into the crisp fabric. She wore nothing but an old bikini - black, and plain - that she wouldn't mind ruining. Everything was tingling within her, even before the process began. Her breathing quickened, the hairs on her arms stood up and her skin prickled. She wanted i...
This story embodies the quintessence of my long writing cycles. I started writing this one around the same time I started writing "The Masterpiece Society" in early 2006, 12 (!) years ago. It had no working title, and in typical fashion I wrote about 500-600 words and then left it alone to let my ideas stew. Months later, I accidentally deleted its text file from my hard drive and was only able to recover half of it, in two separate parts. A little while later I became less enamored with the idea anyway and was still demoralized at losing half of it, so I just abandoned it. In fact, I have referenced this story on four separate occasions - here, here, here, and here. "#6" became "The Masterpiece Society"; "#7" is this story.
I went nearly a decade without ever looking at the remaining fragments of the story. Then I randomly thought about it again a couple days ago and decided to give it another look. The idea became endearing to me again, so I pulled it into Google Docs today and rewrote the whole thing damn near from scratch. Precisely four lines of dialogue between Alyssa and Katie remain from the original version I started in 2006.
It's far from my best work, but it was fun to write - it's not often that I find myself smiling while writing a story. I actually LOL'd when I read the Prg parts aloud.
It's also the first time in a long time that I've written bursting into a story. Alyssa was going to burst in the original version as well, although I had second thoughts about it this time, so I decided to make the ending ambiguous. After all, Prg had no trouble returning her to normal several times before that. If you prefer to think that Alyssa was safely reassembled after bursting, you're welcome to think that; if you prefer to think that Alyssa is gone, that's no less valid. Personally, I actually don't know.
Excited about some stuff I'm planning to do here in 2018!
I went nearly a decade without ever looking at the remaining fragments of the story. Then I randomly thought about it again a couple days ago and decided to give it another look. The idea became endearing to me again, so I pulled it into Google Docs today and rewrote the whole thing damn near from scratch. Precisely four lines of dialogue between Alyssa and Katie remain from the original version I started in 2006.
It's far from my best work, but it was fun to write - it's not often that I find myself smiling while writing a story. I actually LOL'd when I read the Prg parts aloud.
It's also the first time in a long time that I've written bursting into a story. Alyssa was going to burst in the original version as well, although I had second thoughts about it this time, so I decided to make the ending ambiguous. After all, Prg had no trouble returning her to normal several times before that. If you prefer to think that Alyssa was safely reassembled after bursting, you're welcome to think that; if you prefer to think that Alyssa is gone, that's no less valid. Personally, I actually don't know.
Excited about some stuff I'm planning to do here in 2018!
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Very fun and cohesive storytelling!