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:iconnicolazanarini:
Hello,

Let me start off by saying that once I managed to understand the picture, your idea is indeed interesting (hence the high originality score).
However, both the angle used and the too wide aperture (that is to say f5.6 is far too wide for a 200mm in macro) make it very hard to understand the image. I must admit that at first I though it was flower from the front, and only after about 15 seconds of looking at it did I manage to see that it was from the back.
I suggest you use a shorted focal lenght next time (for a macro 50 is enough, but 100 isn't unheard of) with which a 5.6 will be more appropriate and play with the angle to try and see different results.

I think you might be onto somethign here, yet this time the technique used really didn't work.

keep up the hustle,

Nicola
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bridgetbright Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Perfection ~ I love this one Heart 
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dorolain Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :hug: 
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dorolain Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much :) 
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awfultosee Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
welcome!
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Stunning shot!
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dorolain Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :) 
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconyoureverywelcome:
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SarahharaS1 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
very beautiful :heart:
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dorolain Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :aww: 
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SarahharaS1 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Welcome :D
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August 20, 2013
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Camera Data

Make
SONY
Model
SLT-A65V
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
200 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Aug 14, 2013, 1:12:03 PM
Software
GIMP 2.6.8

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