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Swamp Children, Final Chapter
Swamp Children, Final Chapter Far away, back to the very beginning of the battlefield, King Katabaisis slowly struggled to a sitting position against a giant boulder. “Even with my arm cut off…I will not die! I am immortal!” He struggled to grab at the vial pulled the chain off his neck, gripping the lid with his teeth and yanking it off. He spat out the lid and poured the liquid onto his severed limb. “There, see? The wound already heals! Ha ha, I will become invincible and rule the world!” “Wow, you’re pretty stupid, aren’t you?” A child’s voice laughed on the breeze that tickl
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Swamp Children, Part Nine
Swamp Children, Part Nine “We must not go towards the camp!” Kratos called out to the others as they sped forward. “We must end this peacefully! Apollo!” She shouted up towards the sky. “You and Hawk search for the leaders! Find them and take them to safety, away from the swamp! Only their armies will listen to them!” “Shouldn’t we just let them all take each other out?” Enkidu shouted. “I will ignore that you said that!” Kratos snapped back. Nostos turned from her spot. “Enkidu! We need to end this peacefully! If we let them all attack each other while we escape, it
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Swamp Children, Part 8
Swamp Children, Part 8 Everyone at the table began to scream and run away as Katabaisis continued to fire off his gun in random directions, listening as screams were met with the sound of a bullet ripping through flesh making his escape to his horse. There was a loud howl of a wolf and he looked up as the giant animal tore down the hill, jumping high into the air and over him, landing next to his horse. The wolf spun around and sank his teeth into Katabaisis’s horse’s throat, ripping the throat out before turning towards Katabaisis, its lips bared back and sharp fangs dripping with blood. Katabaisis fell to the ground, firing sho
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Swamp Children, Part 7
Swamp Children, Part 7 When Katabaisis rode over the hilltop that evening, he saw a great giant tent, a giant circular table under it. Sitting in their chairs sat the nineteen other leaders, kings and queens. After struggling down from his horse and making his way over to the chair, all twenty of the territory kings and queens were finally there. Of the kings there was Pluto, Jupiter, Saturn, Kyklopes, Poseidon, Alkinoös, Hercules, Labdakos, Charagos, Creon and Horatio. Of the queens was Arêtê, Amphitritê, Seirênê, Artemis, Kitharion, Antigone, Iphthimê and Aphrodite, who was being escorted to the tab
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Swamp Children, Part 6
Swamp Children, Part 6 “What did you do to me?!” He shouted. “I didn’t do anything. You are now branded with our mark. Open your eyes, you’re fine.” Slowly Enkidu blinked, the pain slowly leaving his body as he sat up. “Here,” Venus said, kneeling in front of him as she held out a mirror. “You’re one of us now. If you weren’t worthy of being a Treasure, Nostos would have killed you.” Enkidu looked in surprise in the mirror, his eyes now blue instead of brown. That’s when he realized that everyone in the room, no matter what ethnic group, had blue eyes. “W
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Swamp Children, Part 5
“These are the children of Treasures, like me. We each have a treasure we represent, and an animal that stands for that treasure as well.” Kratos said, setting down her hammer. “We came from different territories. I am from the seventh territory, and as I told you, I represent Outer Strength. This here is Apollo,” She gestured to a giant and strong looking Native American who had scars on his shoulders that looked like claw marks, his face solid and stoic looking. He merely stared at Enkidu, his eyes not reveling what he was thinking. He wore a headband with feathers in it and a giant loin cloth that covered his lower
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Swamp Children Part Five
Swamp Children Part Five While Kleos and Gilgamesh got into a yelling bout inside, Enkidu was outside struggling with tears of anger. His  mother had suffered bitterly because of the ordeal with Odysseus, even though she claimed her innocence, his father had decided it would be best to punish her just to remind his court to never double cross him. To think that I have been turning into him sickens my core. How could I have allowed this to happen? Mother…I hope you are safe right now. He thought to himself before looking up and seeing from the shadows the girl Kratos, the one who had wanted to finish him off. With everyone yelling at e
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Swamp Children, Part Four
Swamp Children, Part Four “My young son grew weary of my long life,” Oedipus said, his voice thick with emotion. “One night I laid in my bed chambers, sleeping peacefully, when I heard the floor board next to me creaking. I opened my eyes and saw a dagger lying heavily across my throat, my young son holding it. Yet he could not do it. Perhaps a tiny shred of a human heart still was in him at that moment, but he could not strike down his own father. So he had me taken out to these swamp lands and banished, leaving me with only the clothes on my back and my crown, with which I used to blind myself after I was left out there.
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Swamp Children Part Three
Swamp Children Part Three “You! You were the Great Captain Odysseus! You should be dead, executed.” Khorysos said in surprise as the once glorious man made his way tiredly down the stairs. His proud frame that had once graced the court was now sagging with age and exhaustion, his once glorious polished armor dull, rusted and covered in dents. “The keyword is ‘were’. Now I am no more than a joke to be laughed and scoffed at by the King and his pea-brain followers.” Odysseus replied as he came to the end of the flight of stairs, wrapping his tattered maroon cape about his body as if trying to ward off a chi
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Swamp Children Part Two
Swamp Children Part Two When Khorysos awoke, his head was throbbing greatly. He was tied up, lying in the corner of a mud hut with thick weeds bound together to make the floor. Sitting across from him was the Prince tied up, his dark brown eyes flashing as he stared at Khorysos from his corner. “Prince, are you hurt?” Khorysos grunted as he blinked rapidly, trying to force his pounding headache to go away. “Where are we?” “Did my father send you to follow after me?” Prince Enkidu snapped back. “No, I didn’t even know you were outside of the town walls.” Came the muttered reply as Khory
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Swamp Children, Final Chapter
Swamp Children, Final Chapter Far away, back to the very beginning of the battlefield, King Katabaisis slowly struggled to a sitting position against a giant boulder. “Even with my arm cut off…I will not die! I am immortal!” He struggled to grab at the vial pulled the chain off his neck, gripping the lid with his teeth and yanking it off. He spat out the lid and poured the liquid onto his severed limb. “There, see? The wound already heals! Ha ha, I will become invincible and rule the world!” “Wow, you’re pretty stupid, aren’t you?” A child’s voice laughed on the breeze that tickl
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Swamp Children, Part Nine
Swamp Children, Part Nine “We must not go towards the camp!” Kratos called out to the others as they sped forward. “We must end this peacefully! Apollo!” She shouted up towards the sky. “You and Hawk search for the leaders! Find them and take them to safety, away from the swamp! Only their armies will listen to them!” “Shouldn’t we just let them all take each other out?” Enkidu shouted. “I will ignore that you said that!” Kratos snapped back. Nostos turned from her spot. “Enkidu! We need to end this peacefully! If we let them all attack each other while we escape, it
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Swamp Children, Part 8
Swamp Children, Part 8 Everyone at the table began to scream and run away as Katabaisis continued to fire off his gun in random directions, listening as screams were met with the sound of a bullet ripping through flesh making his escape to his horse. There was a loud howl of a wolf and he looked up as the giant animal tore down the hill, jumping high into the air and over him, landing next to his horse. The wolf spun around and sank his teeth into Katabaisis’s horse’s throat, ripping the throat out before turning towards Katabaisis, its lips bared back and sharp fangs dripping with blood. Katabaisis fell to the ground, firing sho
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Swamp Children, Part 7
Swamp Children, Part 7 When Katabaisis rode over the hilltop that evening, he saw a great giant tent, a giant circular table under it. Sitting in their chairs sat the nineteen other leaders, kings and queens. After struggling down from his horse and making his way over to the chair, all twenty of the territory kings and queens were finally there. Of the kings there was Pluto, Jupiter, Saturn, Kyklopes, Poseidon, Alkinoös, Hercules, Labdakos, Charagos, Creon and Horatio. Of the queens was Arêtê, Amphitritê, Seirênê, Artemis, Kitharion, Antigone, Iphthimê and Aphrodite, who was being escorted to the tab
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Swamp Children, Part 6
Swamp Children, Part 6 “What did you do to me?!” He shouted. “I didn’t do anything. You are now branded with our mark. Open your eyes, you’re fine.” Slowly Enkidu blinked, the pain slowly leaving his body as he sat up. “Here,” Venus said, kneeling in front of him as she held out a mirror. “You’re one of us now. If you weren’t worthy of being a Treasure, Nostos would have killed you.” Enkidu looked in surprise in the mirror, his eyes now blue instead of brown. That’s when he realized that everyone in the room, no matter what ethnic group, had blue eyes. “W
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Swamp Children, Part 5
“These are the children of Treasures, like me. We each have a treasure we represent, and an animal that stands for that treasure as well.” Kratos said, setting down her hammer. “We came from different territories. I am from the seventh territory, and as I told you, I represent Outer Strength. This here is Apollo,” She gestured to a giant and strong looking Native American who had scars on his shoulders that looked like claw marks, his face solid and stoic looking. He merely stared at Enkidu, his eyes not reveling what he was thinking. He wore a headband with feathers in it and a giant loin cloth that covered his lower
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Swamp Children Part Five
Swamp Children Part Five While Kleos and Gilgamesh got into a yelling bout inside, Enkidu was outside struggling with tears of anger. His  mother had suffered bitterly because of the ordeal with Odysseus, even though she claimed her innocence, his father had decided it would be best to punish her just to remind his court to never double cross him. To think that I have been turning into him sickens my core. How could I have allowed this to happen? Mother…I hope you are safe right now. He thought to himself before looking up and seeing from the shadows the girl Kratos, the one who had wanted to finish him off. With everyone yelling at e
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Swamp Children, Part Four
Swamp Children, Part Four “My young son grew weary of my long life,” Oedipus said, his voice thick with emotion. “One night I laid in my bed chambers, sleeping peacefully, when I heard the floor board next to me creaking. I opened my eyes and saw a dagger lying heavily across my throat, my young son holding it. Yet he could not do it. Perhaps a tiny shred of a human heart still was in him at that moment, but he could not strike down his own father. So he had me taken out to these swamp lands and banished, leaving me with only the clothes on my back and my crown, with which I used to blind myself after I was left out there.
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Swamp Children Part Three
Swamp Children Part Three “You! You were the Great Captain Odysseus! You should be dead, executed.” Khorysos said in surprise as the once glorious man made his way tiredly down the stairs. His proud frame that had once graced the court was now sagging with age and exhaustion, his once glorious polished armor dull, rusted and covered in dents. “The keyword is ‘were’. Now I am no more than a joke to be laughed and scoffed at by the King and his pea-brain followers.” Odysseus replied as he came to the end of the flight of stairs, wrapping his tattered maroon cape about his body as if trying to ward off a chi
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Swamp Children Part Two
Swamp Children Part Two When Khorysos awoke, his head was throbbing greatly. He was tied up, lying in the corner of a mud hut with thick weeds bound together to make the floor. Sitting across from him was the Prince tied up, his dark brown eyes flashing as he stared at Khorysos from his corner. “Prince, are you hurt?” Khorysos grunted as he blinked rapidly, trying to force his pounding headache to go away. “Where are we?” “Did my father send you to follow after me?” Prince Enkidu snapped back. “No, I didn’t even know you were outside of the town walls.” Came the muttered reply as Khory
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