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commission for Sudrien !!
ash is mine!

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:iconstarryu:
starryu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016
do ever get like that special feeling when someone commissions you to draw your own oc like

"ye s not only am i drawing something i love but i getting paid for it gg"
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dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I FEEL CERTAIN FEELIES
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:iconstarryu:
starryu Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2016
YES
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:iconlady-nyanmay:
Lady-NyanMay Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
you are so good at drawing feet this is amazing o.o
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dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! ;-;
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Black-Sweater Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
His eyes are so awesome focusing<3<3 uwaah<3
so beautiful<3
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:icondollieguts:
dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you ;-;
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Black-Sweater Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ufufuf you're welcome<3
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:iconlarklung:
larklung Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love yr style so much weeps
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:icondollieguts:
dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im glad! T_T
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:iconinsanesylph:
InsaneSylph Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
....that's not human
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:iconsquareofone:
SquareofOne Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016
A born contortionist, this one.
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:iconkallyous:
kallyous Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think something broke on the pose at right side. Waaaah! 
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:iconundertrash328:
UnderTrash328 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's just a spine....they're useless anyway.....
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:iconkallyous:
kallyous Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, my mistake then. For a moment I thought they were useful. xP
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:icondollieguts:
dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
itll heal!
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:iconkallyous:
kallyous Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, that is a relief.
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:icondoom-boy:
Doom-Boy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Student Artist
that stare
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Kilsoph Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't mean to be a dick about this but like--
I think the only problem here is the anatomy on how you bent the body- Like.. Even the most flexable person in the world can't put her booty squishing up to her head, or her organs would pop out uncomfortably. Not to mention how you drew the ribcage and what not just-- doesn't look right? She looks like she broke her mid and lower torso. ;v; I hope that isn't too harsh of a critique- you have a nice flow when it comes to bodies, but maybe try working on the profile drawing a lil bit more? 

Love your art though!! ^v^ <3 <3
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cremerose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Student General Artist
(Ash is a they, not a she) ;0
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Kilsoph Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
;v; ye, I corrected myself earlier once I realized from reading the comments that they were in fact not a she and I just couldn't find my original comment to correct myself. I'm sorry!!
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dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the character isnt a girl to start off, and the idea of the commission was to put the character in a situation that isnt possible - they were supposed to be "falling into themself" - their body is supposed to be sinking into their hair, butt area intersecting with their skull, basically, which isnt possible
also, "doesnt look right" isnt exactly a helpful critique - youve got to specify WHAT looks wrong if you want me to improve upon it, otherwise the critique is useless
but thank you!
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Kilsoph Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
aaa!! I understand! I guess my explanations are just really tacky- I guess I forget to realize that a combo of different styles and how not all bodies are alike.
I also realized afterword they were indeed not female ; v ; I just couldn't find my original comment to correct myself accordingly, forgive me for that.

As for the specifics, I just read the instructive followup kindly provided by Sudrien and I completely understand now and my comment was completely unwarranted and I apologize for how rude I was being. ;v;''
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Sudrien Featured By Owner Edited Sep 16, 2016
Then www.youtube.com/watch?v=KdAPT5… must not have been filmed on this planet.  Also, tearzahs.deviantart.com/art/mo… is an instructive followup.

More seriously, that area is mostly intestines. And they certainly don't pop out during, say, pregnancy.
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Kilsoph Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Oki doki?
I was simply putting that the position that Ash is in doesn't look natural. 
I appreciate the information, though! ^v^
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Sudrien Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016
Looking natural was not the intent. But you're fine.
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:iconflowerpower138:
flowerpower138 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me currently: FEAR & amazement
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Domenica-chan999 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i kinda wish i could bend like that but i also dont XD
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:iconsoiaris:
soIaris Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016
ur poses r so great and so is ash
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dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TO BE FAIR THE POSES WERE MOSTLY UP TO THE COMMISSIONER.. i simply illustrated them
but thank you! >:3c
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Gri9b9 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
THAT STYLE IS SUPER NICE AND COOL!!!!
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:icondollieguts:
dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!! T_T
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XDEXXE Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Ash has to work as a gymnast
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sweetroll-yandere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
the best kind of bending
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LucianoXD9 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i want him neiked! >W<
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:iconsoiaris:
soIaris Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016
*them
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LucianoXD9 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
>:3c
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soIaris Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016
: /
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:iconexiiis:
ExiIis Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my
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Hypernava Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016
i love how chubby you draw they leg so cute q-q
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dollieguts Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im glad! ;-;
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T-h-e--W-i-z-a-r-d Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ash is maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagicccccccc...........
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