Animorphs: The Invasion Begins

After about one whole month of typing, I've finally finished it. This is my adaptation of Animorphs book number 1, The Invasion, into a film screenplay. I created this screenplay with a free program called Celtx, which you can download yourself here: [link]

It automatically formats everything for you, including indentations and slug lines and characters. There's a WHOLE lot more to it than that, but I'll let you explore on your own.

Credit for the Tobias-dunking-bathroom-bullies scene's dialoge is credit to... I'm sorry! I can't remember! I know I wrote it down somewhere. It was somebody either here on deviantART, or on FanFiction.net. If you're the person who wrote the dialoge here and you know it, please remind me! Thanks!

As for you as a reader, please read as much of this screenplay as you can, because I really would like feedback on it. It's my first-ever publicly "published" screenplay, and I'd like to know how I did. Where can I improve? What screenwriting rules did I break? Thanks in advance for your review!

(And here is where I linked to this page on the Animorphs Forum (RAF).)