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Golden Shrike - 49



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.... Chapter ends here. I feel like yall young-squad stans and shippers are gonna kill me.

So, in the end nobody died but we lost everyone. Gone are the easy lazy days and highly sheltered life. Goodbye community, friends and family. Goodbye marshes! (Not one place in the first chapter looked like a marsh because I was a doofus, but you can imagine the area to be mostly that with some foresty patches)

During this chapter I got to understand Photoshop a little better and we don't hate each other that much anymore. I've been trying to work on my paneling by stuffing more of them on a page so each page would be interesting to read, but at times I have doubts if I'm forcing it too much. I did this especially towards the end. Thoughts?

I'm pretty spooked we've gotten this far and it'd seriously not be like this if I didn't get such encouragement from readers. You've been great - I want my comment section to stay as dramaless as it has been 99% so good job people! You're golden.

Aigh and now we're gonna take a month long break again. We'll be back on August 29 with either a cover or a page depending how far I get with my work on fourth chapter. During the break I'll be posting a 4 paged bonus comic for Patreon's Magpie tier, but will upload the first page here next Thursday.

This is a good spot to ask for critique and feedback on readability, characters, art, pacing etc. Let me know if you feel like I should pay more attention to something.

Some links:
- I'll be accepting cameo characters till August 8. You can check some cameo refs I made here and here.
- Comic translated to Polish by KomikSowa
- Comic translated to Brazilian Portuguese by Laranda-Traducoes

:iconpatreon-plz: GS on Patreon
:sunnysideup: GS on Smackjeeves


Last gift art of the chapter:
Here come the deer...and wolves...and Mozernath by JurassicDissaster
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Is something wrong with the dark brow deer? One part of his nose is sticking out a bit!