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Post Apocalypse Survivor by docwinter Post Apocalypse Survivor by docwinter
I was doodling a while back and this was the result.

though I doubt that top offers any support for the girls as much as it does in the picture

Tell me what you think? I hope you like it but please comment and tell me if there is anything I can improve with

EDIT: Taking the advice from Prisi-chan  I have updated this picture and reuploaded it. Thanks for the feedback
Hi! :) First, the body it's actually good and very realistic. I would love to see you relax the pencil a little bit. specially in the hair area if you work with that the result may be pretty good so just try it.
Try doing a sketch first so you don't leave marks as you did in the right hand and hair area, do it softly first and then draw it like you'd like.
I don't like the face, try setting marks, like the divisions of the face, it helps!

Overall I like it n.n I can see you drawing really good! Keep it up!!
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May 3, 2015
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