literature

Somewhere Ever

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If you ever ask
why I bailed on you
If you ever wonder
why the tears are deeply hidden

if you even see
the pain thats held away to prevent sorrow
you'd know we all knew
that you made it irreversible
for all the people
and creatures around this place

if you ever hear
the soft whisper in the bookstores
you've done wrong

or just didnt fight for what you deserve

if you ever cry
cause you held the past behind
you might be right

some things are to be forgotten
but some are purely trust
we neglected on

if you ever scream of pain
know that when we're around
we'd avenge you

all we want is to be loved
more and more
even as a friend

where things got down
we pull back up
but if you ever worry
it's for a good reason

cause nobody bails when nobody does anything wrong
Thanks to alot of openminded people,
some thoughts I'm finally freed off,
I've managed to put this down to all my friends and acquaintances. to the people I love, a fair warning that even I'm human and will not be able to stand people torturing themselves or others.

I can't stop giving love, or however you people experience it.


Please favorite it is you like it, tell me about any wrong sayings or mistakes in the structure of this poem and comment if you like it, means the world to me!
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It's amazing and easy to understand. Extremely well written, and I only found one mistake:
inrevesible should be irreveseible:)