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"I am that I am"
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Life in the City
Creative Writing Coursework – Life in the City As you enter a local bus, you begin to open your crisp packet that is in your pocket. Crackle. Crackle. The passengers in the bus stare at you, as if you have done something wrong. Your mind ponders on the thought, but you can’t quite grasp it. You look outside of the window, and the rain sums up your mood. The rain in London is like a thousand knives penetrating the pavement. It can rain so hard that the drainage system becomes flooded, and its foul stench covers London like a perilous outburst of ash. The rain reflects London as a despondent, dreary city. When you look at the rain,
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Creative Writing Coursework – Life in the City As you enter a local bus, you begin to open your crisp packet that is in your pocket. Crackle. Crackle. The passengers in the bus stare at you, as if you have done something wrong. Your mind ponders on the thought, but you can’t quite grasp it. You look outside of the window, and the rain sums up your mood. The rain in London is like a thousand knives penetrating the pavement. It can rain so hard that the drainage system becomes flooded, and its foul stench covers London like a perilous outburst of ash. The rain reflects London as a despondent, dreary city. When you look at the rain,
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BlackDrawingStudent General Artist
You are very talented!:love:

Keep up the good work!:)
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woo, first fave Lol,thanks :)
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cheers man, I had alot of trouble with those headlights ha ha