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Life in the City
Creative Writing Coursework – Life in the City
As you enter a local bus, you begin to open your crisp packet that is in your pocket. Crackle. Crackle. The passengers in the bus stare at you, as if you have done something wrong. Your mind ponders on the thought, but you can’t quite grasp it. You look outside of the window, and the rain sums up your mood.
The rain in London is like a thousand knives penetrating the pavement. It can rain so hard that the drainage system becomes flooded, and its foul stench covers London like a perilous outburst of ash. The rain reflects London as a despondent, dreary city. When you look at the rain, you are reminded of the dull days at work; the desk that you sit at. The computer stares at you, with its white screen, and the black writing. It tells you that this will be your life for the next 20 years. You are living it. It is not a dream, it’s reality.
As you enter the train station, you hit your Oyster card on the bright yellow disc. You
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I fear my Pen
I fear my pen the most. Something so simple and yet it’s taken for granted as the air we breathe today. Every time I pick my pen up I fear what I can achieve with it. What will I write today? What will I draw? It’s amazing how you can pick this object up, use it every single day for the rest of your life and not even second think as to what you are going to use it for. There is an old quote that most of you will probably have heard before, “The pen is mightier than the sword”. Many people think that this means you’re either a fancy lawyer who gets one over the criminal or indeed you’re some sort of martial arts God who can kill people with a single strike of a pen. Does anyone not stop to think how many books have been written with a single pen? The bible, for example, has inspired people to do so much good in such an evil world today. The treaties signed by great politicians such as The Treaty of Versailles that ended World War I. I fear the pen, not for
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BlackDrawing Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Student General Artist
You are very talented!:love:

Keep up the good work!:)
SarahSuffocation-x Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
harro :)
rez-R-rekt Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009
woo, first fave Lol,thanks :)
rez-R-rekt Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009
cheers man, I had alot of trouble with those headlights ha ha