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Speedpaint: Tired by dishwasher1910 Speedpaint: Tired by dishwasher1910
done in 2hours 45 mins

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:iconlucymacrae:
This piece really caught my eye.
First thing I want to say is that I love, looove, the way you used light and the contrast of value is simply gorgeous.
The brushstrokes look so effortless and at the same time so... well planned, they are so rough in most parts of the painting but so detailed around the face and the tears are so sharp and the neck looks so good *sigh*

Honestly I dont know what to point out that could be improved because this is a speedpaint so it's meant to look kinda undone. Overall the only thing I see that needs a little bit of work are the legs, the anatomy. Nothing looks off at first but somehow I think the legs are too rectangular and big if you compare it to the rest of the figure (Not that you can really see much of the body anyways)

So, I think you should work a little bit with the anatomy but honestly this is a speedpaint so it doesnt really matter, if it was a finished painting Im sure you would have fixed. Another thing that you could look into (although, again, I love the piece and what I'm pointing out are just stupid things that you COULD work on if you felt like it) the color palette, maybe if you played a little with different hues you could enhance a bit the mood of the piece, make it more... striking.
On the other hand, your perspective and value are so on point it hurts my heart, the texture of the dust in the light, the way her (I think is a her?) hair flows and shines...

Great work, and keep it up♥
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SgtSareth Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2018
I know that kind of tired.
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:iconwintersunlights:
wintersunlights Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016
nice work
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:iconjohn98317:
john98317 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor my girl..
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:iconcobracatdragon2898:
CobraCatDragon2898 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Poor Yang.
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:iconatlessa:
Atlessa Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016
T_T
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:iconbruiser128:
bruiser128 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Should I find it weird how Ruby's story is a completely tone from everyone elses? 
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:iconkrontriolle:
Krontriolle Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017
?
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:iconbruiser128:
bruiser128 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Sorry, tone was supposed to be distinct 
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:iconbluefire305:
BlueFire305 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
Yang...... *starts crying in corner*
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:iconbardock-rior:
Bardock-Rior Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
*Cries in the same corner*
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:iconfalconlord92:
FalconLord92 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
Sad Pikachu Emoticon 
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:icontubi4:
tubi4 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
Great work :3
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:iconshonasof:
shonasof Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Daaaaamn ;_;
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
I hope Yang comes back in an awesome way with a kickass theme song blaring in the background when she gets her heroic wind back! XD
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BlizKreigBob Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016
Yeah ... i suppose this volume she's going to struggle with herself but when she gets her act back together she's going to be back with a Yang!


I regret nothing
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016
Of course! I hope to see that! 

Same here!
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:iconzahlenoum:
ZahlenOum Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wish I could critique this, but I don't know much about speed paints. :/
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:iconxelianthought:
xelianthought Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Heartbreaking, but amazing. 
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:iconkaribuxy:
KaribuXY Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Can't really understand why she is so traumtised. I mean yes she lost an arm ,that is pretty hard but for the rest. She pulled conclusions that only based on what she saw.
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:iconpokespecshipper:
Pokespecshipper Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
she has abandonment issues
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:iconstarcobra:
Starcobra Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
It certainly doesn't help with every other bad thing that happened during the Vytal Festival.
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:iconpokespecshipper:
Pokespecshipper Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2016
Mm
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:iconwbxwd:
WBxWD Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
She must've been experiencing true fear and failure. Maybe that's why she crying. 
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:iconpokespecshipper:
Pokespecshipper Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2016
That would do it
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:iconwbxwd:
WBxWD Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for the reply, but I guess I'll just have to find out about it at Volume 4.
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:iconicipall:
Icipall Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Damn, poor Yang.
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:iconusoutlaw:
usoutlaw Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
awww poor yang. i know things look bleak now but they will get better as long as you have hope. even the smallest ember can ignite a forest fire. so keep hope, and never loose faith in humans ability to survive.
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kelley-artistry Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I love RWBY and cannot wait for the new volume to premiere this weekend! I like this piece of Yang, as the style reminds me of some Renaissance-Era paintings. I hope that Yang can regain the smile and spunk she lost at the end of Volume 3.  
Cry run 
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:iconmecharic:
Mecharic Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Ah, just what I needed the day before V4, more feels... 
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:iconarchangelglenn:
Archangelglenn Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
 It is very beautiful and very well done. You captured Yang's grief over the loss of her arm quite well.
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:iconkuchenjaeger:
Kuchenjaeger Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
Oh great. Saaaaadness ;_;
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:icondragonkingmark:
Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016
so tired
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:iconcamper222:
camper222 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really cool and done in such a short amount of time too. Nice work! :D
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