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:icondragonblitz85:
Seeing how its just a sketch, its surprising how detailed it is. Not saying it doesn't have its flaws however. One of the main problems I have with it is the overall impact of the picture. I know its kind of harsh, and I'm sorry, but the sketch lines are kind of annoying in my opinion.


That being said, I do like the coloring, the blending, and the shading you used in this piece. Despite in not looking complete, the colors are do help make it pop much more then without them.

All in all, its not up to snuff like you other works, but it is good for being a sketch.
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I love! the composition is quite good, an agulo perecto to portray the image but a quite dynamic posture to which I feel that the irregular stroke of the sketch in the same way gives you life and movement.

As for the color, in spite of not being finished it creates an excellent vision of the final work, it is a good palette of colors I like the way you use a palette of warm colors in the character and contrast it with a cool blue in the background, creating a pretty good contrast.

It has an invisible magnetic attraction, because even being a sketch I love it.
Good sketch :)
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:iconninjaasura:
NinjaAsura Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Praise the sun 
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:icondravoo:
Dravoo Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018
Oh hey! Found the DA!
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:iconanimemaster133:
animemaster133 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2018
Hoping this gets finished and more alike is made/added. 
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:iconrdj1995:
RDJ1995 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2018  Student Filmographer
😍😍😍😍😍😍
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:iconhyperjehuty:
HyperJehuty Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2018
HOLY FUCK THIS IS AWESOME 
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:iconweaponx1486:
weaponx1486 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
I like this scene perfect natural Heart #1 New 
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:iconevays:
Evays Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2018
It's that Panty? :^
Anyways she looks gorgeous ^-^
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:iconemathefirstborn:
Emathefirstborn Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
I think if you lowered the opacity of the lines this would look alot better. Not that this is bad of course! I love this piece.
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:iconpiturantonio:
piturantonio Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Love detail on the moscles
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:iconnufinalsaber:
NuFinalSaber Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Always nice to see Yang before she gets Disarmed.
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:iconrainasense:
Rainasense Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i just realized its a sketch when i click the oict xD
the thumbnail is so perfect that i think its a finished version at the first glance
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:iconganja--gal:
ganja--gal Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  New Deviant
hot
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:iconshootgoon:
ShootGoon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Heavier Breathing 
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:iconspacebeemo:
SpaceBeemo Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
DragonBlitz85 - That's why it's called a sketch, It's not supposed to look finished.
Baldi is triggered  
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:icondragonblitz85:
DragonBlitz85 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
OK OK OK, god.
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:icongameponysly:
GamePonySly Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Student
PERFECT & DELICIOUSHeart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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:iconeidolon1:
Eidolon1 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Quite a drawing!
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:icontnynfox:
Tnynfox Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Student General Artist
Do anime girls get cold when they do that?
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:iconudtheaesir:
UDtheAesir Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Student General Artist
Cute!
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:iconfatguy88:
fatguy88 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great body
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:iconnikitaowo:
NikitaOwO Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
I thought it was Panty xD
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:iconhandsomegamerguy:
HandsomeGamerGuy Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
"Sketch" Ha.
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:iconwilnet1tractor:
wilnet1tractor Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Oh, don’t mind me.
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:iconrfk11756:
rfk11756 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
always one of the best scenes at a beach or pool...when the swimsuit is finally revealed!

sometimes it tells a lot of the wearer! (fave color, etc)

nice
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:iconnosidex:
Nosidex Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
She looks wonderful, wish she was real.
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:iconsenshi-sun:
senshi-sun Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Super cute!
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:iconemz346:
Emz346 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
Nothing more to say other than...Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 Markiplier Hot Damn You're Cute! HuniePop #3 
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:iconkenseiden:
Kenseiden Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
wonderful
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:iconwisys:
wisys Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Unique lines ;w; Awesome work!
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:iconikamusumefan06:
IkaMusumeFan06 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG, yang is son Sexy!
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:iconpigtailedheroine:
PigtailedHeroine Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Sexy!~ :heart:
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:iconjason-jamey:
Jason-Jamey Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Reminds me of Shinobu Oshino from the Monogatari series.
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:icongordonphilbin:
gordonphilbin Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Yang looks amazing!

:blush:
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:iconwilnet1tractor:
wilnet1tractor Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
The girl’s gone wild.
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:iconwhite-rose-brian:
White-Rose-Brian Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018   Digital Artist
Very good!  Very good!
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:iconfanartj:
fanartj Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Great use of action and shade! Very lovely work!
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:iconinsanepayne:
Insanepayne Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Yang is my #1 waifu pick in all of the rwby-dom. Tied for first but man if I was living there instead of out here I'd def try to marry her asap. Well, the other 1st place dies next season so.. I'll have to stick to the living. Yang is the winner lol
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:iconomaralaaelsafi:
omaralaaelsafi Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018   General Artist
cool 
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:iconkenji195:
Kenji195 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Very good modelling! 8D
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:iconazabachesilver:
AzabacheSilver Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Yang Xiao Long at the beach! :D
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:iconpresleymcg:
PresleyMcG Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty!
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:iconpechemelsa:
PecheMelsa Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Student
I would say that this is more than a sketch... 
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:iconjonetsuanime18:
Jonetsuanime18 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
looks like yang!!!!!!!!
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:icongreenmint4265:
GreenMint4265 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Great work! Looks cute! :D
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:iconzacharyknox222:
zacharyknox222 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
i love it!
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:iconzacharyknox222:
zacharyknox222 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
i like it!
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:iconmanchinesandmonsters:
ManchinesAndMonsters Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Well, nice work on the lines and colouring.

Yeah, if it's Yang we all know it would probably be a sexy piece. XD
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:iconlost-one-60:
Lost-One-60 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2018
Oh my.
How racy.
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