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RWBY : Tornado of Red by dishwasher1910 RWBY : Tornado of Red by dishwasher1910
inspired by Volume 4's character short !

TUTORIALS , and HD files available on Patreon !
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*Boom* Headshot! I like the dynamic pose here, and the wild behavior of her cloak really adds to the dynamism. Nice touch with the grimm in the background, Small remark, she looks somewhat masculine in the head alone, but it's not distracting at all. My concern here relies on some of the focusing of the picture? I get that parts of the cloak are supposed to be out of focus, and you have accomplished that very well, but my concern lies on Ruby herself. In an image, there is usually one focus point where the information provided is the most detailed, and as one draws closer to that focal distance, you get more detailed in the information provided by the image. But we see in her skirt and her belt, the image is lesser focused when looking at the portion of the belt in front of the hip, and yet the hip behind her is in far more focus, and the skirt in front of the hip is in far more focus as well. That is somewhat concerning to me.

Now, one could account for those kinds of misfocus from changes in refraction of index due to heat (which is how mirages appear), but I don't see any immediate source that would provide this heat. Granted, this is a small detail so it doesn't make too big of a difference, and I think i can see reasons why the focus shouldn't be on that portion in the first place because of the cloth thats much loser to the camera drawing away from the skirt/hip, so I can't really fault you for this issue.

Regardless, the one thing i really like about this picture the most is the confident look in her. It just gives so much character (which it should obviously, but here not only is it the focus of the image arguably, but it gives the most amount of character: removing the head would arguably give a completely different appeal to Ruby. Tl;dr, I just love the confident look xD

Well done!
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Kariru851 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016
Wow this is amazing!! Can I use it as my phones lock screen please??
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Cromwell300 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
this reminds me of Toyohisa from the Drifters manga
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Misticwolfarts Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so COOL!!!!
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jeriahwalcott1234 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
very nice
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Shadowspeare Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016
I love this Clap 
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ThatTF2Guy Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016
i knew i wasnt the only one who noticed the cape changing.

you all realise that this makes her Spawn right?
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GunMasterG3 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is Fantastic 
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Freksama Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Great work!
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Ururuty Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
cool
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Gamera7 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I love how you make the ridiculous table cloth around her neck look cool and not just... ridiculous
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clubpenguin1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
So very awesome :D
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SonicRegularShowFan1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
I'M WAITING!
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CobraCatDragon2898 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ruby's coming back! WOOHOO!
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averageknight Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so awesome i can't stop screaming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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watcheye456 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
comperebul ?(is this how you wrote it?) to earlier ones ... it seams just like it could be made better. Don't get me wrong is still very good , it just lak the ... something from before.
Sorry my english
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xSwissChrisx Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
So your excited for volume 4 I take it
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1228248 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
This a amazing piece, I can't wait for Oct 22.
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tubi4 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
Very Cool Work :)
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XandImus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016   General Artist
brilliant!
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starfox360 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
Can't wait to see what dishwasher1910 is going to do with the rest of the rwby cast
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Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
Vol 4 is gonna rock!
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Qrow92 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
I love the look her face has in this! Reminds me of that smug grin she gave in the first Red Trailer (I see it as an intentional or unintentional nod to that)!
Great job! :clap: :happybounce: :D
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orionpaxg1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
Ruby got faster!

Is she tapping into the speed force!?
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Americarules1776 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Student General Artist
Amazing
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xiestman Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist

Hi, can I have your permission to post this on my tumblr?

I will credit you and there will be a link to this page.

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dishwasher1910 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Student Digital Artist
sure !
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xiestman Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
Here is the link: fandom-artworks.tumblr.com/pos…
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victortky Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
The red scythe wielder girl is BACK! Love the posture and colours! XD

Love the trailer short so much!
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24Pamela Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016  Professional General Artist
This is amazing I love climate here, Great colors :clap:
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
pretty awesome looking no kidding! wicked job doing this! now do more now!
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Allard-Liao Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2016
I was about to say, "Well, someone was inspired by the short."
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