Premiere night

This is a character piece as much as its a play at a favorite theme in the community. Each girl is wonderfully captured in their realist state of being while interacting perfectly for the team they are. Yang is overtly feminine and in charge in bright colors and brighter smile. Blake is a elegant if slightly withdrawn individual, yang making her come out of her shell naturally as their partnership always seems to do. Weiss is my favorite as she is beautifully elegant and poised, while managing to look sincere in a way that is becoming of her as her true self we have seen in later chapters. Ruby is her same smiling self while managing to wow with what may be the most creatively designed look overall fitting her dynamic character profile. Team RWBY in all its glory, its beauty, its elegance, its character. Your a fantastic artist and portrayed your vision expertly. Its a hype train art though, and the crowd overlay on front wasnt my favorite addition. My honest review for you!

Vision
Unremarkable. Lighting lacks detail and contrast, making the composition weaker. The fans are blurry black silhouettes with no sense of depth, so there's some sense of discomfort in the overall composition. I don't think that's the atmosphere you were going for, since I didn't feel it at first glance.

Originality
Nice concept, adding a different perspective to RWBY as a million-dollar blockbuster film. Not outstanding, but good.

Technique
Lighting is not only mediocre, but also feels wishy-washy and confusing (can only identify a few light sources). Moderately many mistakes in proportion. (Ruby's right hand is too large, Yang's head is too small for her face, Yang's left hand looks awkward and a bit uncomfortable, and so on...)

Impact
its good.

Really awesome work, I love the idea of RWBY being an actual TV show that these ladies star in. I saw this while scrolling through browse and it immediately caught my attention. Your proportions and ability to draw human figures are amazing and I love how their outfits are original and unique but still is reflective of their character designs. The movie poster in the background is epic by the way and Yang looks like such a bad-ass. You did an amazing job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

P.S. I absolutely love Ruby's dress, I would love to own a dress like that someday XD

When they say a "work of art" I don't think it gives this image enough credit XD This piece is a testament to the community. It shows the characters in a new light never before shown off, and you do so in a way that not only conveys the characters in a humanizing way, but also in a way that makes the Fandom, feel closer to them, as I feel the shadow crowd is a quite literal interpretation for the Fandom, always cheering on and enjoying the show the Characters are in, but never being able to stand in the same light as they are quite literally in the Shadow of the show. But that's perfectly fine and quite the artistic input for this piece XD

although this is a Critique so I feel I should not simply sing it's praises (even though I love this so much)

First I love the dresses, they fit the style and characters perfectly, Ruby's shows the least but is still influenced by Yang's more flamboyant personality being her older sister, and Blake's being the perfect mix of conserving and flashy, as the lacy front is a dead give away for the lack of a back in the dress which is perfect for Blake and we don't even have to see the back to understand that's what it looks like

But. I must say that the Chests of each girl is a bit larger than necessary, I understand it was mostly done for Fan service and such but this piece is so well done already that it's not really needed, Blake and Ruby are especially victim to this, Ruby is only slightly more developed than Weiss in Canon but here it appears to be multiple cup sizes, and Blake is on the same level as in Canon Yang which shouldn't be the case, so I feel they are a bit too large for their own good, but none-the-less they add to the piece

The Eyes are also a tad interesting to look at, because I can definitely tell it's a unique style to you, but it also draws a tad too much attention, especially Yang... While I love the pose you put Yang in (Bumblb all the way) I can't help but find myself fixated on Yang's right eye, something about it seems entirely off, I couldn't tell you how to fix it for the life of me, but it definitely seems to need some kind of tweak.

I love the way each of their arms add to the personality of each character, Ruby wanting to stay close and hold onto Weiss for comfort in crowded areas while still wanting to show her joyous and outgoing spirit, Weiss holding restraint and keeping herself as elegant and presentable as possible, Blake trying to be modest and not wanting too much attention on her, and Yang making sure to claim Blake by holding onto her Shoulder and taking a picture of them together, all in all, the detail of how they're arms interact with one another really adds to the piece, but again there is a minor detail I can't unsee after having found it

Blake's right arm falls next to her side and for some reason I don't know which, it seems to shrink to an unreasonable width, now, upon viewing this image over and over I've discovered that it is merely going behind her Hip and so the transition is much more reasonable, but at first instance it is very difficult to see that so I don't know how you could make it more prominent whilst keeping it's fluid lighting but I still feel that it's not entirely a viewers mistake, but that could be all it is, which in case all I can say would be to try and avoid those as much as possible


all in all, I can't find many things in this to critique, the piece is truly amazing and I can't give it enough praise, I especially love the addition of the Poster and the Volume and RWBY title in the back, the way you managed to make it all obvious without making it obvious and keeping it in the back and not the center makes it seem much more lifelike and realistic, it's truly a stunning effect

Okay the RWBY characters attending their own premiere is a new concept in the fandom and I for one love the idea. Love how team RWBY is all dressed up for the occasion I for one find Yang and Ruby's dresses are my absolute fave of the quartets. They just are displayed full centre in the spotlight in anticipation of the big night so it has a impeccable impact. Everyone is in character, Ruby being cute and humble, Weiss Elegant and Yang getting her selfie on much to Blake's amusement, this just makes me more anticipated for Volume 6.

I also like the shadow people, I don't know if it is a nod to Volume 1 but I like it. Mad props

Ok, I could not have clicked this fast enough. This is the best picture I have seen of the girl. Your line work is awesome, the colors are great, and the lighting is perfect. The outfits look stellar, they are all so elegant and each fits the girls nicely. I really like Ruby's and Blake's the most out of the four of them. The expressions they have show them as humble and proud of what they have done which nice. The shadow crowd is a great addition to the picture. It really conveys the what this event means. Honestly, if I could give this more stars I would. I can't wait for the stuff that you are going to make with the Vol. 6 stuff.

Wow this is good! Weiss will always be my favorite

GEEZ ITS SO FUCKING GOOD

Oh Geez, what´s NOT to love about this piece?  You did a GREAT job!  

I've just started watching the anime on YouTube and I'm loving it's so much fun!  

非常漂亮

(clapping)

Awesome

OMYGAWD I LOVE THEIR DRESSES!!! THEIR SO PRETTY!!

Wonderful! Beautiful! But there are two tiny details you got wrong. Yang's hand isn't flesh and bone anymore and Weiss has a scar over her eye. But other than that, spectacular!

Team RWBY at Comic Con.

Lovely