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Payback - #RWBY 3.0
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Given 2018-05-17
Payback by dishwasher1910 ( Featured by KovoWolf )
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Damn. Was watching your progress on this over on patreon, and I love how it came out. This is a wonderful follow up to the previous picture with Ruby.

I just wish this picture gave me more of the "hype" feeling if that makes sense when I look at it alone.

I know from the previous pictures and your post on patreon that Yang is basically going to slaughter the Grimm who took Ruby's legs in your universe, so I can know the the emotions most likely are going through her head, but I wish that you had shown something more with the emotional impact.

In other words, when I look at this picture in context with the rest of your images, I love this and am excited, but in my opinion, I wish you shown more "emotion" in some way with Yang who is, in essence, about to decimate the Grimm who harmed her little Ruby.

I may be wrong, of course. Maybe other people can get some feeling of excitement from this picture alone. When I look at this picture alone, I don't see a sister going to get revenge on something that harmed her beloved sibling. I simply see a warrior going up against overwhelming odds and not really caring about the chance of her dying.

And don't get me wrong, that's awesome. But if I had to choose between a story where a sister is going to avenge her little sister and a story about a badass warrior fighting against what appears to be insurmountable odds, I think the first one is a little more interesting to show in terms of characterization.

But that's just me.

Overall, it's a WONDERFUL piece of work. I love the looming appearance you gave the Grimm, and the small sludge particles coming off of it really gives it a nice *OOMPH*.

Yang's designs with the fire twin ponytails is awesome! Lookin' like she's about to kick in the Nitro and go BOOM.

I'm guessing after this, we're gonna see a confrontation between Weiss and Yang (based on what you wrote in the bios). If so, I'm looking forward to seeing that confrontation.

Nice job!
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:iconzoe0shockwave0:
Zoe0Shockwave0 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2018
"the more damage she takes the stronger she gets" So what you're saying is she's weak against Scythe of Vyse
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:iconkingkyle253:
kingkyle253 Featured By Owner May 22, 2018
Give em hell Yang!!!
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:iconururuty:
Ururuty Featured By Owner May 17, 2018
nice work
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:iconzeonista:
Zeonista Featured By Owner May 17, 2018
Go get 'em, Yang!! The overall composition is like an anime rendition of some old Frazetta hero-versus-monster pics. 
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:iconstarfoxfanatic4ever:
Starfoxfanatic4ever Featured By Owner May 17, 2018
Watched
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:iconlindartz:
LindArtz Featured By Owner May 17, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice work!!
Congratulations on your much deserved DD!  :)
Congrats on DD By Marphilhearts by LindArtz
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:iconpaladinpainter:
PaladinPainter Featured By Owner May 17, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Well done Cat nods 
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:iconmichaeljohnmorris:
MichaelJohnMorris Featured By Owner May 17, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
This is badass!! :D
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:iconcatgirldstr11:
Catgirldstr11 Featured By Owner May 17, 2018
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:iconkaze26:
kaze26 Featured By Owner May 15, 2018
Badass
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:icondeadrich18:
DeadRich18 Featured By Owner May 8, 2018
And Yang loses her other arm... along with most of her torso.
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:iconmekton2:
Mekton2 Featured By Owner May 6, 2018
Mmmm, Mmmmm, Mmmm, I'm Lov'in it!
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:iconmyorui:
Myorui Featured By Owner May 6, 2018
Awesome!
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:iconargentmoon:
ArgentMoon Featured By Owner May 5, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
*insert One Punch Man OST*
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:iconthoughtsandwonders:
ThoughtsandWonders Featured By Owner May 5, 2018
Are we gonna see the full monster?
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:iconmethusulacomics:
MethusulaComics Featured By Owner May 4, 2018
awesome.
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:iconredgaurd2207:
Redgaurd2207 Featured By Owner May 4, 2018
Anyone else think this monster looks like the mimics from the All You Need Is Kill manga.
I mean minus the spikes it looks fairly similar, wonder if it has the same in-built projectile attack.
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:iconsjoticanhasv:
SjoticanhasV Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yang users her Ultament Move: Super!Super!Super!
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:iconpolarkarma:
PolarKarma Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, this gonna be good
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:iconghostbear3067:
GhostBear3067 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
So that is why she has a spiffy new hover bike, she used her old one to beat that thing to death.
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:icontubi4:
tubi4 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
Good job :meow:
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:iconlost-one-60:
Lost-One-60 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
Vengeance will be swift, righteous and brutal.
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:iconnmzero:
NmZero Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
When is this? There's still Ruby's blood (that was so hard to type) on the teeth.......
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:icondeinoraptor:
Deinoraptor Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
It's payback for Ruby's legs !
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:iconevilgidgit:
Evilgidgit Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Beware Yang's pigtails of doom!
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:iconthoughtsandwonders:
ThoughtsandWonders Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
Yeah! Fuck him up! Legs first tho!
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:iconrbingham2000:
rbingham2000 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
I think busting up his big-ass choppers so he can't use 'em on anyone else would be an even better choice, given the circumstances!
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:iconrooner22:
Rooner22 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  New Deviant
This art series are awsome... You are doing really good job there.  Hope you will draw Blake x Yang together sometime. Keep up 
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:iconnonimportante:
nonimportante Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
i have no idea what is happening here but i approve
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:iconrbingham2000:
rbingham2000 Featured By Owner Edited May 2, 2018
That big-ass Grimm with the huge-ass choppers was the one that took Ruby's legs. And now Yang is about to fuck it up seven ways to Sunday.
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:iconpoliwhirl101:
poliwhirl101 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
Where is Ember Celica? Does Yang only use her robotic arm now?
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:icondrarnegas:
drarnegas Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
Just pure badass
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:iconpoliwhirl101:
poliwhirl101 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
Revenge is a dish served......burnt.
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:iconfirestarthecat1:
Firestarthecat1 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
YFG: Yang Fried Grimm
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:icondragonkingmark:
Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
this is gonna be fun!
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:iconbluebaby4:
bluebaby4 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
okay now I'm confused, what exactly is this Grimm suppose to look like? Up until now I just thought is was a giant slug or worm type but that clearly isn't the case.
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:icondishwasher1910:
dishwasher1910 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Student Digital Artist
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner May 5, 2018
Thanks for the full pic of that terrifying Grimm.

I wonder what kind of terrifying mystic creature it is based off.
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:iconbluebaby4:
bluebaby4 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
ppfft, forgive me but I'm having a hard taking that thing seriously when looking at it from the side
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:iconfrankx13:
frankx13 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
Her arm remind me of an anime called scryed she's using altar power that was my favorite anime hell yeah!!
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:icondangerdave426:
DangerDave426 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
YYYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner Edited May 2, 2018
Was anyone reminded of Gravity Falls in this image? The Grimm monster kind of resemble the terrifying monster in Gravity Falls which was hidden as an island in the middle of the lake.

Oh wow, Yang is going to F*** up that Grimm Monster which ate her younger sister's legs real good. I "almost" feel sorry for it once the curb-stomp battle starts, this is definitely going to be a very awesome scene.

Love the colours and the perspective, really reminds me of those anime posters in which the hero/heroine prepares to kick some monster butt. XD

And it seems that Yang's new robo-arm has some kind of new gimmick. May I ask what it is?
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:iconlost-one-60:
Lost-One-60 Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
Yes.
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
Yes to what?
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:iconlost-one-60:
Lost-One-60 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
To Gravity Falls.
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
Thanks. I see.
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:iconlost-one-60:
Lost-One-60 Featured By Owner May 3, 2018
Awesome series.
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