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Commission : OCs - #1 by dishwasher1910 Commission : OCs - #1 by dishwasher1910
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:iconkaged200:
you gave the roman guy a kinda of a derpy head shape but that's my opinion this is awesome and also is there a fanfic of this also the leader looks really amazing and the fact that he is a speed freak and a thrill taker is something that makes me think that he could be the best of friends with ruby his sister looks a little bit like Hatsune Miku is that who she is visual based off of? the leaders foot looks like its disappearing some of their hands look just like blobs rather than actual hands but all in all this is a good picture and I hope you do more like this
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5015682 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2016
Do you have any profiles on these OC's?
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:iconzeonista:
Zeonista Featured By Owner May 3, 2016
You did a good job here. The OC team look like interesting people with a linking theme, not just 4 random awesome combat youth. :)
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Neutral-Death Featured By Owner Edited May 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
RWBY: Fairy tales.
JNPR: Legendary warriors who cross-dressed.
CRDL: Birds. Cardin alludes to Henry Beaufort in addition to the Cardinal.
CFVY: Sweets. Velvet alludes to the Velveteen Rabbit in addition to Red Velvet Cake.
SSSN: Monkey King from Journey To The West (and Aladdin and Son Goku), Peter Pan, Aesop's Fables, and -ironically enough- the Roman god of the sea.
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Zeonista Featured By Owner May 23, 2016
Yes dear, you have learned your lore well. Yummy pie!  I was complimenting dishwasher1910 on the name and color arrangement for the team, which is not as easy as it seems.
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jtfroh Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2016
You know, this is probably the best RWBY OC team I've seen? They actually look like characters we could see in the show, instead of super-powered Mary-Sues.
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:iconkaged200:
Kaged200 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2016
the one all the way on the right is my favorite he looks really 
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NinjaAsura Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2016
So we have a guy with great fashion sense.
A dude with a sword/spear thing that may or may not be like the cane from bloodborne.
a chick with a scimitar and seems to love the ocean.
Then we have another girl who looks like she would be the M.C. in a Hong Kong action film
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Graffiti-Crow Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2016
I reeeeaaallllyy like this team. Is there a backgroundstory to them?
I love the red girl.
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:iconhs11-art:
hs11-art Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016
Can we really not get any more information about these characters?
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:icondishwasher1910:
dishwasher1910 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Student Digital Artist
you can ask the guy who ordered them
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:iconhs11-art:
hs11-art Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016
I did. 24 hours ago. Still no answer though. Which is funny, since the commissioner of the other piece does go to the comments and answers the questions people make.
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speedingturtle Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016
I'll throw a comment here too. Sorry about being late, I'll put the link here because other people seem to want it.

www.reddit.com/r/RWBYOC/commen…
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:iconhs11-art:
hs11-art Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016
Okay. Thanks, and sorry for my general attitude.
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:iconspeedingturtle:
speedingturtle Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016
No prob
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:iconeliburryschnepp:
EliBurrySchnepp Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016
Are you taking any more? Because something like this is something i'd sink $35 into for sure!
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:iconkaribuxy:
KaribuXY Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
Freaking hell that dude got a nice taste
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:iconvictortky:
victortky Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
Love the OC's design and their weapons!

Their facial expressions really shows their characters well, and I love the costumes!
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:iconluciferiany:
Luciferiany Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
sono grandi, ahmm 3 di loro hanno una somiglianza con personaggi originali
il primo ragazzo è come nettuno
il secondo ragazzo è come Yatsuhashi
L'ultima ragazza è simile al rubino
la vostra tecnica è molto buona e dà un grande impatto
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:iconhickalberry:
Hickalberry Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice ice  :)
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:iconaielloa:
AielloA Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is really making me wish I wasn't broke and could afford to commission my OC.
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:iconxswisschrisx:
xSwissChrisx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Is this a simple colored or detailed colored?
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:icondishwasher1910:
dishwasher1910 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Student Digital Artist
its simple
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theGhormanKing Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
Its amazing like this...can't imagine how great a detailed one would look o3o
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:iconkingleo12:
kingLeo12 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
amazing art I really like the red hair girl
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ThoughtsandWonders Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016
She looks like she's related to the red haired guy.
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TheAsianGuyLOL Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing work there :).
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MASCH-ART Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Super picture:) (Smile)
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averageknight Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OAO !!  HOLY SWEET AWESOME CRAP!! screw the A-TEAM! I'm calling them. 2 thumbs up! i would give  but God only gave me 2.
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averageknight Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i meant to include 3.
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:iconcheshirej69:
CheshireJ69 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Damn, this is some awesome work! How much do you charge? I've been meaning to get my team drawn.
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xXMr-LinkXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
The blue lass looks BEAUTIFUL.
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:iconfkj10:
FKJ10 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
Looks like something out of RWBY, I love it.
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shadowdoom10 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
They're so amazing!
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:iconsnorri84:
Snorri84 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
Woah! If I ever need to have my OC team drawn, I know exactly who to go to!
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:iconreshiramu:
Reshiramu Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
i would definitely commission you,, but no points or money rip
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:iconthoughtsandwonders:
ThoughtsandWonders Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
Nice lives up to the RWBY aspect
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SibArtsmen Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Student General Artist
First guy looks like Neptune and Luvic (Akame Ga Kill), The second guy looks like a mixture of yatsuhashi and Pyrrha, Third looks like a mix of Weiss and Reese, and the fourth looks like a mix of Ruby and Amber.
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Oathkeeper0317 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
Really cool team! While I wish I could, one character is all I feel like right now. Maybe later in time I'll commission a full team.
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:iconfh47:
FH47 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Really cool looking team. That weapon on the middle-left guy is badass :D
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:iconleviathantamer:
Leviathantamer Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
I think... that's the Flaming Sword from Dynasty Warriors... if so that would be amazing.
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:iconspeedingturtle:
speedingturtle Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
Chain sword, actually. It breaks apart and works like a whip.
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speedingturtle Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016
Hijacking my own comment for visibility. Details about the team here:

www.reddit.com/r/RWBYOC/commen…
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:iconleviathantamer:
Leviathantamer Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016
Ooh, that's cool.
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CrawlerEnder935 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
..... how do I send money???..........
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:iconwarnett:
warnett Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
Awesome!  Kudos to the artist and the idea guy.  
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:iconcpp-art:
CPP-ART Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
This is wonderful work as usual 
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:iconicipall:
Icipall Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016
Nice, very nice indeed.
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:iconcommanderflynn:
CommanderFlynn Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
...I knew I should have just sent a note >_> 
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:iconkuchenjaeger:
Kuchenjaeger Featured By Owner Edited Jan 29, 2016
Note to self: Finish writing my OCs and commission Dish to draw them. Because hot damn, this is good.
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xSwissChrisx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed, I didn't even know Dish did commissions now I'm almost in a rush to finish them.
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