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Commission : Future - Jaune Arc

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The day you stop making incredible art is the day the world is less incredible, Dishwasher-sama.

You took a simple concept, Future Jaune Arc, and made it into something that lacks simple words to describe. A talent you seem to just inherently possess and can use with your art without even the slightest effort.

But as with all things, it's not perfect. Don't get me wrong now, this is great, beyond that even, but if I had to say something bad about this, then it would be that it lacks... something. I can't tell what, but something feels... off here.

Perhaps that was intentional, as was Jaune being half mechanical like the snow and death around him, but I can't be certain.

No matter, just please keep doing work like this for as long as possible. As I said, the world will be less of what it is now without you
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Very nice overall piece, with the detail on the armor as well as the battle scarring on it lending itself to the gritty realism of the piece. The glowing sword lends a very nice focal point of the piece as well as the sense of a powerful hunter standing victorious over the corpses of his foes. However at the same time I feel like you drew inspiration from fate/stay night on this, as this particular version of Jaune gives me a very Archer-like feel. The shading and colour palette is impeccable, as is the art, lending to a very nice piece. 10/10 would fangasm again.
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First of all, thank you so much for this new piece of artwork. It looks beautiful (as it is with all of your work).
Here are my thoughts about what you could have done better (I am in NO way trying to degrade to verbally abuse you, this is just a bit of constructive criticism).

First of all, I do wish there was something that we could identify to know that this was Jaune. He has a sword yes, and blonde hair, but it's still difficult to tell given that you completely remodeled his design (and it does look amazing nonetheless). If you could give some sort of callback to his previous look, that would be amazing, and even a light blue version of his emblem in the background would be fine. I would like to identify this piece as a work of RWBY and not just a badass beautiful piece of art.

Minor critiques about design: Maybe make the "dark" portion of the sword come about a bit further so that it accentuates the fact the light is coming out of the "dark" portion. Still looks awesome though. Maybe make the shield more of the shape of Crocea Mors, or at least put his emblem on it. It would also be nice if there was a glow to it, to make it look liked the sword.

It's a bit difficult to see his legs, though that's a really minor complaint. Grimm look awesome as usual. And everything else is just...perfect.
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The use of colors is very nice, very dark all around save for Jaune himself creating a nice contrast and bringing the eye straight to him.

Jaunes design in this picture is really amazing, the armor and the cybernetics looks absolutely kick ass and very futuristic. He looks powerful, confident and somewhat sorrowful, I can only imagine that he went through a lot before reaching this point. The shield still being a sheath was a nice detail.

The blurred Grimm corpses help establish depth nicely, and the still glowing slash in the flesh of the Grimm on the right is a great touch. Not to mention the background looks quite cool. (Sorry don't know how else to describe it)

All in all an amazing picture.
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I love the background around him, and how bleak everything looks. The colours blend well together, and enable you to take it all in, but still draw you to the main center of attention: Jaune.

His expression is what captures my attention the most. You can just SEE the sorrow and despair in his eyes, even as he's still standing and fighting. That, to me, is the main attraction of this image. So much emotion if just one eye.

His design heavily reminds me of Raiden from Metal Gear when he's a cyborg, especially in the face area. Still, fantastic!
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1st off how did you do this. I don´t think many people would ever be able to do this but you did in this totally new way. did you need any inspiration on any of this. what is that grimm in the back it looks like one of those elephant ones. the particles in this are spectacular. when and how did he get the suit as well as the new shield and sword which both look amazing and I´m glad that you made it so his fingers don´t just look like blobs thanks for taking my advice from the other one that did for your oc drawings.
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Another nice piece! I really enjoy this vision of Jaune, and how it connects with your previous artwork Goddess. The blurs in the background and foreground really emphasize your attention on him. Your color choice also emphasizes the bleak atmosphere and ambiance as well and the shading, as usual, is excellent. Another element of the artwork I enjoy is the dead Grimm(I think that's what they are) in the foreground, as it shows how far Jaune has become in terms of skill. Once again, Nice job! It's one of the most unique Jaune depictions I have seen and I look forward to seeing your future artwork.
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Oops I accidentally pressed the unfair button!! I'm sorry!! It was a good critique.
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Ok I might be a bit biased since I requested this piece, but hell with it I'm going to critique it anyway.

Firstly, the sword. It draws the viewer in with its radiating glow. Like Ruby's silver scythe in your previous piece, it radiates power. It conveys to the viewer, without any action that this is a weapon that is to be greatly feared. Really impressed with how you upgraded Crocea Mors into this version.

Next, Jaune himself. Despite all his ferocious looks with the beaten armor and augmentations, you can still see a hint of sadness, the last shred of his humanity peeking through that eye. He has endured more than anyone can be asked of to endure, but he still stands, ready to face the next foe. His stance and expression conveys that very well.

Finally the background. I was not expecting the snowy background (or is it falling ash?) but good lord it does the job amazingly well. This is a hellscape he walks, the corpses of large Grimm surround him everywhere, and destruction is all he can see.

Yet he still has his sword, and he will still fight. Fantastic Piece. Thank you so much for the great job you did and I eagerly await more from you in the future!

An Arc Endures
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Holy Shit! Dishwasher1910 never ceases to amaze me, their drawing style is such a great amazement to the deviantart society. Onto the Art itself, Jaune looks incredible, He is the knight Remnant Needs, and the Knight Remnant wants. Pyrrha would be so proud of him (R.I.P Pyrrha Nikos) I can only imagine him, future Ruby, and Future Yang, Kicking Salem's Butt into extinction, along with every Grimm in all of the world of Remnant. this being my fourth critique of this author, and one of the many arts of theirs I have seen, I can tell they will make many more amazing things in the future. Keep up the great work
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It's the Blade of Antarctica.

Very similar in design to the blade of Olympus.
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Jaune opened his eye and took a look at his surroundings. His internal map indicated that he was currently 30 kilometers outside of Vale, but it looked as though the machine worked. He was back in the days of his idiot youth. Back when he was 'vomit boy.'

Jaune couldn't help but smirk at the old nickname. He really was an idiot back then, barely able to hold his sword and shield straight. Hell, he didn't even know what the hell Aura was until Pyrrha had explained it to him and unlocked it for him.

Jaune couldn't help but grimace at the thought of that name... the name of his Forever Fall... the woman who had taught him how to fight. And the woman he loved, and would happily have started a family when the war was over, had it not been for Cinder Fall and Ozpin.


Jaune felt a small surge of anger at the name. But, he would have to keep those emotions under wraps, since there was a high likihood that he would have to work with the old wizard in the interest of setting things right.

A growl sounded from behind him and his motion sensors were picking up something. Jaune turned to see that an Alpha Beowolf was making its way toward him, eyes filled with malicious intent.

Jaune rose to his feet and activated his energy sword, Pyrrhic Victory. 

Only scars remained of the vomit boy he had once been. He had died the same day as his great love, Pyrrha Nikos.

He was the Arkos Knight. And he was here to set things right.
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Is this a chapter 1?
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So...is Jaune a Cyborg here? Like...to compensate for his lack of normal combat skills, he's upgraded to half-robot to be worthy of protecting Pyrrha or something?
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The Force is strong with this one.
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Can I use this in a fic?

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Can you send me a link?
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this sooooo cooll

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as the words of Dr j Robert Oppenheimer once said: I have become death the destroyer of worlds  
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Awesome. I got nothing else to say.
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Huh....reminds me of the Meta from RVB.
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Jaune: Did you forget who I am?
*swings his sword that's cuts all Grimm heads off*
Jaune: I Am Jaune Are! 
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I almost thought that was Arthas........
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Arthas?
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