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CMC: Revelations

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Celestia is a magical pony. So she must've lived in Winterhold College than?

Changed font style, as Makintosh91 suggested. :iconiseewhatyoudidthere: Can't tell if it's better now.
It is.

PART 1: [link]
PART 2: [link]
PART 3: [link]
PART 4: You're here!
PART 5: [link]
PART 6: [link]
PART 7: [link]
Epilogue: [link]
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I see what You did here mister, so shall I start? Thank You...
At the beginning I must say that You made a huge progress during last one. First of all - You finally changed that font and it looks better, really better. You can also try something called in Polish *kapitaliki* - check how it is look and decide if You use it with next one, or not. For me - text suits vector-styled comics...

Next stop - plot. I also see progress. Now it is less chaotic and it is better for this kind of comic-stripes. And great plus for old fashioned galloping joke (Looney Tunes style).

At the end - errors. Not much this time, but I see them perfectly from here. Many, many problems with vectors (why? look at previous ones! only few mistakes!). Mouth inside disappeas, proportions loss and some sharp edges in places where vector should be smooth... Big minus for that...

But after all - it is not bad! Keep up working!