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Let's go back home together - Voltron by Didules Let's go back home together - Voltron by Didules
I tried some sequential art, just to see if I could suggest things and feelings. Did it work ? What do you think ?
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yainedraws Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I..... love....... this.............. and I don't even ship them but!! It's so soft!! And beautiful!!! And I like how you chose to panel it! I don't know how it could be better because I don't do this type of art myself, but I like how it is :D
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Didules Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha I'm a multishipper with some high ships and low ships XD I'm preparing some Plance stuffs now to see if I can also do it XD
Honestly I learn a lot thanks to this kind of stuffs, bc being efficient in a few panels is hard TT^TT I'm repeating myself but it's painful to draw X'D
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yainedraws Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm the same about multishipping, it's so good and uncontrollable hahahahah but lately I'm REALLy into sheith so I haven't being drawing anything else... oh well.
It's good you're learning, soon you'll be a master :D :D
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Didules Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to say... I never considered Sheith until recently but... Yep, def one of my fav pairing now 8'D I mean they just care for each other so much, it's just incredible!!
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yainedraws Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was my first ship hahahaha they are my total favorite. I live for them aouhfdewoufrhuewoh it's just so.. wholesome. It's like you said, how they deeply care for each other!
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Assink-art Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2018
It works very well. It gives a very warm vibe! What I think? I love the piece!

About the sequential art: Ehm... I don't know the names of the Voltron, so I'll just name them Glasses and Blushing here. Hope I don't make any Voltron fans angry with that (wear glasses myself). Have you tried rearranging the panels (thumbnail) to see what the effects are? Glasses looks up, Blushing in the panel beneath him looks down... their eyes will never 'meet' like this. The gloved hand (Blushing's hand?) seems higher than of the Glasses. Just little things, don't take my feedback too seriously.

I love how you worked with the colors. Very subtle and effective. Also, the first panel really draws you in. The panels (in all) give a great feeling of friendship and more. That's all you need!
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Didules Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha, love the nickname you gave them XD
I see what you mean, it's true that I probably should have switched them,, it would have made more sense and also would have given the indication that Blushing is way taller than Glasses, hence the difference in height in the hands. It's actually an excellent advice !! Thanks a lot for the feedback !
I will make sure to be more wary and not always stick to my first thumbnail draft next time I try my hand at sequential things like this !! It's not something natural to me, and i have troubles to make characters interact, so your insight is really appreciated and on point, thank you so much !!!

An also, thank you so much for the kind words ! It's my second try at this kind of "one-page sequential something", so thanks for being so complete when you give feedbacks, it'll help me do even better !!! :D
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Assink-art Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2018
You're welcome Hug So great to see that you always try to do new things and move forward!

Have you read Scott McClouds' Making Comics or Understanding comics? I learned a lot from him (still do) about sequential art and comics, it's inspiring and a bit philosophical.
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Didules Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Everyone is very encouraging and giving me good advices and inspiring me, it's totally what drives me forward !

Aaaaah, I'm ashamed to say I had borrowed it but don't remember anything >< The book started by 10+ pages of "how to define comics" and I didn't even want to do sequential art at the moment so I ended up being bored T.T Maybe now is the time to read it tho, because it's been years ! Thanks a lot for the advice !
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Assink-art Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2018
Glad to hear that it's encouraging. I think that is one the strong points of DeviantArt. Most artists like to help each other grow and move forward.

About the book: You are not the only one who has said that to me :) (Smile)   Maybe it is only interesting if you are really into sequential art and comics, because of the philoshophical approach in the book. But I love how he approaches the artform.
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Didules Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
It is, and we can get more feedback than any other social network !

To be honest, the definition in itself and the questions he asked were interesting now that i think of it? I really think I read it too young when i just enjoyed reading comics but wasn't curious nor interested on how it could be possible to make them, what it means to make a comics, what's their peculiarities. Now I regret lending the book and never getting it back ><
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Starr-Lani Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know punk isn't canon but Jesus Christ i ship it still
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Didules Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
As for now, no ship is canon so every ship might as well become canon ! Besides, it's cool to ship, and Pidge+Hunk somehow gave use reasons to ship  39 
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