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Illumination by DianaVVolf Illumination by DianaVVolf
I think and hope this piece of art of mine will be on an exhibition in February, in the local Community House :happybounce: Hope you'll like it :meow:
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I find the use of lines here very well handled both as framing guides and as leading lines. I like how the rows of the windows converge towards the lighter part of the frame, drawing the focus to the centre.

Now comes the part that is kind of conflicting for me. While the eye gets drawn to the centre from the bottom of the frame both by the leading lines as well as the tonal change from dark to light, the break in the frame in the upper left third intersection also draws the eye towards it and leads it out of the picture. Due to the vignetting my gaze tends to bounce back towards that bright spot.


What I would suggest is to rotate this image 90deg counter clockwise so that that bright shaft of light originates from the bottom left corner of the photo. This way this and all the well-aligned windows lead and make the gaze converge towards the centre of the image where it rests :)
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PABLOPACHECO Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016
Nice piece. Love it
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:iconmorningstarskid:
morningstarskid Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:   Awesome!!! :la:
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you *_* :heart:
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:iconmorningstarskid:
morningstarskid Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:nod:
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:iconunexperienced:
UNexperienced Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
nice compo
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you <3
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Anastasia-Aleks Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh the lines! *-* Excellent 
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! *-* :heart: 
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:iconfiazi:
Fiazi Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Love the way you capture ...   :wow:
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:huggle: :meow: Thank you! :heart:
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:iconrikitza:
Rikitza Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013   Photographer
Original POV :)
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww: 
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LeanneGPhotography Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Professional Photographer
Composition is bang on, shapes and perspective drag you into the photograph. Just beautiful :)
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww: :huggle: Thank you for your lovely comment =$ mean a lot to me+ :heart: Really!
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H3ad0n Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
Hi Diana,

This is a splendid piece of art.
Great balanced compositions with the dark side of buildings and the bright light of the aperture, full of meaning.
The lines are pure and straight.
The perspective is sustained by gradation of tones.

Splendid!

Best regards,
Patrick
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DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww :aww: You're too kind :blushes: Thank you sooo much for these great words =$ Mean a lot to me! :heart: :huggle:

I hope you have a great day :D
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H3ad0n Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
You are welcome :)
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Teddy-Cube Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
great shoot
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :aww: :D
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:iconjimenopolix:
JIMENOPOLIX Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A Minecraft building! :XD:
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
xDDD LOL I've never heard thing like this before X"D It was so random x3
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JIMENOPOLIX Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, well, look at the building! It's square all over! Simple enough to build on Minecraft! :XD:
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:XD: omg so random people from the world xD
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JIMENOPOLIX Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah!
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:iconsomethingnotmatter:
SomethingNotMatter Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wooow! I see that you made a progress! I really like this photo :)
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ohh =$ yes! thank you so much *-*
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:iconoptionator:
Optionator Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful symetry! :+fav:
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I tried my best! :D :huggle:
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:icondancrystalis:
DanCrystalis Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
lovely lines and perspective in this, looming enclosure :)
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DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww: I've learned two new word from you =$ andof course Thank you for the lovely comment :meow: Cry cat Icon x3 
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DanCrystalis Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
haha you're welcome :aww:
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LordLJCornellPhotos Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful composition and superb b/w :clap:
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DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww::huggle::heart: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you think this *___________*
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LordLJCornellPhotos Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
my pleasure. this really is excellent :hug:
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:iconjhale66:
Jhale66 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
It should be...so neat and interesting to look at!
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!I'm really glad you like it *___________*
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JohRo2012 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is the most interesting photograph i hav seen today!
It reminds me a dream that I had!
You chose a very good angle! :)
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww: This is so honorific! *.* Thank you soooosososoo much! :huggle:
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:iconaxelach:
AxelAch Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Photographer
Great point of view!
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! *-*
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Der-Kommentator Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Brilliant photo. It took me some seconds to understand "what" iam looking at :D
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
What a lovely comment awwww :heart: Thank you soo much, I'm reallyreallyreally glad you like it *-*
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Der-Kommentator Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
At first i thought it was some kind of washing room like those in youth hostel. On the right it looked like mirrors and washing basin. The center looked like some kind of special window.

But then..4-5 seconds later i realized its just a building shot from the bottom straight to the sky. :D
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DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ohh :D This is only our house's garden ^^ but I like your idea :meow:
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Favenatig Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! So cold photo.. :clap:
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :bow:
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NorbertKocsis Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Nagyon szép lett! :love:
Csak így tovább, még sok sok hasonló szépet szeretnék itt látni! :aww:
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DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Okés :blushes: Igyekezni fogok! Köszi mindent!
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craigbutikofer Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Professional Photographer
Does the purchasable version have a watermark?
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:icondianavvolf:
DianaVVolf Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes it has... why do you want it without watermark? :D
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FUJIFILM
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FinePix S2800HD
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Jan 1, 2013, 12:12:47 AM
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