Well, it has to be said, this is a lovely lettering work!
I really like the technique you used here: it gives a very tridimensional effect and it looks very clean and simple at the same time. The mix between the striped texture and the dots for the shadows works really well, and also the different angle of the stripes for each word helps a lot in making them separate and well-legible. The use of black for the "cut" part of the words gives a nice 3d effect to it. I also like the outlines, they've a good flow (there's some imprecision, but that's normal).
The only tthing I don't like much is the angle of the photo, just because the perspective looks very strange like that (the piece of paper is larger on the right than on the left), I'd rather have the perspective bottom-up than right-left, and generally no perspective is even better to me...
Very good job nonetheless! I wish you to find someone to dedicate this to! ^^
on behalf of ProjectComment