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Planescape comic - strip 12

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the plot thickens, i like how the story is fleshing out but so far the only real detail that kinda grags it down is the use of pantomime images, i think that in a medium where dialogue has to be succint and punchy these are out of place, unless the pantomime is the manner in which you are conveying your story, aside from that i think the lack of panels and all the empty areas of the pages might be the root of some people's critiscism.
Once again the facial expressions are the best thing about this page. They really do convey a lot. For example one can definitely perceive the paladin's suspicion and a hint of contempt in the third panel.
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Paladins are always like that, you know. Never liked'em. :)