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Rabbit Hole - 02

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Published: February 24, 2015
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Pit is better than chasm (which I used in the first version), I think.

See you tomorrow!
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SunCat0Hobbyist Digital Artist
the pit at the top reminds me a of a mouth, not an open mouth, but clenched teeth.
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
Oh my, what an creepy thought.
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SunCat0Hobbyist Digital Artist
Even though I don't usually like creepy things.. if it's coming from you I'll take it *^*b
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Hee, kuinka jaksat olla niin tuottelias kun sulla on näitä improja ja pikkusarjiksia vähän väliä : D 
Tää vaikuttaa jännältä. Tulee jotenki vibat sekä Edgar Allan Poen tuotannosta että Ruohometsän kansasta.
Hyvällä tavalla siis!
(Mikäli muuten et oo lukenut Poeta niin suosittelen lämpimästi! : D)
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
Sarjakuvat ovat elämä. :la: Mut tätä on tosiaa about 40 sivuu varastossa (2 vuotta sit alotin lol..) nii aattelin et mul on täs hyvin aikaa lusmuillen piirtää sit jatkoa kiireiden ohella..!

Kiitos! n__n En oo Poehen (taivutetaanko noin..) tutustunut. :u Kiitos suosituksesta.
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Hu hu! Itellä onnistuu just ja just yhen sarjissivun piirto :'D
Mukavaa että jotkut on tuotteliaita, ja näis sun sarjiksis 
on ideaa!

Oleppa hyvä : D
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ohnoe
dont tell me this bunny needs to jump in there D:
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
It's not looking good for the bunny..
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KorwynzeHobbyist Digital Artist
Noooo
RevRun14's avatar
So far, while the art has improve, the comic itself has the same feeling as the first version (I read it just for this comic!).

Personally, I thought that the first comic did a great job in just 10 pages, so as right now I'm leaning more towards the first version as the two are running on the same course. However, I have a feeling that the difference between the two won't be seen until later in the comic. Thus, I'll wait some more before drawing any more conclusions.  
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
Yes, the first 7 pages will be pretty much exactly the same, more like remakes of the first comic. After that, it will change into it's own new thing.

Hopefully you'll enjoy this new comic nevertheless. n__n
RevRun14's avatar
Okay then.

Its too soon to judge the comic on the whole just yet, but I hope so too.
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TimeglitchDHobbyist General Artist
I'm new to this story, but the artwork looks amazing! (and creepy...)
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
I hope you will enjoy it then! :> Despite it being creepy..!
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Pink-DoodlrStudent Digital Artist
I've read the whole story before, but this version is much better OvO
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
Thank you! n__n This is going to be a lot longer version, 50+ pages in total I think! Unlike the original, which had 10.. XD
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The-Skykian-ArchivesHobbyist General Artist
I just love the way you can use a limited color palette.
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
Thank you! It's very fun to work with. :>
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vindurzaHobbyist General Artist
Well heroes or the mentally ill
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
XD omg
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vindurzaHobbyist General Artist
lol sorry just popped into my mind thinking who would go willingly into a disturbed place like that
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Moonrose95Hobbyist General Artist
Omg, I'm totally going to read all of this. *^*
Amazing.
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DetrahStudent Digital Artist
I hope you'll enjoy it! n__n
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