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:bulletblue:Give written credit to me for the lines "Lineart by *DestinyBlue" something like that, so people who who drew it.
:bulletblue:Include the thumbnail to this deviation where posted on DA, or a link where posted elsewhere so others can find it.
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I request:
:bulletblue:Please at least attempt to add shadows and highlights, I offer this as a tool for you to learn, if you just flat colour you wont learn anything, think about her character, lighting, mood, and get creative :D

welcome to post and colour as usual

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think the overall composition is good and I love the poses and the costumes except for the hands of teh top girl. I think you're just a bit off on the perspective of them. For instance, the index fingers and the thumb are right but the rest are not in a cascade or sorts - they should be shorter as as it moves away from the thumb.
Here is a link to ahnds which I think may work better - or something you can start from.[link]
Hope it helps! can't wait till it's done and I can give a shot at colouring it!