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Would Someone Please Tell Her

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Would someone please tell her
She's not as bad as she thinks,
That when she's told to fly or fall
She doesn't have to sink?

Would someone please tell her
To give herself a chance,
That when she speaks about herself
She doesn't need to take such a darkened stance?

Would someone please tell her
The world is full of love,
That even if not found on earth
She'll find it up above?

Would someone please tell her
Not to throw her life away,
For there's always someone who'll miss you
And wish they could have saved.
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Guinevere-X's avatar
Once again, so beautiful!
Guinevere-X's avatar
You are quite welcome!
klevry1's avatar
Would someone tell them not to tell a lie
Not to make promises then without a word say goodbye?

Would you tell her not to push me down?
Telling me that the world only wants to see me drown?

Would you tell him that I am not below
something insignificant for him to bestow?

Would you tell them their words hurt me dear
scarring far within where they never appear?

Tell them all please, I wish them to know
as I slide this blade upon my wrist...then let it all go
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Dudet19's avatar
you made me tear up. great job. 
DespicableMe1's avatar
Haha thanks? Sorry for the tears.
Dudet19's avatar
no they're good X) they're not you kicked me in my shin tears, they're holy shit this is good tears
DespicableMe1's avatar
Haha well that's good to hear then!
Shinseinasenshi's avatar
Very nice. :) Hope all is well with you.
DespicableMe1's avatar
It is indeed, thank you :)
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