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RotG: sample chapter

                                         Chapter 2 (Karin PoV) Start Date: May 15th, 2203        "So, the UEF finally gives us an opening, so I guess it is now time to give them our message, if you get my drift." A scruffy looking, middle aged man in a navy blue suit said to a woman with short red hair in a black blouse in front of him. The blouse opened a bit, a tight white undershirt underneath it all, showing her toned body. "That is why I had requested you meet with me today Karin. Seeing as you know that specific region of the ghetto more than anyone else here, and we have but 3 days to prepare." Karin just smirked and said, "As long
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RotG: sample chapter

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RotG: sample chapter

                                         Chapter 2 (Karin PoV) Start Date: May 15th, 2203        "So, the UEF finally gives us an opening, so I guess it is now time to give them our message, if you get my drift." A scruffy looking, middle aged man in a navy blue suit said to a woman with short red hair in a black blouse in front of him. The blouse opened a bit, a tight white undershirt underneath it all, showing her toned body. "That is why I had requested you meet with me today Karin. Seeing as you know that specific region of the ghetto more than anyone else here, and we have but 3 days to prepare." Karin just smirked and said, "As long

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Well, been long enough since I have done anything on here. Not closing or anything, still gonna keep things up. I just haven't been making art anymore and my writing has taken a completely different direction than what I was going to do.  Fact is, I ...

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hmm

well, ive lost track of the number of times i have redone the story. I am now thinking on wether to keep the mechas as they are (they are basically "gundams") or make them somewhat more realistic IE: Wanzers from the Front Mission games, OR Armored Cores...

Work on my story

Work on my story

well, ill be using the journal to post updates on progress for my story. I can say one thing though, I can work on it for a few days and just ignore the story for a month, dunno why, I just do. --- Started over: 5 times --- Chapters written so far: 5 --- Long term chapter goal: Whatever is needed to  finish it in its entirety, can easily span multiple books. --- Approximate pages written so far: 90 Character Listings (well, for the most major characters so far.) *I have done mary sue litmus tests for the characters, the site ive used in question is http://www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html* Laguna Kyros --- Point of View Character #1

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Ladyfirefly Digital Artist
Thanks for the :+fav:!
MatesLaurentiuProfessional Digital Artist
Thank you for visiting again and for faving Bones :)
MatesLaurentiuProfessional Digital Artist
Thank you for the fave on Luke Vander Vegan. Glad you like it :)
No, thank you for a very impressive drawing. Brings back memories of my old D&D group. Its more than worth it.
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Thanx for the fav!
staino Traditional Artist
Thanks for the :+fav: :thanks: