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January 27, 2013
Steampunk Romance by =Deltamike, also suggested by =Sandra-Cristhina, *Rae777, =MachiavelliCro, and `Minato-Kushina
Featured by Aeirmid
Suggested by Dani-Owergoor
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Steampunk Romance

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"Climb the sky, swim in the clouds. That is all what I want.
There are no walls or only there we built."


I want particulary thanks Sandra :iconsandra-cristhina: For her nicely support.. Thank you dear, this one is for you!! :icondeltamikeplz:

Stock used:

Redhead girl & Rose: :iconkime-stock: [link] :iconla-chatte-noire: [link]
Sky & Background: :iconsilber-stock: [link] [link] :iconysaeddastock: [link] [link]
Pavilion & Nature: :icongrinmir-stock: [link] :icontanathe: [link]
Other stuff: :iconiquitcountingstock: [link] :icontigg-stock: [link] :iconhakeryk2: [link]

Personal Stock
CG Textures

Thanks all of you! :heart:

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danial2012's avatar

woow i really love the idea

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Le-Papillon-57's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Comme d'habitude, très bien agencé, une ambiance et un univers bien posés : on est tout de suite plongés dans l'ambiance de la scène ! A ça, j'ajouterai le travail de la lumière et la petite impression d'éblouissement au niveau de l'homme, qui donne effectivement cette impression de réalisme, qu'il n'est pas collé comme ça sur un décors mais qu'il est devant un Soleil bien réel.

Les deux personnages ont l'air faits pour cette scène et être présentés ensemble, ce choix également est tout à fait pertinent ! L'appui de l'homme sur une des cordes de son "bateau-avion" est aussi un petit détail qui ajoute du réalisme et de l'équilibre à la scène.

En somme, un travail magnifique à petite comme à grande échelle <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Félicitation pour la DD bien méritée !
Deltamike's avatar
Merci encore une fois pour cette belle critique! ^^
krazysidhestudios's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Let me start off by saying, I really like this image. I love the idea of it and the emotion behind it. I like the feel and the tension in the composition between these two characters. The whole thing makes me smile, and want to dream up stories for these two.

However, there is one major detail that really jar's me out of this picture and makes me imagine dreadful endings. With the rope that's anchoring the male character to the ship hooked over the same shoulder as the hand that's holding the rope... realistically the rope isn't going to stay on that shoulder not with his body turning outwards and his shoulder dropping down as he reaches out with the other to give the girl the rose. If he isn't going to tumbling off into space the rope would need to cross the body and go over the other shoulder.

Similarly the ships light hanging beneath his feet has a sharp tilt or movement to it. However her hair appears static. The ships light might be moving because of the wind or the ship's movement. If the wind is that strong it would affect other areas of the image. If it's the ship’s movement then it would make his perch even more precarious because the wind is pushing him out of the rope.

Yes, these are fairly small details; however, I've found that it's the details that often get me the most. I can overlook the ships light moving and write it off as ship movement. I really do love the idea and the vision of this image. Keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
MusicSavesSouls's avatar
I agree with most of this, but the rope is more stable than it appears since it happens to be wrapped around the arm twice and his right foot is over it. Not saying it wouldn't slip off his shoulder though~ (:
krazysidhestudios's avatar
Oh, I agree that there is some stability there.
Itti's avatar
Oh god you're right, the rope is totally going to slip off his shoulder :fear:
BDStudio's avatar
originality is def a 10 so i did unfair.
DM8954's avatar
Fair or unfair has nothing to do with whether you agree with the critique or not, just if it has a reasonable basis and judges the work on its own merits without attacking the work or the creator.
krazysidhestudios's avatar
To each their own opinion. :)
Itti's avatar
Sadly dA only lets you give up to five stars.
Deltamike's avatar
Thanks a lot for this great critique!
krazysidhestudios's avatar
You're welcome, thank you for the wonderful image. :)
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KehXKeova's avatar
This is so beautiful!! :heart:
TheSunDog92's avatar
I want this to be a movie
VioletInfinitio's avatar
Beautiful artwork!
I would LOVE to purchase a print of this!!!!
fbronnie's avatar
Hello,
Great work!
Is there any chance I could use this photo on a book?
I'm writing a book about steampunk jewelry - "How To" or "Do It Yourself" kind of a book.
Besides my own jewelry projects, I would like to illustrate it with some steampunk images like the one above.
allaina85's avatar
I love this! well done! 
YachyLintuSolid's avatar
"Climb the sky, swim in the clouds. That is all what I want.
There are no walls or only there we built..." I love it! Rose 
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