This is a story/ manga I am going to make which the characters were featured by my friends. Its fun to make yet it took so long. >=<;;
Stories usually take a long time to get together. I used to be in a club that we would write out and draw out graphic novels. As a writer, I liked it, but it took me 3 months to get the basic storyline wrote out. Other than that, I want to say that the characters are very well drawn. Good job!
Thank you very much for your advice and I think it is also good to at least think out of the box to create a good story-line ^ ^ Maybe try out a wellknown story and try featuring your friends as the characters it will certainly help
No problem. And we were told we weren't allowed to do that for our stories lol We had to come up with something completely unique. But it was fun nonetheless
Nah~ alot of Alice stories are scattering in Japan, its true that it is the original Alice in Wonderland, but its better to change it... urrr... oh! like 'Alice in the Country of Hearts' or 'Are you Alice?'. So its pretty normal, unless all stories are used xD
the king and hearts and whoever is in the bottom left corner looks adorable~