when i came across you the first time
you were still very tart and somewhat bitter to taste
i watchted them pick you up
i watched them put you in that bag
i watched them place you in the kitchen drawer
i paced across that kitchen counter
listening for anything
never once did you make a sound
never once did you make a move
you just existed there in your paperbag
soon the air was pungent and saccharin
wafting between the scent of stale cardbaord
i waited
i waited
i waited
the smell grew stronger
i was overwhelmed
soon i just drifted away
then a week had past
swollenly over ripened
you just tumbled out of the bag
they consumed you
bite after bite after bite after bite after bite after bite after bite after bite after bite
sweetness and nectar lingered
after each tear at the flesh
life clung to their lips
it was swfit
it was quick
it was merci
what came from the bag
a beautiful piece of fruit
returned to the bag an ever more beautiful
applecore.
Deborah-Valentine
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Current Residence: Kalifornia Print preference: cmyk Favourite genre of music: Eelectronica Favourite photographer: Diane Arbus Favourite style of art: surrealism Skin of choice: thespook Favourite cartoon character: ranxerox, nemesis the warlock Personal Quote: "your vision of jesus christ is my vison's greatest enemy" ~ Dead Man |
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The elements you have chosen give an excellent sense of vertigo and a feeling of disorientation. Colored rocks line a pathway toward th...
Journal History
- Sep 13, 2013 How much money would you want for your artwork
- May 7, 2013 The Beth Moore-Love Documentary
- Apr 10, 2013 Thanks to all
- Feb 21, 2013 Devious Journal Entry
- Sep 8, 2012 Thank You Chaoskatie
- Sep 7, 2012 The Surreal Arts Needs Administrators
- Aug 28, 2012 A bit of light
- Aug 6, 2012 I am overdue
- Jul 24, 2012 Thrive
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