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Etiquette and Redemption IV
By deathshadow1991   |   Watch
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Published: December 27, 2011
After getting through this one i don't think the last two pages are going to be a problem, after page extensions, file corruptions and having to walk through rain to submit this I feel that I have achieved something with this page XD. Anyway, 4 out of 6 done and still keeping up with the update every other day, wish me luck and see you all again on wensday.

Edit: switched Lyra's text so everyone can read it

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: *zelda "get" music*
Page 5: [link]
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TheUnrealChrichan's avatar
You should really draw the pony who is currently speaking with their mouth open. Now it looks like they're using telepathy...
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well a combination of time constraints and other stuff led to a few problems, plus this being my first comic with actual dialogue the poses where more for the emotion and I was trying to make them quickly. I will keep your advice in mind in the future though.
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vsbloom|Hobbyist General Artist
panel 9: "person" dont u mean pony?
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nintenstar's avatar
Loving this! Don't stop!
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deathshadow1991's avatar
don't plan to, not till i win that tablet from equestria daily ^^
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RoyGBiv-MLP's avatar
It's "too" not "to" in the final two panels, FYI. Other than that, looking good!
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deathbyrobotunicorns's avatar
Oh gosh
Your signature
It is so true
I've never read something so honest
It's like my life in one sentence
Wow
XD
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RoyGBiv-MLP's avatar
I get that a lot. :D
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deathshadow1991's avatar
a quick fix, for all the crap that has been going on I'm glad that that's all that's wrong, I'll have that fixed soon
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sellyme's avatar
And if you're going to fix that, "Nopony" would be better than "No pony" in the tenth panel.
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deathshadow1991's avatar
thanks, I'll add that to the corrections list.
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